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[Champion Concept] C: The Master Theif

Rew711·10/24/2014, 3:32:23 AM·1 votes·552 views

Bare with me, this is my first woman champion.

Lore:

I never asked for the gifts I was given. The ability of telekinesis was just the start. I had to learn more.

I was able to manipulate those around me with such little ease. My parents looked at me as if I were a freak. My little sister too showed the potential of the same powers. A sharp mind, and a strong spirit. As I grew, I began to get alienated from the world. Everything began to close on me. It was then that I knew what would have to happen next.

I killed my parents with little effort and to keep my little sibling out of harm I cut off her memories of them. And of me.

Hungrry, I began to take to thievery and began mine own sindicut. A sisterhood. I gathered those from the streets to join my cause. As I grew, so did my power. I never allowed my sibling to grow, as I hold the key to mine own undoing.

So as you can see, C has a very crazy background. Now for the hard part.

Kit

[P] C was here: Whenever C walks over a dead enemy champion, she leaves a card on the champion making them wait another 0.5 seconds x level. [Q] Pressure: C is able to inflict a select amount of damage on a champion for 2 seconds dealing 40/48/56/64/72 damage + 70% Ability Power per second. This ability is not a skill shot. [W] Force: C pushes an enemy back by 740 stunning for 0.8 seconds and dealing 60/70/80/90/100 damage + 65% Ability power. The ability works as a skillshot and only pushes said enemy(ies) only 740 away from C. [E] Mind Protection: C puts a shield around herself or an allied champion to reduce damage and bonus Movement Speed for 5 seconds. [R] Mind Bomb: C deals an automatic amount of 100/150/200 damage + 80% Ability Power.

Cool Downs and mana costs may be revealed later if this post is to the communities liking of C.

Another thought for C instead of a mage (or a mage/assassin) is to be an assassin. But the assassin kit isn't something I'd be fair with so I'll let someone else make a fan concept on that.

1 Comments

Cat Father10/24/2014, 5:10:36 AM1 votes

OK, so I think we need more info, even if this is just a sneak peak.

First I don't see where she is a thief. She doesn't steal any gold, weapons, spells, armor, damage, health, so I am not sure why she is a master thief other than her lore, which... should help explain the character kit/abilities.

Lore: Seems fine, will need connection to the league

Abilities: Passive: I like this as it rewards the player for staying alive in fights especially late game team fights

Q:This is a good ability to get some easy damage sounds really easy to use since its not a skill shot.

W: Force... Starwars? I like this "IF" this champ is a support. It is not a normal assassination ability, like a gap closer or a stun ( which most assassins have). I recommend changing it to a gap closer or a stun... OR if you want to keep it maybe you could change it so that you could push allies aswell ( to assist in ganks or to help get your ally out of harms way ) I guess E could be your gap closer but that speed boost might be a little OP, not sure.

E: This seems like a buffed janna shield, might it be a OP. You would need to test out what type of stats would be balanced.

R: This R is to boring paired with the Q, ( also this is almost the same as veingar ) I think you need to make the R more challenging or more fun. Have fun with it and let your creativity run wild.

TL;DR : Overall, Maybe gear this champ more towards a support, also be more creative with the Ultimate, and finally try to connect the champions abilities to their name. Thanks for sharing this champ with us. That my opinion, hope I helped you in your quest to make an awesome champ!