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Lore: I ran, blood pouring from my body, sweat dripping from my head, my hunting knife in hand. Pure terror pulsed through my body, panic coursing through me. I heard an unearthly noise behind me. I had no choice but to dive into a cavelike row of roots hid by brush. The thing had caught my scent and had brought him very close to me. My hunter thoroughly sniffed an area not but 20 ft. away from me. The claws came down on the roots. I looked up horrified, Blue, wild, cruel eyes stared down straight into my eyes.The terrible claws sliced through the roots like they were nothing. I screamed and dove out of the shelter. The creature easily leaped toward me. Desperately, i swung my knife at it, slicing it across its stomach. It screeched and swung his tail at me. It went through my side. My whole body shook as i hung onto its tail. I was paralyzed. The blade like tail pulled back, giving me another ferocious wave of pain. I lay there shaking, unable to move. The creature stalked toward me, it’s eyes seemed to laugh wickedly at my state. I thought this was the end, i would be eaten alive by this devilish beast. Suddenly, a spear went into the creatures side. It roared ferociously, and suddenly its body was flickering with…... The power of Tsur! Was this creature stronger than our god? The blue bolts became bigger. No….. No! It cannot be! I started to weep. Then a hand came down on my shoulder, it was my father. Son. I could not speak or move. He carried me to his horse and laid me there. I could hear screams, shouting, and the roars of the monster that wounded me. Then i saw the eyes, those horrible, wild, cruel eyes.Only those eyes and darkness. Suddenly i was oblivious to all sound except one i had never heard before. What i heard made a shiver go down my spine, it was a voice. The voice was terrible and unearthly. Jutsu……… How…… how do you know my name….. Suddenly i was able to speak. The voice laughed i knew you before you were born human…… Who….. Who are you….. I am your judgement….. I am Taranis…… No! I opened my eyes, i was on the horse still but in a very different place. I was at the edge of the Kumungu Jungle. It was dawn a terrific red and orange sunrise on the horizon. It was very foggy. My fathers horse was grazing. I leapt off the horse feeling my achy muscles shake and crumble beneath me. I stumbled, i pushed myself up trying to put as much strength in the attempt as possible. I was too weak. But, thank the gods, my horse pushed me. He pushed me towards a stream. The water was the sweetest tasting water i have ever tasted. It gave me strength, i was still weak but it gave me strength. I crawled toward the jungle. I gathered brush and took my horses saddle, went to another row of cavelike roots.And slept a peaceful sleep. When i awoke, i grabbed my hunting knife and drank from the stream again. Gaining enough strength to stand and walk. So i went into the forest, searching for food. I found a vine covered in blue fruit, i took as much as i could carry back to my shelter. Suddenly many creatures came howling through the brush. An all too familiar sound erupted behind me. The roar proclaiming a being’s death. The same reptilian creature came out of the brush its eyes locking on me. The creature was very muscular, its claws glowed blue and its body flickered with blue bolts. It was black as night besides the blue bolts and the blood on it. Its tail very aquatic looking but razor sharp and double edged. It moved like a cat stalking its prey. Its teeth were like jagged swords. The beast raised its claws and slammed them on the ground sending a wave of destruction through the ground towards me. It sent me sprawling into the jungle. When i stopped myself i ran behind a tree. The creature snarled and ferociously smashed several trees trying to find me. Suddenly the creatures razor sharp tail came through the tree i was hiding behind inches from my head. It retracted its tail and knocked the tree down. I ran for my fathers horse. The creature leapt toward me streaking across the plain. I leaped on my horse riding bareback toward the blue mountains. I glanced behind me the creature was easily keeping up with us. It roared and suddenly a blue ball came towards us it missed us by about 50 ft. but exploding causing the horse to stumble. He barely regained and i was on the side of him hanging onto him for dear life. Suddenly there was a thunderous rumbling and soon i saw in the distance a herd of Wuklu (huge horned like creatures) rapidly approaching us. The creature roared and dove toward me trying to get to us quicker. But the the Wuklu had