New Tank Support Champion| Bodyguard Brody

JL KS··17 votes·8,884 views

So, I took time to think about ADC and Support champions RIOT has already released, and up to this point they have created many champions that have hard CC, and Hooks, slows, heals and shields ect. My goal in making this champ is for there to be a hard counter to these types of champions. I’m not making a full lore for this champion, But a basic Idea I had is below: Rough Draft

Short Lore Concept Brody is the leader of a very successful and powerful escort business; Brody’s Bodyguards are known for stopping at nothing to ensure the safety of those who hire him and his men. His name is known and feared across all of RUNETERRA, everyone knows not to mess with Brody and his men and the clients they defend.

Brody’s Gear: A Repelling Shield, A Heavy Spear and Medical Supplies He Carries In A Large Pack On His Back


Abilities

Passive: Repel When hit by an enemy ability gain 1 stack of repel, at 4 stacks you rejuvenate some health over time and your nearest ally will gain a shield for 5 seconds that will reflect the next attack back at the caster in the form of damage taken. If no allies are present you will gain the shield instead. Stacks reset back to 0 after reaching 4 stacks. (Don't veigar Ulty Brody or his allies when his passive is up, unless you wan't to kill yourself)

*****Updated Idea: Same concept but instead of allies automatically getting the shield, after 4 stacks drop a repel shield that you or your allies can pick up.


Q: Heavy Throw (Skill Shot) Brody lunges forward, throwing his heavy spear as hard as he can at the enemy, forcing them back and snaring them to the ground dealing Adaptive damage.

Q damage scales based on max health.

Update: True damage changed to adaptive damage

Adaptive damage is based on the dominant damage stat of a unit:


W: Peel (W1 and W2) (point and click)

W1: Attach While attached your movement depends on who you are attached to, like yuumi. Brody gains increased Magic Resist and Armor, jumps to and attaches himself to an allied champion, minion or turret for 3/3.5/4/5/6 seconds taking the brunt of the damage ally would have received. While attached to an ally your ally heals based on the damage you take.

W2: Detach After detaching gain a short burst of movement speed. Detaching with seconds left shortens the cooldown of W.


E: Fears Tyrant (E1 & E2)(Dash works like shen dash)

E1: Fears Brody lunges at the enemy landing behind them and fearing them in the opposite direction.

E2: Tyrant Reduces attack speed of feared targets for the next 3 auto attacks.

Update: If you don't like E1 or E2 and think its too much, pretend its Removed.


R: Brody’s Defense (global Ult) Brody Calls upon his Body Guards to defend his 4 allies Idea: Bodyguards are like Azir soldier units, they can not be selected to attack and like veigar R they will do their job and their is nothing you can do but stop watch or QSS Q, or Qss E. Brody himself does not get a body guard but the cooldowns of his abilities are halved for 20 seconds.

After casting R Brody’s Bodyguards will appear and accompany his 4 allies around the map. Allies have to order his Bodyguards what to do (Q,W or E). After orders have been fulfilled his Bodyguards will be relieved of duty. Turrets will not stop his bodyguards from fulfilling their duty. R goes back on cooldown after orders have been fulfilled.

When Brody is on your team you will have the option to select what his bodyguards will do for you when his R is up, To use his Bodyguards when Brody's R is up simply select your target (like kindreds mark) and then activate the Bodyguards at the opportune moment By selecting Q,W or E and his bodyguards will do the rest.

Selecting R + Q: Brody’s bodyguards will throw a heavy Spear at the selected enemy and snare them.

Selecting R + W: Brody’s bodyguards will peel you taking the brunt of the damage you would have received, and heal you for the amount of damage they take.

Selecting R + E: Brody’s bodyguards will lunge forward landing behind the selected enemy target, fear them in the opposite direction and lower the attack speed of their next 3 auto attacks by 50%.


R Limitation & Ideas

Idea 1: If an enemy champion has already been selected by another ally you can not select that same enemy champion. While Brody's bodyguards are next to him he can only use W to peel an ally that isn't already being peeled and auto attack. If a bodyguard near him has fulfilled his duty and disappears, Or if they leave the area that Brody is in, Brody then gains access to the rest of his abilities again.

For example: You press R and your adc now has a bodyguard, until your adc orders the bodyguard into an action, and that action is fulfilled all you can do is auto attack and use W on a minion or turret. If your adc orders the bodyguard to use Q or E, Brody can still use his W on the adc because they are not being peeled.


Idea 2: Every ally that isn't being accompanied by Brody gets a bodyguard. For instance, you are bot lane with your adc and notice top lane needs a little help, you press R but because You are bot lane with your adc mid, jungle and top, get a bodyguard, but your adc does not.

If I run with this Idea, that would mean, it would encourage Brody to stay out of team fights so that his team can fully utilize his ult and then after they use his ult he can rejoin his team with access to all of his abilities for the clean up. During the down time Brody can get vision in the jungle, in bushes, and maybe clear vision while his team whoops somemass.


