Mackenzie, The Sentinel (Please leave some Feedback!)

Lore : Valoran has long been at war, and as such, they were brought to the attention of the Sentinels, a sentient race of energy, that safeguards the planet of Runeterra. All magical power on the planet resonates from them, and only the few, such as the arch mages of the League know of their full power. With the formation of the League Of Legends, the Sentinels took an interest in the proposal of fighting in "mock battles" on the Fields of Justice, to settle disputes. The Sentinels, perusing the roster of current champions, became bored with the standard of the League, and decided to get ... creative. Taking an interest in the design of a certain Pulsefire Explorer, they opened a rift from the time he originated from, and found a world, devastated by magic, where technology was attempting to reclaim the lands. In this wasteland, they found a young girl named Mackenzie. Mackenzie had lived a troubled life. At the age of only 9, she murdered her younger brother, during a period where she had been starved to near-death. She did so with great reluctance, but it was her only way of surviving. She reasoned if she died, her younger brother stood no chance, so she did what she had to do. She's regretted it ever since. Taking a liking to this troubled girl, they imbued her with their magical energy, aging her into a fully grown woman. They guided Mackenzie, in a trance, to the Pulsefire armory, where the Sentinels forced the doors open, and outfitted Mackenzie with an experimental suit of armor. The sentinels imbued Mackenzie with the skills to use the suit, and with a burning desire to fight in the name of The Sentinels. The Sentinels, amused by the girl, warped her back to the doorstep of the Institute of War, where she would join the ranks of the champions of Valoran, as the Sentinels watched from above, amused at the confrontation between Ezreal and Mackenzie that was inevitable.

Quotes : Upon Selection - " I Am The Watcher"

Moving : "On my wings." , "At once." , "Push Forward.", "Press on." , "Remaining Vigilant.", "GoGoGo."

Attacking : " Kneel before the Sentinels." , " Imprudent imps." , "Just accept your fate." , " Time to take action." , "I will stand idly by no longer." ," Face the might of the Sentinels."

Jokes : " I'm more of an observer.", aims gun forward " If I shoot you, does that make me a shooter, instead of watcher?"

Taunts : " I suggest you resign, before the Sentinel becomes the Warrior." , " Just remember one thing. I'm always observing. Watching. Waiting."

On Death : * Struggles to stand* "Even as I part from this world, I'll always be watching." falls to the ground

Mackenzie, as I've envisioned her, would be a support type champion, with a unique twist on what it means to be a support, with some damaging capabilities, sort've like sona, but more aggressive. Mackenzie would operate on energy, like Shen or Akali. Her 'beams' operate similar to Karma's, in that walking through them causes an effect. In this case, instead of causing dmg, they cause mackenzies ability to stop working.

Passive - Sentinel's Discretion , Each time Mackenzie heals or deals (damage) 50/150/300 hp, she gains a basic attack modifier that can either heal a team-mate for 15% of her CURRENT hp , or damage an enemy for 10% of her MAX hp. Applying a shield to an ally will automatically proc this skill. This modifier persists until used, and you can stack this passive until you have 50 charges max, CD: 15 Seconds

Q - Friendly Fire 50 energy - Mackenzie shoots a teammate with a stream of energy, healing them for 100/125/150/175/200 (plus 0.8 ability power.), over 4 seconds. The beam of energy can be broken by an enemy champion walking through it. CD: 14/13/12/11/10/9 Seconds

W - On My Wings 40 Energy - Mackenzie drains 10% of her max movement speed, granting it to an ally, plus 20/25/30/35/40 (plus 0.1 ability power.)This effect persists for 3 seconds. CD : 14/12/10/8/6 Seconds

E - Protectorate 20 Energy Per Second Energy - Mackenzie can target an ally, giving them a 100/150/200/250/300 (plus 0.4 ability power) strength Shield that continues to regenerate at 15 hp per second, even when destroyed completely. This effect persists until Mackenzie has no energy remaining, or if an enemy passes through the beam of energy. On enemy cast, Mackenzie rapidly jets forward to an enemy doing 80/160/240/320/400 (plus 0.4 ability power) to an enemy, and applying a 60/120/180/240/300 (plus 0.4 ability power) shield to herself that persists until Mackenzie runs out of energy,and slowing the enemy by 40% for 2 seconds. You may re activate this ability to stop draining energy, but it will also cancel Mackenzie's shield to her ally, or to herself. CD : 18/16/14/12/10

R - Watcher No Cost - Mackenzie removes all debuffs from her team, and gains 90% cooldown reduction her spells for 8/9/10 seconds. (Purchased or current Cooldown Reduction does not stack, only the base/)-(90% is applied for the duration.) Cooldown 120 Seconds/ 80 Seconds / 60 Seconds

I envision Mackenzie as tanky-ap-support that can go on the offensive if need be, but has counterable spells that are powerful. I see her as covered in head to toe with advanced hextech armour. Imagine this, http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...rg-d4pwk0k.jpg , but morphed to fit LoL's style, along with a techmaturgical feel.

Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Oh, by the way, her base stats are as follows :

Health : 465 (plus 95 per level) Health Regen : 8.5 per 5 (plus 0.5) Energy : 200 Energy Regen : 50 Range : 550 Attack Damage : 51 (plus 4 per level) Ability Power : 0 Attack Speed : 0.68 (plus 6% per level) Armor : 27 (plus 6 per level) Magic Resist : 35 (plus 2 per level) Move Speed : 350 (plus 2 per level)

Optimal/Reccomended Build : Boots of Choice, Face Of the Mountain( Sell for 6th Item Later), Nashors Tooth, Wit's End, Athene's Unholy Grail OR Morellonomicon, Locket Of the Iron Solari, and Zhonya's Hourglass

Don't take the lore too seriously, its all I could think of at the time, and yes I know its silly and nonsensically grim-dark.

Don't Forget to check out my other champion concepts, Dawn The Stalwart Legend, and Lex The Wyrm Vanguard.