gotten to close, they rammed into the creature. It roared viciously and me and my fathers horse escaped to the mountains. Crack! The rocky terrain cracked, weakened from our weight. I rubbed my arms trying to get as warm as possible. The cold lashed out at us viciously without mercy. The blizzard blinded us. I urged my fathers horse forward. Suddenly through the freezing snow i could make out….. a cave! I thanked the gods and headed towards the cave. As we entered the warmth covered us, it was wonderful. I sighed with relief. I unmounted and laid down with the horse sleeping peacefully. A noise awoke me. Not that roar of death (thank the gods). But a echoing boom…...boom…….boom. I widened my eyes in realization, an avalanche! I awoke my horse and leapt on him urging him to a gallop. The rocks that caused the avalanche plummeted down towards the ground. The avalanche was speeding towards us. Trees flew over the mountain side, the terrain gave away inches from my father’s horse’s hoofs and it kept falling and falling as we galloped down towards my homeland. The avalanche thundered down towards us. I urged the horse onward feeling my hands shaking as i clung to its mane. Suddenly another rider galloped beside me. The riders face was hooded and cloaked hidden from sight. The rider suddenly whistled and a raven as large as a tree came streaking towards us it grabbed both of us and flew away from the avalanche. The horses screamed in terror and struggled but the raven’s talon’s were strong as iron. I glared at the rider for scaring my horse. The rider looked at me suddenly tears sprouted from the eyes that looked at me. I felt a sadness too for a reason i do not know, i wondered who this person was. The raven flew towards the ground and let us loose. I started towards the rider. “Who are you?” The rider looked at me and revealed its face. I stared, my mouth wide open, the rider was not a man, it was my friend Lutra! I stared dumbfounded for a few seconds. Scanning her top to bottom. She was not the little girl of my childhood. She was very tall, black hair stretching down past the shoulders, amazingly blue eyes, very strong arms and legs from years of work in the farm. Her face was streaked with tears and blood. Her clothes tattered and torn. I stuttered out “ Lutra….. you….. why….. why….. why are you here……. what happened to you?” Her lip quivered, another wave of tears flowing from her eyes. “Our village……… its…….. gone!” “ Everything…… gone….. my mother and father were…… dead……” the baby was lying there in the corner…… barely alive scars all over….. (she was now going into a frenzy) i brought her to a shelter in the woods……. she didn't make it”…... “your father and mother are gone!” “ Everyone gone!” “And the thing……” she looked into space as if the thing were there, terrified. “Those eyes!” “Those horrible…… eyes…….” And she fainted. I grabbed her, my eyes flooding with tears now. Everyone and everything we had loved and known was gone. We only had each other. Friends that trust each other and had survived together. I lay there holding her, mourning our loss. When i awoke Lutra was still sleeping, the blue mountains hanging over us like blue guardians. The sky was filled with mist, beams of light shining through the trees. I looked at my horse no supplies and no saddle. I sighed and looked at myself i was covered in dirt and blood, my shirt was torn, and the scar where the beast sliced me on my side was still there. I stood up feeling weak still, and walked towards a tree. I unsheathed my hunting knife and hacked off some branches. I piled the wood and nicked the rock with the knife, sparks flew from it setting the wood aflame. I smiled feeling the warmth spread over me. Lutra began to awake. She opened her eyes and looked at me eyes wide open, for a few seconds then became normal. She smiled “thank you.” I smiled back in response. We watched the flames silently for a while, then finally she spoke again. “So, what do we do now?” I thought for a moment. Well, we could travel to Demacia and make a living there. “And since you are the only person that is alive that i know and trust, you could live with me.” Lutra smiled. “I would like that.” “Alright then, ill get some supper and then onward to Demacia.” After supper we headed towards Demacia. We traveled over rivers, plains, and forests. Then after what seemed like an eternity, we caught sight of Demacia. There was a vast plain before us and a forest behind us, which made us very uncomfortable. It is not at all nice to sleep when a habitat perfect for predators is not but 10 paces away from you.

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