Ark's Gameplay Breakdown #3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EBlRLwQfFAc&index=4&list=PLYGuMNsDtFqhv9TYeYJ1MDdfXKJ7kb6iC

What can I do to make my videos better.

I know I need to focus on the topic of attitude more in this one but other than that, what are areas that I'm doing things right but could do better?