Or Idea 3: When Brody Presses R it is still a global ult but you select 1 or 2 or 3 allied champion to use your ult on, based on level.

For example: You press R and a selection option pops up (like kindred mark). 1 point in your R allows you to select 1 allied champion to give a bodyguard to, 2 points in R you can select 2 allied champions, and 3 points in R allows you to select 3 allied champions.


Idea 4: Brody is not in control of casting R, Just being on his team gives his team his R after He unlocks it at level 6, and cooldowns vary based on when individual team mates activate his bodyguards.

For example: Brody hits level 6 and unlocks R, Top lane immediately uses body guard to snare his opponent, and is now on a 120 second cooldown, Mid lane doesn't decide to activate Brody's bodyguard until a minute after top lane uses it. Mid now has 120 seconds on his cooldowns for Brody's R while top lane only has a few seconds left before Brody's bodyguards comes off cooldown.


Updated: I feel like the people who like the idea I presented do not comment, and the ones that don't like it are more out spoken in their dislike and are willing to comment. After seeing comments, I see whats disliked about the idea, over tuned, had true damage but was removed ect., but If you like it, please leave a comment on why you like it. It sucks spending hours creating a champion design just to have only negative reviews in the comment section. Its like going 30/2/15 and losing in your promos G1 to Plat 4 just to have the enemy team tell you you are garbage. Its sucks lfmaooo :D

11 Comments

ProphetOfDraven3 votes

Braum 2

Nea1043 votes

They intentionally turned the whole game into a hard cc - insta burst fiesta. They don't want strategies to keep your allies safe.

Some examples? Face of the mountain gone, Locket is a joke, Mikael too, their last "supports" were Pyke (LOL) and Senna (LOL^2)... oh Yuumi? They insta-deleted her, and only very recently revived her because of freaking Valentine's Heartseeker NEW SKIN.

This is how this company "works", it has been evident for at least 3 years by now.

JL KS3 votes

Ya, its sad... I feel like If the league community could vote or have a say so when something new is released, we might start heading in the right direction as far as keeping the people happy is concerned. Its frustrating going into bot lane not having an actual support any more, like you said they are all brands, vels, veigars ect. I play cait and lately I find myself in games whether the supports think they are the carries, purposely KSing kills and leaving me to die ect, they do not care to protect you they just want kills, I had a morgana support recently and she refused to black shield me from the enemy lux stun. When I asked her to start black shielding me you know what she said?... she said "Just dodge". This needs to change soon, Like.. I don't even want to play adc anymore because of this support meta. So many champion can lock you down so you can not move for a free kill, So in making this champ I looked to have a counter that aspect of this game. That's how I came up with this champion design, his entire design encourages people to support, and take damage so his team doesn't have to.

SirTauntsALot2 votes

You got some nice ideas there. However his kit looks a bit overloaded and would be very hard to balance. Also aiming to add true damage to a support may not be the best idea. See how much frustration Pyke brings to many people here.

What I did like:

Attaching to your opponent for a period of time and taking damage for them while healing them. Stunning them and knocking them back.

I believe his R and E could be shifted a bit.

JL KS2 votes

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You got some nice ideas there. However his kit looks a bit overloaded and would be very hard to balance. Also aiming to add true damage to a support may not be the best idea. See how much frustration Pyke brings to many people here.

What I did like:

Attaching to your opponent for a period of time and taking damage for them while healing them. Stunning them and knocking them back.

I believe his R and E could be shifted a bit.

Oh ok, I didn't think him having true damage was a big deal because its his only ability that deals any damage apart from his passive that requires him to get hit by 4 abilities before he can even use it, and his auto attacks. And the support meta the way that it currently is, supports with the highest pick rate are ones that deal damage and have good cc to lock foes down (pyke being one of them) , So in order to keep up with that, it would make sense to me for him to have a good bit of damage... I personally this kit fits, it doesn't seem like a reach in my opinion. I'm not against taking out the true damage part as it doesn't actually matter,But ya, what seems over loaded about it? I could see his R being interesting to balance, but nothing else in his kit is a completely new idea, so I don't think balancing would be any harder than any other champ riot has made up to this point, If you compare this kit to aphelios, Brody kit is way simpler and fits with the lore. I imagine his E would have a high cooldown and high mana cost... as far as balancing is concerned that's as far as it would go difficulty wise.

Kintama2 votes

Ah yes exactly what we need. More champions

JL KS3 votes

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Ah yes exactly what we need. More champions

Well, you are clearly exaggerating, luckily for you, Idea's that get posted on these boards, don't actually happen... EVER. So no worries, its just to get creative juices flowing.

