I drew Xayah! [Fanart]

Terozu·Apr 7, 2017·4 votes·1,115 views

http://imgur.com/AqB1S3s Please give me critique on my techniques, I have no deviantart, or anything like it, thx!

13 Comments

zrWQMdGHtYApr 7, 20175 votes

Sorry but the mouth looks like she had an argument with her boyfriend and he gave her a hard punch.

zrWQMdGHtYApr 7, 20174 votes

wtf you downvoting me for? You know very well that I can't lie... p.s i havent even voted on the thread -.-

TerozuApr 7, 20171 votes

one, you commented on your own comment, two, i didn't vote on your comment, not sure who did :b

zrWQMdGHtYApr 7, 20173 votes

These people are trying to censor me ffs! And literally 2 weeks ago half of them said I'm a dictator for wanting a system that silences toxic people... Wtf is this hypocrisy... T_______________________________T

TerozuApr 7, 20171 votes

Lol, thx for the suggestion, I'll try to alter the drawing without fucking it up too badly, i messed with the upvotes, to try to raise your votes, but, well that first comment is still -1 :b

edit - as for moving the chin, I think I'll instead thin down her neck, considering where her head is positioned, that this is about 4/5 the width of her head on side view lol.

TerozuApr 7, 20171 votes

I can't be insulted by this, I know it's true, I was trying to replicate her thick lips, but it just kept coming out worse and worse, then i got this :b this is honestly the best incarnation of her lips, which is really fucking sad.

zrWQMdGHtYApr 7, 20173 votes

Just... Move the mouth to the left... the chin a bit forward and short and done...

Edit: Go downvote me again FFS. I'm trying to help him/her to fix it! DOWNVOTE ME FOR IT TOO...

ArakadiaApr 8, 20172 votes

I would make her lips wider, less obvious, and the same amount as "tall". Her nose could definetly be bigger, I might opt for an "anime" style nose. The eye is fine in look but could be a little lower and towards the center. Hair, hood, and ears are placed perfectly pretty much. I'm not sure how to help with the hair, I would just smooth it out as it has a lot of unnecessary detail with so many lines.

Finally, the shadow on her chin changes too drastically. Either smooth it out or lessen the contrast. I'd be glad to help you on any thing else, just ask. Keep it up!

EDIT: I noticed the chin could be pushed forward a little more.

TerozuApr 8, 20171 votes

Most, I'll agree with, but the nose; look at Xayah's official art, she has a tiny nose.

Kukan SeishinApr 7, 20171 votes

I like it :D

TerozuApr 7, 20171 votes

thx! 8)

MysterQApr 7, 20171 votes

Good job, keep drawing.

I don't have a pick to compare to, but the chin/mouth look a little off. Either on their own would seem fine, but together they just don't seem to line up correctly (in my eyes).

TerozuApr 7, 20171 votes

I would honestly agree with you, I drew the mouth like 20 times and this was as good as I could get it :\