Photos's ChampUp suggestions: a more "jester-y" approach to Shaco

Shaco's lore states that "he jests you to death and laughs afterwards", not that he bursts you down with one E. I suggest thus to remove the E, add mobility and short CC, move all the burst on AP Shaco, all the DPS on AD Shaco, and a reset on kill.

Passive - jumpscare: enemy champions and monsters that haven't been disabled for 10 seconds are feared for 0.5s the next time Shaco damages them. When Shaco performs a jumpscare, his next 5 autoattacks deal 10% more damage and slow for 20%-ish

Q: Deceive. Stealth duration unchanged. 20% speed boost for the whole duration. Leaving stealth fears enemies for 1s in a 200/250/300/350/400 radius area, if stealth is left with an autoattack the target is stunned for 0.5s. No more guaranteed crit. 30% AP ratio on first auto in the 5 seconds after leaving stealth. W: Jack in a box. Boxes now deal 50-150 damage in an area upon springin up (70% AP ratio). 30% bonus ad ratio on dps. Flee duration unchanged. E: Hallucinate: cast with a "vector skillshot" like Rumble's or Viktor's. Shaco blinks at the starting point and a clone at the ending point, and a damaging smoke corridor appears in between (50% AP ratio?). The clone can be controlled but acts randomly on its own (using spells and summoner spells) if not given orders. HE HAS SHACO's BUFFS. 20 sec CD. EDIT: 20 sec minus CDR... that's bullshit. 30 sec. R: 2 seconds of true stealth, then basically trickster's glass if targeted on ally, while if self-targeted gives 5 total seconds of true stealth. Then great movespeed upon leaving state (+60%?). Passive is a reset on cooldowns and jumpscares.

Shaco mains, tell me what you think about it.

EDIT: I jst thought that adding a couple seconds of true stealth, or more if self targeted, would be neat.