Doc Strange1 votes

Im not gonna lie dude, this sounds like some overpowered shit, His passive seems like bullshit way to get punished for attacking him

His Q DOES TRUE DAMAGE, and STUNS,,, thank God you aren't on the balance team His W is literally just Tarics W his E is godam broken

and his ult is just rakas ult but more broken

Do you not know how overloaded this kit sounds??

JL KS2 votes

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Im not gonna lie dude, this sounds like some overpowered shit, His passive seems like bullshit way to get punished for attacking him

His Q DOES TRUE DAMAGE, and STUNS,,, thank God you aren't on the balance team His W is literally just Tarics W his E is godam broken

and his ult is just rakas ult but more broken

Do you not know how overloaded this kit sounds??

Tarics W: Passively increase the armor of taric and any allied champion with Bastion.

Actively shields an ally and grants them bastion for as long as they remain near taric. Taric's spells also cast off the ally with Baston.


Brody W: Peel (W1 and W2)

W1: Attach While attached your movement depends on who you are attached to, like yuumi. Brody gains increased Magic Resist and Armor, jumps to and attaches himself to an allied champion, minion or turret for 3/3.5/4/5/6 seconds taking the brunt of the damage ally would have received. While attached to an ally your ally heals based on the damage you take.

W2: Detach After detaching gain a short burst of movement speed. Detaching with seconds left shortens the cooldown of W.

These 2 abilities aren't very similar, just saying.


Lux Hard CC is literally just morgana HARD CC, senna CC is literally just zoe CC, thresh CC is literally just pyke CC, pyke dash is literally just shens dash,cait CC is literally just jinx CC, voli bears CC is literally just ww CC and fiddle CC, malz silence is literally just soraka silence and any other silence in the game, and the list goes on. They are all extremely similar, So whats your point?


The true damage was a w.e idea, like I said before he doesnt have any other damage abilities so its not a big deal, but you are the second person to say true damage is a no no so i changed it, and yes, supports do tend to have slows and stuns so im not sure what your angel is with that other than you seemingly just wanting to bash the entire idea on my concept. But the funny thing is, every champion thats has been in released in the 5 years I been playing league has been called broken on release. So you saying its broken is like... w.e to me. Your Opinion is that this kit is over loaded. So to address your question about whether I "KNOW" this kit sounds over loaded, after aphelios's release, nope not so much, this kit is nothing compared to that champs kit. You attack sett he gets grit, and in a way you get punished for attacking him, and he still made it into the game, only difference is Brody is a support that uses this kit to help counter these billion champions that root you and hook you for free kills. And he has to get punished in order to even use his passive so its not like it doesn't balance out. He takes the punishment so his allies don't have to, an underlining quality of a good support, and its about time they make a champion that rewards supports to taking hits for their support. And look, their is a 99.9 percent chance that this idea never happens so really, their is no need to get disrespectful over it.

You can disagree with my champion concept, but at least be respectful in the comments, you don't need to insult me in order to get your point across.

The kit may seem like a lot but its really not, Its a lot of words and it being a lot of words makes you feel like its over tuned. I wanted to describe his abilities the best I could to give you all a picture of what the ability is capable of. But really their isn't a whole lot going on with this kit. Maybe The attack speed debuf on E could be taken off. But for creativity and imaginative purposes I'm leaving it up on my post.

s1ut for jhin1 votes

lux stun is literally morgana stun neither are stuns

senna stun is literally just zoe stun senna's isn't a stun

thresh hook is literally pyke hook one has a stun and mobility

List goes on. None of the examples work.

JL KS2 votes

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neither are stuns senna's isn't a stun one has a stun and mobility

List goes on. None of the examples work.

Ok, my point was, they both do the same thing (root in place)his comment was basically hinting that if an ability has already been done before, it isn't viable, and that is what I was rebutting because several champion that riot has released has similar abilities, I wasn't expecting someone to come to my statement and be all specific on whether you can attack or not while being rooted, it seems kind of petty to fact check a generalized topic. If you want to get that specific then his first argument comparing Brody's W with Taric W should have been the first thing you denounced because they are very different if you want to get specific. He clearly wasn't being specific in his statement so why are you then expecting the rebuttal to be specific?


Snare - Just rooted in place. Can autoattack and use non-moving spells. Cleansable. Stun - Rooted in place, cannot autoattack or use spells. Cleansable.

Morgana's Q is not a STUN. Morgana's Q is a SNARE. It stops MOVEMENT. You can still ATTACK while snared, you can still CAST ABILITIES while snared

Lux Q is like Morgana Binding, It's most definitely a Snare.


you looked at my example to negatively critique it,you were absolutely right, morgana and lux abilities are not a stun, but did you look at his? Comparing Tarics W with Brody's W... because based on the standards you applied to my statement, his statement would have also gotten a negative critique, or are we just grouping up on me?

But sense we are being so specific instead of understanding the over all message that they all root in place, use a hook ability ect, I updated my statement to BE REAL GENERAL.

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