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Omenelas: The Broken Curse. Please leave Feedback

Caytheles·3/3/2015, 12:36:10 AM·1 votes·532 views

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Hello. so it came to my attention that a champion named Omen was canceled quite awhile ago. mostly because Riot couldnt find a personality for him. Well here i am trying to bring omen to life. but with my own Story to him. lets hope my attempts will help us acheive our goal.

Omenelas: The Broken Curse.

("Sometimes being a Curse, can be the most torturous curse of them all."

Annie: Amumu, i thought you werent able to find friends.

(Thunder crashed outside as the rain poured. two children sat patiently as they waited to continue their journey across Runeterra in search for a cure that had already taken place.)

Amumu: That is what the curse said, it told me i would always be alone... but i found you, You understand me. (Amumu grabbed hold of Annies hand)

Annie: their is no need to be so much of a whimp, i like you so you are my friend. or did you forget?

Amumu: no...

Annie: but it does make me cureous, Curses cannot be broken unless a component changes.

Amumu: there you go talking like Heims

Annie: sorry haha, we both have our curses. and i just want to find a way to get rid of them. But amumu?

Amumu: Yeah?

Annie: why is it that things dont die when you touch them anymore? like you hold my hand and you interact with the other summoners.

Amumu: I dont know, ever since i met you i felt like something was ripped out. but then you filled it up again with something... sweet.)

i feel like omen has the Visual of something wicked but free. so what if omen was a part who wanted to leave amumu to torture others and hated being weighed down. so when the curse was weakened by the arrival of annie in Amumu's life he broke free.) ON TO THE ABILITIES!!

Passive: Equivalent Exchange, Upon death Omenelas becomes a pool of darkness then Returns as a cursed spike to Impale his killer. Dealing 5 percent of his health as true damage upon the impailed every 2 seconds, (this mechanic would bring junglers and their laners closer and more aware.) The spike will only be removed if it is killed by another player or the impailed dies.

Passive: Soul splinter, Upon taking Damage, auto attacking or dealing spell damage Omenelas leaves a splinter in the targets soul. (Stacks up to 200) does not apply if hit by Aoe abilities

Q: Wicked Siphon, 2 charges, Omenelas rushes to a target location, enemy units or champions hit while he is dashing recieve a soul Splinter and 20% of their health is taken, if the second charge hits the same target it will deal 20% of Omenelas max health as True damage.

W: Fate, Omenelas channels a spike from his back for 2 seconds. After channeling Omenelas releases the spike piercing through the units or champion. Omenelas will not face he direction they will go to keep them guessing If Omenelas casts the spell again while the enemy is impailed the spike and enemies impailed will come to him. if he does not cast again within the next 3 seconds of impailing someone or thing then he will simply last impailing them for 2 more seconds. Deals 10 percent of Omenelas Health as true damage if he chooses to wind them in making them crash to his body.

E: Sense of Danger, Omenelas will enlarge his spikes from his back damaging any enemy hit with 10% of Omenelas health as true Damage. (lol kinda like an eve ult but only for damage)

R: Omen, Omenelas Casts Omen on himself. Omen lasts for 5 seconds.

Active: if Omenelas dies within the time frame he has Omen on him, his passive will also Impale the ones who Assisted his death, However every 10 soul splinter on the enemy counts for a second of impailment. the killers timer will also have the mercy of the second.

Passive: For each soul splinter within a (Riot you would choose somethign reasonable) Radius. Omenelas gains +1 health.

The story sucks. sorry but i do think Omenelas should be part of Amumus Curse. Omenelas would be the first official Ranged Tank for he would need to build up soul splinter on his enemies before the end game team fights. if you think his kit is OP. well if their is one thing i learned in MMORPG is that your team is their to save you. you kill Omenelas either by Ganking then saving your ally from his passive, or taking Cleanse your move. i will work on this soon DONT YOU WORRY. but for now please tell me what you think.

3 Comments

Dangerous Man3/3/2015, 12:47:25 AM1 votes

YAY So Rito can used that concept that they trashed Also, to make this not overpowered, he would have to be a really squishy champ like Anivia Other wise he would be played as a tank with 5000 hp and his Q would do 1000+20% of enemy hp+AP

Lord Dusteon3/3/2015, 12:49:06 AM1 votes

Passive: The death one is very, very bad. After death passives are in general bad (Karthus and Sion have the least bad ones), and having a permanent 5% max hp true damage per second ticking means you literally always dies unless someone else is nearby. This rewards you for dying, which is a bad idea.

Q: Having a double %max hp with half being true damage is bad. The numbers would have to be VERY low for this to work (as an aside, the highest health I can get on live is ~4000-5000 while being semi tanky. His Q would deal 800-1000 true damage with that).

W: Oh, so you gave him a 2nd %max hp true damage. Great. This isn't going to be a tanky Vayne at all, right?

E: ...If this is an active, it's bad because you gave this dude 40% OF HIS MAX HP AS TRUE DAMAGE. If it's a passive, holy crap, no. No. You should not be doing 400+ true damage to someone everytime they attack you.

R: ...So he jumps into a teamfight, dies, and makes every enemy around him take 5% of his max hp as true damage, in the middle of a fight where they probably cannot back off or spend time focusing splinters.