[Champion Concept] Temze: The Whips Edge

Megaverse·12/30/2017, 10:26:04 PM·2 votes·435 views

Champion name: Temze the Whips Edge

Attack range: 125

Spell costs: Nothing (Like Katarina) Temze refuses to use magic of any sort so mana is unneeded

Playstyle: Temze is meant to be played as a ganking jungler/ assassin

Passive: Upon receiving a unqiue kill Temze's passive goes up on tier, there are 6 tiers for each as he gets 0,1,2,3,4,5 unique kills.Depending on Temze's location he may have special buffs. In the jungle Temze gets an adaptive 10/25/40/55/70/85 ap or 10/20/30/40/50/60 ad, in the river Temze's spells and attacks apply a 10%/10%/15%/20%/20%/25% slow to an enemy for 2 seconds refreshing with every ability nor attack landed. In lanes Temze gets 5/8/11/14/17/20 lethality. While in brush Temze gains 10%/15%/20%/25%/30%/35% tenacity.

Q (Chain slash) : Temze slashes his chain whips in a target direction going through enemies and champions armor by 15%. Damage: 80/90/110/120/130 (+60% AD) Cooldown: 7/6/6/5/4 Range: 450

W (Assassins Grace): Temze increases his movement speed by 50%/60%/75%/85%/90% for 4 seconds allowing him to move through minions, monsters, and champions. While increased by this movement speed Temze can carry over buffs from other parts of the map for 3 seconds (Temze can only have 2 of his passive buss going on at one time) Cooldown:20/18/16/14/12

E (Chain Snag) : Temze throws his chains in a target direction wrapping them around the first enemy hit, when Temze hits an enemy with the chains they rooted for 1.5 second and an additional 15% damage is applied to the rooted target as a bleed. Damage: 80/115/130/135/150 (+50% ad) Cooldown: 10/8/7/7/6 Range: 650

R Name: Assassins Mark

R Passive: If Temze has killed a champion before he gets a 10% movement speed buff towards that target

R Active: Temze marks enemies around him for 10 seconds when Temze procs the mark the target takes 100/200/300 (+40% ad) damage and is slowed by 50%. Cooldown: 120/100/80 Range: 550

Tell me what you think, I know I'm not that good at naming things XD. If you think its a cool idea please upvote it and share it with friends. Lore wise I was thinking about making him from a clan of assassins meant to rival zeds?

1 Comments

Aburrimientodoom12/30/2017, 11:39:27 PM2 votes

I have problems with the passive as if it gets an early lead it could be devastating for the enemy team, specially as it has great synergy with the rune of the Domain tree, yet I can see how is balanced around, with a great mid-game, but a terrible late game unless fed.

I would low the movement speed of his W, as I personally dont recommend having a that much mobility when you already have a root, and a slow.

Lore wise, I dont see it as a Ionian or a follower of Zed, but a Demacianm as he rejects the use of magic; maybe having room as a torturer who inflicts damage to those who does not follow the GREAT DEMACIA!!

I would say that the Q has really good stats for the early, yet the scaling let him to a such great late game as mentioned before, but I dont know if it was intentional or not :P

Overall, the concept is good as a basic champion, but I dont see it interesting. As I see, Temze is just a dude who runs really fast, and its going to beat your ass up, by tying you and makeing you slow, and getting more and more powerful as he does so. The most interesting mechanic is his passive and his W. I would say that you could exploit that by having a shapeshifter archetype and base the habilities around that. with this kit you can certainly go in different ways, hope you can nail down the archetype you want ^^