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[Champion Concept] Lady Fate - The Embodiment of Destiny

regonas·4/24/2016, 1:51:38 PM·12 votes·2,181 views
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At first there was nothing. And then, boom, giant explosion birth universe into existence. At that time, all which contained in the universe, was just wild uncontrollable energies, but even then, grand plant of destiny was decided. Everything in the universe, things that were and things that will be, was bound by fate into one glorious design. God, celestials, mortals, stars, planets, alternative universes and realms - everything and every event was carefully planed by fate. Yet, after millions of years, something is trying to mess with this divine plan. It is E.N.D. and it posses more threat than anyone could imagine. For that one reason, Lady Fate, the embodiment of destiny, materialized in Runeterra - to fix what E.N.D. is doing, return everything as it should be and continue universe as she had planned.

Table of content:

  1. Stats
  2. Kit
  3. Lore

#1. STATS

HEALTH: 518 – 2045 HEALTH REGEN: 6.5 – 16.6 ATTACK DAMAGE: 54 – 112 ATTACK SPEED: 0.621 (+0% – 72.4%) ATTACK RANGE: 140 MANA: 300 – 800 MANA REGEN: 7.5 – 18.5 ARMOR: 27.7 – 71.6 MAGIC RESIST: 38.5 – 71.4 MOVEMENT SPEED: 335

#2. KIT

......................................... ........................................................................................................................ Passive Seal the Fate Your abilities, used on enemies bellow 10% of their maximum health, will execute them. In addition, after executing an enemy with this passive, cause your next ability to become empowered. Empowerment lasts for 2 sec, single use and can't trigger more often than once every 6 sec. ........................................................................................................................ .........................................

......................................... ........................................................................................................................ Q Spear of Destiny Manifest a celestial spear in your hand and throw it towards targeted direction. It deals 40/55/70/85/100 (+60% of AD) (+35% of AP) true damage to all enemies it hits and mark the last enemy hit for 2 sec (if new enemy is hit, then mark is removed from previous foe and added to new foe). You can reactivate this ability to pull marked enemy closer to you and consume the mark. If you pull an enemy into yourself, then that enemy will also be stunned for 0.75 sec.

Empowered: marks all enemies hit and deals 15% more damage.

Casting time: 0.3 sec Range: 700 Pull distance: 300 Cooldown: 8 sec Mana cost: 40/45/50/55/60 ........................................................................................................................ .........................................

......................................... ........................................................................................................................ W The Blade of Fate Equip a celestial blade, increasing your basic attack range by 100, increasing your attack speed by 30/35/40/45/50% and cause your basic attacks to steal 8/10/12/14/16 (+5% of AD) (+7% of AP) health from enemy and add it to you. Blade lasts for 10 sec or until you perform 10/12/14/16/18 basic attacks. Damaged, caused by this ability, can't trigger your Seal the Fate.

Equipping this blade again, cause you to equip two blades, doubling attack speed bonus.

Empowered: equipping this blade will shout out celestial bolts in every direction out of you, each bolt tracing one enemy. Each enemy can be hit only by one bolt, each bolt deals 20/30/40/50/60 (+20% of AD) (+10% of AP) true damage. Damaged, caused by these bolts, can trigger your Seal the Fate.

Range of homing bolts: 400 Cooldown: 16/15/14/13/12 sec (starts when you equip blade) Mana cost: 30/34/38/42/46 ........................................................................................................................ .........................................

......................................... ........................................................................................................................ E Ruler of Time Rewind time, causing remaining cooldowns on Spear of Destiny and The Blade of Fate to become 0 and heal yourself for 4/5/6/7/8% (+1% per 100 AD) (+1% per 150 AP) of your missing health.

Empowered: double the healing you receive form this ability.

Cooldown: 30/28/26/24/22 sec Mana cost: 50/56/62/68/74 ........................................................................................................................ .........................................

