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I created a new Champion, is it good?

LeBrõnze James·8/7/2017, 2:28:18 PM·1 votes·458 views

Sir Lance "The Black Knight"

Passive: King’s Armor - Any damage Sir Lance takes that isn‘t from a Champion heals him instead.

[Q] Vicious Stab- Sir Lance dashes forward in any direction If he stabs a Champion, he deals 40/60/80/100/120 (+190 AD) and Vicious stab resets and deals 50% more damage. If he doesn’t hit a Champion, the ability‘s cooldown begins. (30/29/28/27/26 Second Cooldown)(25 Mana)

[W] Air Slash- Sir Lance Swings his sword, dealing 40% of his Attack Damage as True damage to targets hit by the tip of his blade. The target is also feared for 2 seconds. His next auto attack on a Feared target gives him 45% Crit Chance. (10/8/6/4/2 Second cooldown)(80 Mana)

[E] Swift Movements- Sir Lance passively has 15%/20%/25%/30%/35% bonus Movement Speed. He can also cast this spell to give him 30% more Movement Speed and immunity to Slows for 5 Seconds. (19/17/15/13/11 Second Cooldown)(60 Mana)

[R] Knight’s Courage- Sir Lance channels for 3 secons before Leaping Globally and Stabbing the ground, Knocking back and stunning all targets within 700 range of him for 3.5 seconds. He also deals 400/450/500(+150% AD). (250/200/150 Second Cooldown)(105 Mana)

4 Comments

Bootleg Gay8/7/2017, 2:37:47 PM3 votes

Passive is unreasonable. Q Resets means he would just be on top of someone all the time, with no way to get him off. E is boring. R is a Galio ult with no casting constraints.

ADC Yuumi8/7/2017, 3:26:16 PM2 votes

I'll be honest. It's WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too overpowered. The passive should be more along the lines of: Passive: King's Armor - For the first 5 seconds after entering combat with a champion, he gains +20% damage reduction and +40% rapidly decaying lifesteal. E screams Garen. R screams Pantheon. W is interesting, it reminds me of mixing Darius Q with Camille W.

BeatzBoyFTW8/7/2017, 3:32:17 PM2 votes

What were you smoking on....?

CherryBlossom4908/8/2017, 3:03:11 AM1 votes

I agree with Mega. I like his idea of the passive better tbh. Also, he's right about his E and R being too much like Garen's Q and his ult too much like Pantheon's ult. Here are my recommendations though...

Passive: I think you should go with Mega's idea. Q: I don't think you should make his cooldown reset and deal more damage. Instead, I think he should get a 50% mana refund if he misses. W: I think this ability shouldn't deal any true damage. Maybe a form of minor crowd control like a slow. However, maybe the slow as the cc would make it too much like Kassadin's E. Just a thought. E: It's too much like a MasterYi ult. I think it could still cleanse the slow like Garen's Q and Evelynn's W, just not the immunity to slows. R (Ultimate): I think his ult should maybe form a huge spirit like sword and with a 1.5 second delay, slam the ground making a huge fissure similar toBraum's ult, knocking up enemy champs in the way and dealing physical damage. If they are at about maybe 15% health, it deals true damage.

The last issue I have is his name. I think it's way too cliched. I was thinking maybe his name should be something dark and mysterious. (because he's the black knight)

That's pretty much all the feed back I have to offer.