Ayla, Beauty's Sculptor

The Dreamwalker·8/5/2017, 12:42:15 AM·5 votes·674 views

Hi, welcome to a brand new idea for League of Legends! I am too excited, so let's just get to it. Allow me to present Ayla, Beauty's Sculptor.

Basics

Homeland: Demacia

Friends: N/A

Rivals: N/A

Class: Mage

Lane: MID

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Stats

Health: 476 (+80 per level)

Health Regeneration: 5.2 (+0.56 per level)

Mana: 388 (+52 per level)

Mana Regeneration: 5.8 (+0.55 per level)

Armor: 22 (+4 per level)

Magic Resist: 30 (+0.5 per level)

Attack Damage: 54 (+3.4 per level)

Attack Speed: 0.625 (+1.35% per level)

Movement Speed: 330 (+0 per level)

Range: 550 (+0 per level)

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Abilities

Passive: World of Wax

Enemies killed by Ayla’s abilities will explode and deal 55 (+15% AP) magic damage in a small area of effect around where they are slain. After this, they will turn into a wax puddle that roots any who step on it for 1 second. (Damage increases by 2.5% per level, AP ratio increases by 2.5% for every 100 AP Ayla has, Puddles last 30 seconds.)

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Q: Paint the Picture

Range: 1000

Type: Skillshot

Mana: 40/55/70/85/100

Ayla tosses forth a ball of paint. Ayla may re-activate the ball at anytime to deal 60/95/130/165/200 (+75% AP) magic damage in a small around the ball. Enemies hit are marked with Paint the Picture.

Cooldown: 12/11.5/11/10.5/10 seconds

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W: Artist’s Veil

Range: 1

Type: Self Buff

Mana: 80 (all levels)

Ayla places a new veil over her appearance, making her temporary unable to deal damage and unable to have damage dealt to her for .75/.75/1/1/1 seconds. Ayla can be hit with crowd control.

Cooldown: 24/22.5/21/19.5/18 seconds

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E: Beauty’s Shape

Range: 975

Type: Cone w/conditional CC

Mana: 60/80/100/120/140

Ayla fires a heat wave in a wide cone dealing 50/95/140/185/230 (+70% AP) magic damage to all enemies hit. If an enemy is marked by Paint the Picture, they will be turned into a wax statue that stuns them for 1.5 seconds.

Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8 seconds

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R: People of Clay

Range: 975

Type: AoE w/conditions

Mana: 100

Ayla creates a large, circular field of clay that deals damage upon impact worth 300/450/600 (+80% AP) magical damage to all units hit. Enemies within the field are slowed by 45/60/75% (re-applies if they remain or enter the field again) for 1.5 seconds. If an enemy dies in the field while marked by Paint the Picture, a duplicate of the enemy rises where they die. Duplicates cannot leave People of Clay’s barrier. If Ayla dies in the field, she rises as a clay figure that can be controlled by her summoner. Allies who die will not rise. The field lasts 4 seconds.

Cooldown: 140/100/60 seconds

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Lore (updated):

Ayla Freeheart was born into a rich and powerful family on the outskirts of Demacia, in a small, rural town called Eteria. They have secluded themselves from society, never letting their identity be known. But, there are some that know of the family, but few know the truth of what the family is.

The Freehearts aren't just a prestigious family. They are, in fact, a family of extreme and powerful mages of different origins. Beatrice Freeheart, Ayla's mother, was born with the unnatural talent of melting people into hollow husks with nothing more than a single thought. Nicholas Freeheart, Ayla's father, was born with the ability to warp features of the living world, but not control them.

It was no mystery that nearly two years later, the birth of Ayla and her brother, Aylo, that the Freeheart children would hold some sort of magical power. Aylo was born into the world with the ability to read the minds of other and sway their beliefs. Ayla was uniquely different.

Ayla's magical power seemed to seep through her love for various works of art. Her family noted her strange ability to warp living objects into figures of wax or clay. Ayla even seemed to be able to melt objects touched by her magical powers.

Yet, like all of Freeheart house, their magical power doesn't come without a price. The Freehearts magical power pulls and tugs on their mental health with each passing day, until they fall into delirious that usually brings about their end.