......................................... ........................................................................................................................ R Final Showdown Target an enemy champion. Create a special area between you and your target, pulling him/her and yourself into this area. All other enemies and allies are pushed out of this area. This area lasts until you or targeted enemy dies. Allies and enemies can't influence what happens in this area in any way. Nor you, neither the enemy can't exit this area until it lasts. While inside this area, you deal 5/ 7.5/ 10% more damage and take 5/ 7.5/ 10% less damage. In addition, all your abilities become empowered until you remain in this area.

Range: 550 Radius of arena: 400 Cooldown: 200/180/160 sec Mana cost: 90/100/110 ........................................................................................................................ .........................................

#3. LORE

http://i68.tinypic.com/eafwj4.jpg With chaos spreading over Runeterra, stronger and stronger individuals appearing, war breaking out in varios places and ancient magic being released, even other realms are being affected. With many unusual phenomena occurring, rifts into foreign worlds appearing out of nowhere, wild magic rampaging through the world, something had to happen.

Five stages of the E.N.D. started occurring though out the world, warning people of eventual chaos of third rune war.

  1. Reality distortion and gateway to the world of the nightmares. When creatures from the dream realm started appearing in Valoran, it was only the matter of time when will permanent rift to the dream realm appears. Now, one appeared near ancient ruins of Shurima, allowing dream beings to invade Runeterra to no end.
  2. Opening gates to the underworld, as the dead will be flooding back to the world of the living. Tartown, an undead giant and a prison to evil souls was summoned into Runeterra, together with all demons inside, was the beginning of demonic invasion into Valoran.
  3. Forgotten god returning back to from oblivion. As lunar temple crumbled down, moon god's presence started surface back into universe, raining down into Runeterra lunar magic more than any time before.
  4. Angels stepping down from the heavens to fight against chaos and darkness. While several angels were residing in Valoran quite some time, a doorway was opened to the world of angels and a small army of them entered Valoran. They offered their help fighting against fores of darkness, but angels have another purpose being here - control of Runeterra.
  5. Human killing a human, god killing a god, when hear of gold is pierced by claws of darkness, life disappears form this world. While this haven't happened yet, the time of the last stage of the E.N.D is drawing close.

Armies are preparing for the war, forces of darkness and light are stirring up, even celestials are feeling uneasy, because fifth stage might happen at any time. Or maybe, a hero will rise, to stop this war from happening and will save the world from destruction. Only time will tell.

Now, army of demons and nightmare beings are forming near the ruins of Shurima, while angels are heavily supported by Demacia. Some people of the north view this as a sing of return of the Watchers, while Void worshipers see this as dark destiny they envisioned. However, there is a presence, dark and vile, orchestrating all these events, trying to hasten the E.N.D. This presence isn't one of mortals, neither does it belong to immortal or a god. It belongs to the chaos itself, creator of underworld and beginning of everything which is evil. Sir Gram the Evil - malevolent being made out of death, suffering and madness, is working day and night to bring destruction to every world and every realm, and recreation of universe in his own image. There is no evil greater than him, there is no bigger threat. Now, heroes of Runeterra have to protect their home, fight against demons, nightmares and even an incarnation of evil. Third rune war is about to happen and the aftermath of it will be the eradication of life in Runetera. Will heroes of Valoran be able to stop this war from happening? Or will the evil win?

...............

Before universe was born, two unimaginable forces collided - force of creation and force of destruction. As the two fought, nothing was left behind - everything omni-creator created was destroyed by omni-destroyer. Yet, something had to change for universe to be born, as this fight couldn't last for all eternity. And something did change. Omni-creator finally won and absorbed omni-destroyer into himself, giving birth to the universe and everything inside. As time passed, when energies of creation and destruction collided, these clashes gave birth to the celestials. Being made of creation and destruction, celestials represented the balance of universe. However, even before they were born into existence, something even more gander was already pulsing with power and thoughts. It was fate of universe. All starts, all planets, living beings and the smallest of particles belonged to it. Fate moved things, people, celestials and everything within universe - she planned what and when will happen, changed everything to fit its plan. Fate is master of time and hold control of everything within the universe, as fate is representation of omni-creator and omni-destroyer. Fate decided evolution of the universe and the end of it. However, there is two places, where even fate can't reach, because those two aren't created by fate and don't exists int he flow of time. Those two places are: the Void and the Dream Realm. Unnatural and bizarre, these places was too far way from the reach of fate, so it is natural that something threatening could emerge from these two unnatural realms.

