[Champion Concept] Haider: the Beast King

Rew711·9/10/2014, 10:02:18 PM·1 votes·641 views

Haider is a fighter/tank.

Haider uses rage when fighting.

Lore:

Haider was born a hunter, and to be the greatest he had to train hard by living in the wild. He was sure that when his time came he would be honored by his father as a mightier hunter like he was. But that was never to be. By the time Haider turned 6 his father found himself a new prodigy in a young cub he happened to rescued on a hunting mission. Rengar was a true hunter. Raised up the wild as a true predator, he was the favorite of the two as Haider saw it. No matter what Haider did, Rengar would best him.

Eventually, Haider had enough. When Rengar eventually set out on his own, Haider did the same to prove his worth. Life in the jungle was harsh for Haider, and he eventually came upon a sickness that would take his life in 2 weeks. Rengar learned of this and hunted Haider down to check on this condition and decided to set out for a doctor to help. Frustrated that his brother would be the one to save him, Haiger set out on his own to find a cure himself. 1 week and 6 days passed and he had yet to find anything to help him. It was then at his last few hours of life that the voodoo shaman appeared.

He saw Haider in his state and gave him an ultimatum. If he were to cure his disease, it would cost him his humanity. Haider knew he had no choice. He was then overcome with power, his body grew not just in size but hair, claws, and fangs. He gained a long black main all around his head that went a good length down to his shoulders. A short muzzle appeared with bright yellow eyes, a tail grew from the end of his spine, and ears poking through his main. Haider stood in amazement at this new body and that his life was now no longer in danger. He thanked the shaman for his kindness and went to test his new abilities.

He gained new speed, and power. A roar that echoed for miles. He easily tracked down his brother to his home to where he learned that Rengar had completely forgot about his brother's illness and found himself good prey. When Haider asked about this new prey Rengar spoke of, he snapped at Haider to not interfere. That's when Haider grew his most angry he'd ever known. That's when the power he never knew of was shown.

Stats

Health: 413 (+91 per level) Health Regeneration: 6.2 (+0.76 per level) Attack Damage: 55.21 (+2.8 per level) Attack Speed: 0.558 (+2.58% per level) Armor: 24 (+2.8 per level) Magic Resist: 30.3 (+0.9 per level) Movement Speed: 340

Kit

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/257/e/2/icon_1_by_rew711-d7z7j9k.jpg Passive Beast Heart: When Haider gains a full 100 rage, he becomes inflamed and deals an additional 35% of his current attack damage.

Q Upper-cut: Haider slashes upward dealing 1 x/1.5 x/2 x/2.5 x/3 x (the amount of rage gathered) (+100% attack damage) to the enemy targeted, near Haider. No Cost Cool Down: 10 seconds Under work to find better ability.

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/257/7/c/icon_1_by_rew711-d7z7j9k.jpg W Marked: Haider marks a targeted opponent that allows him to deal bonus damage to that enemy for 4 seconds dealing a bonus of +20/+30/+40/+50/+60 per hit. If rage is at a full 100, the bonus increases to +40/+50/+60/+70/+80 damage per hit. The target can be targeted if in the perimeter of the circle in which they can be targeted. If they leave Haider's perimeter they are still targeted until the 4 seconds wear off. No Cost Cool Down: 13.4 seconds Range: 820

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/257/1/f/icon_1_by_rew711-d7z7j9k.jpg E Peace of Mind: Looking for a better name. Passive: Haider gains +1/+2/+3/+4/+5 life steal when active. Active: Haider heals himself by sitting down and meditating. He does this for 5 seconds. The meditation can be discontinued or interrupted by enemy players. He gains back health for 10/15/20/25/30 (+0.5% of health) per second. No Cost Cool Down: 15.6 seconds

R King of Beasts: Haider sets himself ablaze and flairs forwards to a targeted opponent. The opponent cannot flee as Haider collides with the opponent dealing 100/200/300 damage (+110% of attack damage) to his opponent. If Haider has 100 rage when using this ultimate, then the power is increased to 120/230/340 damage. After the attack, Haider gains 10% bonus speed and the opponent has a burn effect for both in 2 seconds. The burn effect deals only 4/5/6 damage per second. Haider is able to target his opponent if they are in his circle's radius. No Cost Cool Down: 56.7 seconds Range: 815 Looking for a better ability.

Jokes: 1 (Haider will raise his hands in alarm and looked shocked.) "Ah, was that lightning!" 2 (Haider looks around in confusion. Then has that thinking look where you put you hand on your chin.) "Wait, this isn't the savanna." Baron 1 "That thing is bigger than I thought it would be." 2 "I bet Rengar doesn't have this on his wall yet." Caitlin 2 Your traps are good. But can they catch a large man-cat?"

Taunts: (Haider looks ferrous and then lets out a roar.) "You thought you could best me?" "You are not worthy to hunt." "I am the king of the jungle!" Rengar "I'll show you who's best." "I am the alpha male!" Nidalee "You are nothing but a wild animal!" "My fire is stronger."

Dance: (I don't know of any good dances.)

Laugh: (... He laughs.)

Moving: "I can smell their fear." "Let us begin the hunt, summoner." "This is the path." "Do not fear the path of the beast." "We will show them our might."

Items:

Begin with item 1055.

Then get item 3047, item 3072, and item 3022.

Then get what you believe is else needed.

Finally, Haider has a Red Lion Haider skin.

2 Comments

Leroyswish9/10/2014, 11:24:23 PM1 votes

So, I'll take a bite of this. I'm not the best at judging lore, so I'll say it's alright. The move set doesn't really reflect any "beast-like" qualities, however. The Passive isn't clear; I'm assuming it increases basic attack damage. Also, how does he build rage? With basic attacks? Is there a purpose for rage besides capping at 100? I mean, it isn't a resource here and doesn't do much else aside from benefiting Marked and the ultimate.

I'd personally lower the attack damage. Say at level 18, with 100 stacks of rage and 100 Attack Damage, we're looking at about 400 damage alone, close to an ultimate's damage capacity. It may be a bit much, you know?

Marked isn't that great, no offense to you. +80 damage for 4 seconds is pretty good, but it could get a bit out of hand, especially since it probably applies to abilities, such as Upper-Cut. Now that damage is up to nearly 500.

Peace of Mind's passive isn't a passive, since it is only in effect when activated. It's basically Master Yi's meditate without a shield. At level 18, about 150 health gained from an uninterrupted heal, not counting for the 0.5% of health added.

The ultimate is a strange beast, pun intended. It's basically Warwick's ultimate with the summoner spell Ignite at the end. The cooldown is also ridiculously short, again, pardon if that offends you.

Overall, not too bad a job, but it could use some work. I hope you found my response helpful.

~ Leroy