Enoch, the Gears of Insanity [Champion Concept]

DAVIDYUUUUU·5/18/2016, 1:12:17 PM·3 votes·956 views

Enoch, the Gears of Insanity Primary: Marksman Secondary: Assassin

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Enoch is a techmaturgical virus created by Zaunite scientists, designed to infect and mimic the bodies of living organisms and machines alike and transform them into its host. Overcoming its primary programming after taking control of its creator's body, Enoch unleashed itself into the streets of Zaun. It has lived the lives of hundreds, using their bodies as avatars for his passage into this world, even learning to assimilate its host’s own appearance. With such a monstrosity lurking in every corner, the question to ask is: Who can you really trust?

Abilities:

Passive: ABANDON Upon killing an enemy champion, large monster, or epic monster, Enoch's central system disengages from its current host and instead infects its newest victim and channels for 1.5 seconds, gaining health based on 30% of the new host's maximum health and gaining 20% of their bonus attack damage for 4 seconds. Activating Abandon allows Enoch to use the ability Lost and Found for the next 240 seconds.


Q: CORRUPT SYSTEMS (14/13/12/11/10 seconds) First Activation: Enoch detaches a portion of its central system and fires it toward a target direction, dealing 40/80/120/160/200 (+50% bonus AD) to all enemies in a line, stopping upon hitting an enemy champion. If Enoch fires its system toward a wall, or toward a target direction without encountering any enemy units, the syestem will plant itself at the location, remaining there for up to 60 seconds until an enemy champion is within range. After a 1 second delay, the Core then attaches to the enemy champion, dealing 60% of the damage over time for 4 seconds. Damaged enemy units are revealed for 2 seconds. Enoch can only have 1 core system out at a time.

Second Activation: If Enoch manages to kill an enemy champion afflicted with Corrupt Systems, Enoch can reactivate Corrupt Systems to immediately activate Abandon, leaving behind his current host, and reconfiguring his body and teleporting his consciousness to the location of his new host.


W: UNSTABLE INVENTION (10/9/8/7/6 seconds) Enoch utilizes his dual hand cannons to their maximum potential. For the next 10 seconds, upon activation, Enoch's next three basic attacks are empowered and fire a hailstorm of bullets. Each empowered attack deals a bonus 20/40/60/80/100 (+80% AD) damage. If all three of Enoch's empowered basic attacks hit the same target consecutively, the final attack will deal 60/120/180/240/300 (+80% AD) damage as true damage.


E: STATIC FLOW (22/20/18/16/14 seconds) Enoch surrounds himself with an electromagnetic field around him, shielding him from external threats. Enoch shields himself for 2 seconds, absorbing damage up to 14/16/18/20/22% of his maximum health. During this time, 20/22/24/26/28% of the damage Enoch takes is directly applied to his host, if the respective enemy champion, large monster, or epic monster is in range. If his host is not in range, Enoch instead deals a percentage of the damage to enemy units around him.


R: LOST AND FOUND (120/110/100 seconds) (Abandon must have been Activated) Abandon must have been activated within the last 240 seconds to be used. Enoch channels for 4 seconds, slowing his movement speed by 90%, then assimilates its own design with its host, taking on the appearance of its host body and reconfiguring its statistics based on its host for 15 seconds.

During this time, Enoch is unable to attack enemy champions (minions and monsters can be attacked) or cast abilities. 4 seconds after activation, Enoch can reactivate Lost and Found to return to its true form in a burst of energies, dealing 150/250/350 magic damage to all surrounding enemies, gaining 16/18/20% increased attack speed, and reducing all cooldowns (except for Lost and Found) by 15%.

If an enemy champion has vision over Enoch while he activates Lost and Found, Enoch's host appearance will result in a shimmering surface, allowing enemy champions to easily recognize Enoch. If Enoch's current host body is a Dragon, the Rift Herald, or Baron Nashor, Enoch will assimilate with its most recent enemy champion or large monster host.

  • Enoch is able to assume the form of: (All champions, Crimson Raptor, Greater Murk Wolf, Ancient Krug, Gromp, Blue Sentinel, Red Brambleback, Tibbers)
  • Enoch cannot assume the form of: (Baron Nashor, Dragon, Rift Herald, Mordekaiser’s Ghost Dragon)

Lore: Something is different about Maylin lately.