As things went from bad to worse, Fate felt something is about to happen, but it couldn't see into future of these events. For the first time, Fate was scared, so it crate a body for itself, so intervene into these evens, before things destroyed fate's plans. So, a divine being descend on the land of Valoran - embodiment of destiny opened her eyes, beings living representation of fate, she could be viewed as all-mighty being. Nearly nothing can stand before her, as she holds the destiny of everything within the universe. Yet, she could not enter the void or the dream real, as those weren't hers domains. So, while she can't do anything about them, she started to move things as to prevent any disaster from happening. She moves angels into invading Runeterra, whispered into ears of holy knights, causing them to revive and old order of Trinity guardians. Being master of time and space, he have all time in the universe prepare for E.N.D, but she can't stop it from happening.

Also, taking form of a being, caused fate slowly develop a personality. She is calm, yet have a bit twisted sense of humor and can't stand if something isn't as she planned, but sometimes she let things slide, if she view them as not important ones, because she have greater things to worry about. She don't tolerate great defiance, and while she spends most of her time high above Runeterra, from time to time she descends to the ground and even interacts with mortals personally. You could say, that she is beginning to feel lonely. For millions of years fate was alone, manipulating everything to follow its plans, but now whet it have body, fate is beginning to see her as the part of the universe, not the ruler of it. And it is beginning to effect Lady Fate, as she is losing the grip on the universe and spends more and more time interacting with mortals. She fears nothing, as she have infinite power in her disposal and no other being could do anything to her and are in her control. Nevertheless, she is also very trustworthy, if you can say it. She always keeps her word, do what she will do and keeps all her promises. One day, when she descended, she found a little girl on the side of the road. Lady Fate: hello, little mortal. Girl: i got.... lost (girl started crying). Lady Fate: well, little mortal, it is your destiny to get lost and find your way back home. Just follow... Girl: (screaming and crying) i want my mommy... where is my mommy... Lady Fate: listen, little mortal, i have a plan for you. Girl: (crying even louder) moooooomyyyyyy... Lady Fate: fine, i think i can let this one slide. And with those words, Lady Fate teleported lost girl back to home, back to girl's mommy.

Outside of time and space manipulation, she can also forge weapons out of cosmic energies. Her weapons can destroy destinies, cutting thought fate of anything they touch. Even celestials could vaporized by them, but as she becomes closer to mortals and loses her grip of universe, so does her powers - they weaken. And even is she don't notice it, someone will. That someone is bidding its time, waiting in shadows outside of universe. Lady Fate and this other being are preparing for a war, and battle field will probably be Runeterra. She is mostly confident in her powers, but she still feels uneasy. All these new feelings are weakening Lady Fate and this might give that other being a chance to win this war.

23 Comments

DriftThruTheRift4/24/2016, 5:08:04 PM1 votes

I've noticed that you've made so many concepts, just out of curiosity. How do you make so many so quickly like I barely have made one full concept lol

Also this idea is pretty interesting also I think the q has a little to much. It has the spear to do damage, the mark to deal extra damage, a pull, and a stun all in one ability. I think you should maybe take something out of it just cuz that's a little much for one ability but other than that the concept seems good

CrimsonCobra34/24/2016, 5:09:42 PM1 votes

Her passive is too strong. Right off the bat, if she's going to have a champion execute please make sure it is only that. Don't add the empowering aspects to it. It's already strong enough.

The Q is extraordinarily versatile, but I like it. I think it's good and should be kept. But I would remove the 'cast while moving' part. That's unnecessary power.

For her W, I would reduce the AD scaling to 5%. Because it's a flat health steal it's essentially true damage, and this would synergize far too well with a BoRK and a Ravenous Hydra or Bloodthirster. It's either that or reduce the attack speed bonus. Because of it's attack speed boost, she can afford to build heavy AD and basically just shred tanks. (And that's not even taking the empowered attack, which, remember, I think is unnecessary, into consideration.)

