give me some critique

had this idea for a poke/space control juggernaut, that relies on a sweet spot mechanic (think Darius Q outer blade inner blade, but spread across all the abilities and on their basic attacks) to make their damage shine. so theyd be a good counter to mid range champs but worse against ones that can force them out of their comfort range

just wanted to know if this was interesting enough to do in further detail, I think it's pretty neat