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Artwork

http://imgur.com/HEphoVl

Created and painted by: Laura Sava on Artstation

Laura Sava

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Special Interactions:

(Kills)

Pentakill:

(finger-kiss noise) "Perfection / Beautiful"

(finger-kiss noise) "Bye bye beautifuls!"

Triple / Quadra

"That was fun!"

"AHAHAHAHAH, sillies!"

(Champions)

Jhin:

"I hear you make people beautiful... can I make you beautiful?"

"Virtuoso? I'm a virtuoso, well, a sculptor, but you get it, right?"

"So, you're the man who likes the number four right?"

Jinx:

"I wish more people were like us."

"You're quite exciting... now, I'm bored."

MissFortune:

"Beauty and danger? I rather like you."

Camille / Urgot / Mordekaiser / Viktor (and MECHA, PROJECT skins)

"What a beautiful combination of person and metal."

"I would LOVE to meet your sculptor."

"May I sculpt you? Pretty please?"

(PROJECTS and MECHA only)

"Oh, shiny!"

"You sound strange, I like strange things."

(Skins)

Pulsefire:

"How beautiful is the future?"

"If I make you beautiful now, will be beautiful then?"

DJ Sona and Elementalist Lux (and Khazix / Kayn)

"Oh, you are more beautiful now than ever." (change form)

"I rather like that song... it's perfect, like you." (Sona)

"(insert element) how'd you know I liked that one?"

"Oh, I wish I change a few minor details!"

"I believe I saw others like you a few moments ago." (talking to Sona, if PROJECTs are present on the Rift).

9 Comments

Ndelok Rojo8/5/2017, 4:29:26 AM1 votes

Cool concept! I like her mechanics, they seem well thought out. I am curious though, do you think you could describe her voice? I personally think she might be better fit to Ionia. Though I'm sure you already thought about that. All in all, cool concept!

Arakadia8/5/2017, 10:28:12 PM1 votes

I have some issues with the lore.

Also, a suggestion, don't base your concept's last name off what they do. Freeheart sounds sort of cliche and just "their creatively free and go where their heart leads them". Personally I don't like the last name as it seems really odd that it would match up with what they do. It'd be like if Shana Vayne's last name was Shana Coldbolt or Jericho Swain was Jericho Hexcaster. Its one of the reasons I hate Darkwill's name. Oh really? The evil guy happens to be born with the last name DARKWILL. I wonder what his intentions are...

Anyways.

Alya's powers' origin don't really make sense. Alya and her family are pretty much mages, who would be executed or killed. Particularly because this family of mages is "well known" for their power in a land who hates magical power. In addition, Ayla's whole family seems kind of "OP in the lore". Her father can bend universes and travel in between them, yet he's just a mere demacian noble. He has celestial level power, if not greater, and is just a human noble? That doesn't make sense.

Her entire family should be much greater then just a Demacian noble. Her family can completely overpower Demacian forces. They can fucking bend the universe and MELT PEOPLE with a single thought. That is some insane power.

In addition, it makes 0 sense that such powerful people would limit themselves to being nobles. They seem to be just sitting there in Demacia killing anyone who tries to move them. Why are they so obsessed with Demacia, a place that should hate them for many reasons. Her family kills Demacian soldiers who merely follow orders, messengers, and any who oppose them. Why does Ayla's family stay in Demacia? If they want power and wealth there are other places to be. If they want to rule somewhere they could. They have such extremely overpowered magic in the lore that they could completely take over countries. With the power this family has, it makes 0 sense that they would just sit around in Demacia only using their power to prevent people from moving them.

Finally, Ayla and her family should not be able to have any power in Demacia unless their even more extremely powerful then it would at first appear. Demacia is filled with Petracite, meaning all Freehearts wouldn't be able to cast any magic. The soldiers who come after the Freehearts would know they use magic and just bring a bunch of Petracite, snuffing out any resistance the Freehearts would have.

In general you should probably reread Lux's lore, another mage in Demacia, and Demacia's story and past. But a lot of Aylya's story doesn't make any sense. Someone who can instantly kill another person at the thought of it is by default pretty freaking over powered in the lore. Few would stand a chance and the battles would be boring.