Elexis the volt runner

nasu010·4/27/2018, 5:50:17 AM·1 votes·1,156 views

Within the city of zaun the scientist singed has conducted countless experiments some fatal some favorable and others for the sake of experience this is an account of one such experiment long deemed fatal long forgotten. Time;11:57 Date: xv,llv,xxc "Atmospheric condition are prime,with the onset of this storm we will have enough power for this trial, I shall grant you a new life your body will be reformed and hopefully enhanced,hmm let's just see if your mind shall remain intact". "sounds of chains rattling, muffeled struggles drowned out by the growing roar of thunder". Hmm a few drops of iodine, some powdered silver sulphate,and lastly liquidised taragon crystal energized by an electric storm, stirring, fizzing sounds". "Hmm judging by the color change from the redish sheen to a distinct blue silver of the taragon crystal sublimating into the solution I would say it's complete , squint, hmmm begin training lol bring in the subject" wheels rattle as a Gurnee rolls into the room on it lies a young woman heart pounding she pointlessly sturggles to break free sweat dripping from her sullied face it was clear that she had been kept someplace where there had been smoke or fire for her face had smudges Of soot . Holding the formula in a tubular needle he moved over the fastened woman he injected into into her visibly screaming through her gags Eyes wide and rolling back her body goes into a rythmic spasm tenses then goes limp. Time:12:03 Xvl,llv, xxc It has been about 5 minutes since the experiment the subject remains unresponsive no heart rate can be observed breathing has also stopped and there are no visible changes to the subject which is to be held for further observation after a blood sample is drawn . 4;23,xvl,llv,xxc Subject exhibits no signs of life experiment has failed but the information of the trial will perhaps be useful. The corpes will be disposed of after the break of the unfortunate I had hopes for this trial. Sounds of an van sloshing through muddy water, sounds of a door opening behind, hard drop with splash , sound or van moving away .

Peering through white eyes her gaze lazily drifted off from the van to the sky muted paralysed and dazed from the torture she had endured she lay lopsides in a muddy ditch for a burial was to time consuming and would take away precious experiment time,left as a carrot she could only recollect her life prior to the experiment; Alexa slow down your running all over the place said the voice of her father,Alexa was always energetic and would have easily been a long distance runner had she only listened ,her mind moved to the incedent when a burst from the sky tore the thought from her mind a Pilar of lightning struck the body purging all sound and sight she felt it pulse through her like the flow or thunder roared in her veins echoing through her heart which only then she felt. As though her mind had just cought up to her body she felt her heart beat like a string reverberating to a strum her body had endured the experiment enhanced,hasted but only with the lightening could her mind catch-up she slowly lifetd her self of the ground to her it was slow but in actuality she had jumped to her feet using her hand to raise her everything seemed to move normal for her but she precived it all in slow was her captors vehicle Drew to the site of the pillar she fled in an instant moving in a flash nothing but a blue silver streak was visible for only seconds till it faded this was the last to be seen of Alexa. Since then stories the of the blue streak started to spread about how a blue streak would be seen after a silver wind and that strange things work happen from either food and items goin missing, lives being saved to static clinging to the air and even one story of an emp burst suddenly downing all electrical appliances in an area even leaving some people who were too close paralysed no one knows what the flash is some just say it's a strange phenomenon, to this day the blue flash seems to be a legend . Elexis; before life moved to fast giggle now it can't even catch up.

Elexis the volt runner Abilites Passive: electropulse ;heart beats with speed of lightening axcelerating cell regeneration by building static charges when she moves in her body charges stack to 20 max each charge holds 1%max hp regen and passively increase movement speed by same % .

Q; volt run dashes up to 800 yards in Target direction travels over walls and dealing 80+(40%ap) building max of 5 charged and leaving a light trail increasing allies attack and move speed(20%) while damaging enemies who cross or stand in it for 30+(40%ap) 20sec cd

W;giga jolt fires jolt/sof electricity in Target direction mid range consuming 2 charges dealing 60+80%ap hold to consume more charges and fire a railgun each charge rank consumes 4 charges and applies+ 10% slow for each rank max rank stunns targets for 6secs 4sec CD

E: crystal blooded ;(switch) having crystal blood causes elexis to become unstable after using all her charges leaving her in a Immobile state for 20sec generates a recharge field while stationary to redirect 20% AP damage and 45% ad to surrounding area lasts 10secs Also sets volt rush and giga jolt on cooldown for 16 sec Passive: gives 40% resistance to magic damage but increases slow and tanacity while being vulnerable to physical damage.

R:thunder pulse; expends 10 charges to creat an emp burst knocking back and damaging all enemies in 80 yards for 120+(40%) leaving silver static in the area for 10 sec silver static clings to allies providing attack speed and increase health regeneration for 12 sec

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Stacona4/27/2018, 6:40:26 AM1 votes

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