I don't really have suggestions for her E. It's really strong, but it has a long cooldown to compensate.

I don't have a specific problem with her ult, it's really strong, and difficult to balance, but it's not necessarily 'OP', except I would give it a max duration so that she can't simply target the tank and take her sweet time killing him. I might also give enemies the ability to damage the walls, or something, so that if necessary they can tear down the barrier. But those are more balance of life changes than 'this ability is only acceptable if you do X' suggestions. I would definitely rewrite it though, the writing was a little sloppy on the

~CrimsonCobra3

DriftThruTheRift4/24/2016, 6:57:19 PM1 votes

Oh it's cuz of the empowered part. That's what I was referring to as in extra damage maybe just take off the empowered for that one ability just cuz that's an overload to one ability. Damage, pull, stun, and empowered damage is just a lot I believe.

DriftThruTheRift4/24/2016, 6:59:20 PM1 votes

Also do you make your own champion concept art or do you jut find similar appearances on the Internet? Cuz I'm looking for a champion art designer for my concept so I can fully complete my champion design

Dis The Chris4/24/2016, 7:12:39 PM1 votes

Right now, all I can say is that this champion is quite... OP - the fact that Lady Fate's Passive is a guaranteed kill which makes Pantheon's 100% Critical-under-15% HP a joke. There's a 5% difference but still, I'm doubting the ability will actually see the light of League of Legends. (Guaranteed kill for Baron and Dragons with Q if timed right)

Additionally, for the abilities - I know making them all do True Damage is a nice niche as no champion has ever done that but the fact it screams "screw your armor and magic penetration" makes it quite hard to play against regardless if Lady Fate is built as AP / AD.

Even so, building hard Attack Damage and Attack Speed and plainly using her abilities for utility (Q-E and R alone) can pretty much kill anything that is caught by her spear or trapped in her arena.

DriftThruTheRift4/24/2016, 8:25:17 PM1 votes

I suppose that's a good point

LeifTheExplorer4/26/2016, 12:44:35 AM1 votes

Honestly, I think the idea is pretty cool. I sense similarities with Kayle. Another question... do you make your own art? If so, remember that making a night or angel type of champion is difficult because it tends to make distinguishing between present and future champions hard, forcing excessive uniqueness. But you've done a nice job!

Alright, thoughts on the kit:

Passive: Not broken, but borderline. This will probably be very effective against tanks or people who run item 3156 item 3053.

  • I'd probably change it from execute (offers no form of counterplay) to dealing some form of bonus magical damage based of percent missing health.

Q:

  • Doesn't seem downright broken, but there are some problems. What kind of champion are you aiming for? Someone who primarily builds AD or AP? Being able to build both has always been a problem on champions who are capable of doing stuff like that, so I think you should try to lower the flexibility.

W:

  • My main problem with your champion right now is her powerful sustain. Sustain on a champion that builds AD and AP is very hard to deal with, imagine if Kayle had some decent base lifesteal. Now, besides the health steal, I'm fine with the damage buff.
  • Please change the attacks to seconds, or lower those numbers. 10 auto attacks is approximately 10 seconds if you aren't building attack speed at first rank. The trade capability is way too high in lane and during teamfights.

E:

  • I have no problems with this ability. Basically a mixed version of Zilean W and Gangplank W. Pure utility.

R:

  • Return of old Poppy ultimate. You've made it a lot less overpowered, but a lot harder to deal with as well. I'd still up the cooldown, as it is basically a guaranteed kill.

Overall, there are just problems with God-Like champs. Its just that in order to have balance in the game, they can't be played like Gods. Take AurelionSol for example. He's more king of boop than God.

Also, lots of true damage in kit based of AD and AP. Inherent problem, as you can build basically whatever you want and still do crazy loads of damage. This is mainly a problem because she has forms of ranged poke, unlike most juggernauts.

Thoughts on my thoughts?

Also lorewise, a total Mary Sue, and its impossible to develop any character in her. Impossible to balance lorewise. I think Riot did a great job making a powerful Godlike-being like AurelionSol into something manageable, and I think you should take inspiration from that.