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Champion Concept Everybody Will Love - a Dragon

regonas··4 votes·955 views
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Well, because every kid here hates complicated or difficult champion concepts and loves dragons, then there a dragon concept for you. He is simple, easy to use, not unique in any way - just the way you like it.

Attack Range: 500

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Passive: Controlled Fury: every sec you gain 1 fury. Every time you kill an enemy target you gain 10 fury. Every time you suffer a critical hit you gain 10 fury. You use fury for your other abilities. In addition, gain fury equal to 50% 25% of mana gained from items, masteries and runes. Starting Fury: 100

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Exploding Breath [q] Breath our big fire bolt which will explode in contact to an enemy or a structure dealing 80/130/180/230/280 (+60% of ability power) magic damage to enemies in area of explosion. Cooldown: 7 sec Fury cost: 20 Range: 850 Range of AOE: 250

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Gust [w] Flap your wings creating a wind wave knocking enemies away and dealing 50/85/120/155/190 (+40% of ability power) magic damage to them. Cooldown: 12 sec Fury cost: 10 Range: 450 Starting width: 120 End width: 320

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Quake and Pounce [e] Slam your tail dealing 45/75/105/135/165 (+35% of ability power) magic damage to enemies behind you and knock them into air for 1 sec. In addition, after 0,75 sec you pounce forward dealing 70/110/150/190/230 (+40% of ability power) magic damage to all enemies you pass through. You can't perform any other actions for duration of this ability. You can ounce over the walls. Cooldown: 15 sec Range of AOE: 250 Range of pounce: 480

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Melting Meteor Breath [r] Cause your next 3 basic attacks to deal 50/80/110 (+35% of ability power) (+1 per 1 of fury consumed) bonus magic damage to your main target and to all enemies around him/her. In addition, all hit enemies get their movement speed reduced by 50% for 1 sec. Cooldown: 140 sec Fury cost: 100% of current fury Range of AOE: 280

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  1. item 3020 item 3116 item 3151 item 3027 item 3285 item 3089
  2. item 3020 item 3115 item 3025 item 3027 item 3285 item 3089
  3. item 3020 item 3025 item 3116 item 3151 item 3027 item 3110
  4. item 3020 item 3116 item 3151 item 3027 item 3027 item 3089

21 Comments

jeremiahBIO1 votes

Shyvana ?

regonas3 votes

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Shyvana ?

More.

Only Khazix1 votes

We have 2 dragons in the game already

regonas3 votes

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We have 2 dragons in the game already

Name them. Also, just making a concept everybody would like: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/g74mAfEw-several-tips-on-how-to-make-a-popular-champion-concept

Fowus1 votes

Dragon, and Shyvanna

regonas3 votes

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Dragon, and Shyvanna

Then go ahead and play dragon.

Fowus1 votes

he never said a dragon wouldn't be unplayable

CHOPSTICKUHH1 votes

The LoL family already has mad love for a certain dragon and his name is ao shin

regonas3 votes

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The LoL family already has mad love for a certain dragon and his name is ao shin

You do get that he will never be released, do you? He is being made for 2 or 3 years now.

CHOPSTICKUHH1 votes

You're a dream crusher

regonas3 votes

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You're a dream crusher

But.. but.. we can not work on another dragon. Someone who would be released.

Trylobyte1 votes

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You're a dream crusher

Ao Shin still hasn't hit Lee Sin levels of delays yet, though. There's still hope!

Dharc Kaisor1 votes

Just because you post here doesn't mean its got any greater chance of being released than the concept Riot is already working on.

ThornsOfTheRose1 votes

The ultimate seems a bit lacklustre IMO. It's like a Kayle E and Q combined for 3 AAs, and the cooldown doesn't match (it's too long). The rest seems okay though, it's nice to have a simpler champion with all those complex ones running around.

regonas3 votes

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The ultimate seems a bit lacklustre IMO. It's like a Kayle E and Q combined for 3 AAs, and the cooldown doesn't match (it's too long). The rest seems okay though, it's nice to have a simpler champion with all those complex ones running around.

R potential maximum damage with full fury and good items is about 1860 bonus magic damage. Is that a lackluster?

ThornsOfTheRose1 votes

I restate my statement. Lacklustre base damage. Anyone can deal tons of damage with max rank abilities and good items. Sorry if I was unclear.

That said, rank 1 ult deals 250 bonus base magic damage assuming he gets all 3 AAs off (150 on first attack max fury, 50 on 2nd and 3rd, assuming no items, no fury gain during ult), which is not too shabby now that I think of it. But still, that is assuming he gets all 3 AAs off, which can be a bit hard since he has 500 range and since many champions are extremely mobile now. (I don't think the AP ratio's in a bad spot. 35% AP should be ok.) The splash range is smaller than a Sona aura; I think we can increase the splash range by a bit without making him OP.

The cooldown is still too long though. At least make it scale down as you rank the ult up.

Thanks for replying to my comment :)

regonas3 votes

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I restate my statement. Lacklustre base damage. Anyone can deal tons of damage with max rank abilities and good items. Sorry if I was unclear.

