I mean I'm only silver 4 but I started at bronze 2 season and I have only like 90 ranked games in my belt and I climbed 3 divisions... I also love talon xD uhmmm I checked out your op.gg you seem to just die a lot. You get a lot of kills but averaging 8 deaths is a little much
Also I recommend you not finishing ravenous so quickly because the extra ad and life steal isn't that advantageous
You should also consider getting boots of mobis after you rush brutalizer/tiamat so that you can gank side lanes more often
Make sure you ward often so that you don't get caught out in the jungle
When gawking try to gank from the jungle and not directly down the river because usually the river is warded well in our elo but horrible ward coverage in the jg... And remember to take sweepers or bring a pink so you don't waste time in a bush c: