Champ Check ✔: Leona

Gandalf010812·8/14/2015, 3:20:37 AM·3 votes·747 views

So I posted a champ check on Riven already and got good feedback, so here's one for Leona as well :)

4 Comments

The Blue Rajah8/14/2015, 11:52:20 AM1 votes

It was good and simple information, easily accessible for players new to a champion. So that was good.

However, I don't like the way you were talking at all. You sounded like an announcer, over-enunciating every word, and used literally the same cadence for every sentence (high emphasis at start, tapering off). It made it sound really forced and repetitive, since every sentence sounds the same.

Like I said though, the information was good, and the video was I think the perfect length, got everything in without dragging on too long. Just try to not exaggerate the way you speak so much. Do that, and I think you'll have a great series on your hands :)

Torenthal8/14/2015, 6:13:00 PM1 votes

I think this pretty cool. But what separates your video from Champion Spotlight?