That said, rank 1 ult deals 250 bonus base magic damage assuming he gets all 3 AAs off (150 on first attack max fury, 50 on 2nd and 3rd, assuming no items, no fury gain during ult), which is not too shabby now that I think of it. But still, that is assuming he gets all 3 AAs off, which can be a bit hard since he has 500 range and since many champions are extremely mobile now. (I don't think the AP ratio's in a bad spot. 35% AP should be ok.) The splash range is smaller than a Sona aura; I think we can increase the splash range by a bit without making him OP.

The cooldown is still too long though. At least make it scale down as you rank the ult up.

Thanks for replying to my comment :)

You get it a bit wrong. (look at his/her passive) lets say this dragon have no mana items and have 100 fury (max fury), then after using R each basic attack gains 100 bonus damage, not just first one. That means at first rank with 200 AP you would see him/her doing: (50 base damage + 70 damage from AP + 100 damage from fury) x 3 = 660. Now i do get that saving all that fury for R is a bit hard and maybe impossible, but lets keep it going. Now, at max level with full items including item 3027 and about 700 AP, and full fury (300 now): (110 base damage + 245 damage from AP + 300 damage from fury) x 3 = 1965. Again, having that much of fury saved up might be a bit too hard, but we are speaking about maximum possible damage.

Yes, base damage is kinda low, but you also kinda have to add current fury to its base damage, because it cost 100% of current fury.

ThornsOfTheRose1 votes

Oh I see! Thanks for clearing it up for me ^^" Sorry for the misunderstanding. I thought fury would only affect the first hit my bad.

therealdragon1 votes

everything seems good except his ult. This seems to be a mage type role and yet his ult relies on him dealing AA's? No mage that I know of deals AA's as their ult. They're abilities that deal damage not AA's.

I suggest changing the ult altogether. Someone else said it was lackluster and I agree. Change it maybe so that a huge meteor comes down or something? And don't have it deal DoT damage or like every ability does X more damage. Keep it like every other mage ult in the game and have it do initial damage or a channel like panth or something.

Also, you seem to have bad habit with all your champ concepts where at least one if not more abilities rely on time to do the damage. It's always along the lines of "after x seconds this ability deals x damage". You have GOT to STOP with this. It's fine to have 1 ability like that on one maybe 2 champ concepts but there was the archer, the other dragon, and like 3 other champs that had "deal x damage first and x damage after 3 seconds"

What we want: Initial damage that happens as soon as you cast it. If you look at malz or vel or shyv, they all have abilities that just do damage straight up.....k malz may be a bad example xD but you get what I mean. You don't see a vel's q doing damage after 3 seconds. Or a shy's e doing continuous max health damage.

So just do initial damage and thats it. Nothing else. "This ability does 100 damage and roots the target". That'd be fine. "This ability does 50 initial damage then 30 damage each second you continue to attack. If they get all attacks off the target gets rooted". This is not fine.

So please stop doing this in all your concepts. "This ability deals 100 damage and silences" is good enough for an ability. Just make it look flashy or something lol.

regonas3 votes

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everything seems good except his ult. This seems to be a mage type role and yet his ult relies on him dealing AA's? No mage that I know of deals AA's as their ult. They're abilities that deal damage not AA's.

I suggest changing the ult altogether. Someone else said it was lackluster and I agree. Change it maybe so that a huge meteor comes down or something? And don't have it deal DoT damage or like every ability does X more damage. Keep it like every other mage ult in the game and have it do initial damage or a channel like panth or something.

Also, you seem to have bad habit with all your champ concepts where at least one if not more abilities rely on time to do the damage. It's always along the lines of "after x seconds this ability deals x damage". You have GOT to STOP with this. It's fine to have 1 ability like that on one maybe 2 champ concepts but there was the archer, the other dragon, and like 3 other champs that had "deal x damage first and x damage after 3 seconds"

What we want: Initial damage that happens as soon as you cast it. If you look at malz or vel or shyv, they all have abilities that just do damage straight up.....k malz may be a bad example xD but you get what I mean. You don't see a vel's q doing damage after 3 seconds. Or a shy's e doing continuous max health damage.

So just do initial damage and thats it. Nothing else. "This ability does 100 damage and roots the target". That'd be fine. "This ability does 50 initial damage then 30 damage each second you continue to attack. If they get all attacks off the target gets rooted". This is not fine.

So please stop doing this in all your concepts. "This ability deals 100 damage and silences" is good enough for an ability. Just make it look flashy or something lol.

Well, there were no shadow using assassin, but then we get Zed. Where were no roaming support, but then we get Bard. There were a lot of no skills op champs, but we still got Yasuo. I don't think it's matter if there is or there is not.

Also, Velkoz all of his abilities (except R) does damage after some time. All of his abilities doesn't do damage instantly to someone. One of them have to travel certain range, other one have time before it hits and so on.

Keep in mind that there are a lot of people playing this game. Some of them wants click-on instant damage, some of them want slow moving meteors to bombard their enemies and some of them are assholes downvoters. No single concept can please everyone.

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