Tryndamere rework idea Ver. 3

This is my Third attempt of a tryndamere rework. here a link to ver. 2 explaining why i believe he needs a rework: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/reawg6QW-my-tryndamere-rework-idea

But here my newest idea it meant to make him more of a tank or at least be able to build tanky:

passive:

Battle fury: No longer gains crt chance, but now gains bonus damage equal to enemy champion current health depending on how much fury he has.

Also he now gains fury when he takes damage.

For example 1 furry = 0.06 current health so at 50 fury it would be 3% and 100 fury it would be 6% health current health. deals half on monsters.

Q Blood lust: active is the same. Passive: he now gain bonus movement speed depending on how much health he is missing and at 100 furry he gains Reduces the effectiveness of slows by 10%..

W Mocking shout: "new active" : he now taunts all surrounding enemies champions and at 100 fury he fears them instead and 50 fury is consume.

E "new" Surge Slash : Tryndamere next basic attack gains bonus range and causes him to dash to his target and reduce their movement speed. At 100 fury the range is increase and 50 furry is consume.

R "new" Uncontrollable rage: for 5 seconds Tryndamere takes 50% less damage and when he strike a enemy champion the duration is increase for 1 second up to additional 5 seconds. He gains 10 fury each second during the duration.

Tell me what you guys thinks and thank you for reading,