She seems to be quieter than usual. Her mind is just... wandering all the time. She used to love music. She used to play her own violin every day, while I watched with a smile on my face. We used to be happy together.

Now, the violin lays untouched in the corner of the kitchen. Next to the now-cold bowl of soup from two days ago.

"Maylin," I ask. "Maylin, look at me." She turns without a sound, just looking blankly into the void.

"Please, Maylin, what's wrong?" I ask, reaching out for her hand. They've lost their warmth, now only hollow and cold. "Just let me help, ok? Everything will be fine again. Please?"

Her eyes flutter, before looking into my eyes. "There's nothing wrong, Torin, nothing at all..."

Enough was enough. I grab her by the shoulders, and I turn her head towards mine. She looks at me with wide, dull eyes. The first look closest to any expression she's made. The dark circles around her eyes sag, and she feels limp in my arms. It's almost as if she's a dead body, lifeless and broken.

"Maylin, darling. You need to tell me what's going on! You don't sleep! You don't eat! Just tell me, what is happening?"

Maylin looks up, barely, and just whispers, "I'm sorry Torin."

A glint of light blinds me for a second, and then a searing pain rushes through my abdomen. I sputter for breath as I feels a knife protruding from my stomach. Looking up at Maylin, I see her staring at me with newly found viciousness, her eyes darkened, her mouth curled into a snarl.

"Now," starts Maylin, "Where is my husband?" She sinks the knife deeper into my stomach.

A sound echoes from my throat... something like... laughter. "Heh, heh heh heh..."

I feel the skin around my face tearing apart. With a clawed hand, I reach up and rip open my torso, exploding with wiring and shards of metal opening up from the depths of the flesh. The legs and arms expand, leaving behind a pile of rotting muscle and flesh as metallic limbs rise in their place. The skin face melts away as a single, glowing eye watches coldly.

The girl screams and falls, and I slam a steel foot down on her ankle, making a sharp crack. "Your turn."


"Hello Maylin!" shouts Jorrah across the street, waving. "You seem to be doing better, eh?"

I smile, and wave back. "I'm feeling much better, thanks!" I yell back. "Say, would you like to come in for a cup of tea?"

3 Comments

TitusVillain5/18/2016, 4:19:14 PM1 votes

That sounds like a crazy, yet awesome idea for a new champ.

Ýones5/18/2016, 7:03:22 PM1 votes

Hey Davidyuuu! I've come here to review your concept because I'm bored and have nothing to do. Your concept seems interesting, I have to admit, and I can give you some feedback. :)

Lore: Seems pretty cool, but can be a little confusing. Is he a some kind of computer virus that created its own body with some kind of machinery program like Ultron in Avengers Age of Ultron, or is it like a disease virus which is controlled by a machine? Both seem really cool, and I see you have a solid lore here.

And now to the kit! Passive: Seems like a nice idea, I don't care about the numbers because they can be changed easily in playtesting and by nerfing/buffing him.

Q: This ability is amazing, but does it mark the first enemy champion hit with like "Corrupted", 'If Enoch manages to kill an enemy champion afflicted with Corrupt Systems, Enoch can reactivate Corrupt Systems to immediately activate Abandon, leaving behind his current host, and reconfiguring his body and teleporting his consciousness to the location of his new host.' It sounds like it could mark the first enemy hit for like 4 seconds, if he manages to kill the target while the mark is active then he can reactivate it?

W: This ability would be absolutely too strong with these numbers, 300+ or almost 460+ true damage with like 200 AD would be too much for a non-ultimate spell. Yes they can be changed with playtests and other stuff but this would be too much.

E: This could be a solid ability, though numbers need a little bit of work.

Ultimate: I'm not sure about this ability. It could work for an assasin, but Enoch is primary marksman. The enemy team could too easily recognice Enoch if he transformed into a champion so the ability wouldn't be any useful in almost any way. The AoE damage is ok, but the disguise part would be useless in most situations.

Overall rating: Enoch is lorewise an awesome character, I like his passive and Q alot but other spells could use some work. Overall rating: 7.25/10. Keep making concepts! If you have time, check one of mine someday! :)

Cheers!