Do we have good lorecrafters who could help me a bit?

regonas·Sep 16, 2015·4 votes·881 views

I will go right to the point. It was pointed out that my lore writing is bad. I made some good champion concepts, but those have only an image and a kit. It would be nice if someone had time to write lore for at least one of these: Nigdoh (Rune Necromancer) Kulkin (spirit guardian support) Robin (AP marsksman) Ter (AD support) Possession Beast Sir Gram the Evil (AP marksman) Ghyzla (gravity based champion) Sizzlebot (HP and healing based champ/ possible AD support)

Thanks in advance.

Also adding Aa Gram, The living death (AD support/ AD jungle) and SALF (symbiotic artificial life form) to the list.

14 Comments

RossendaleSep 16, 20152 votes

I'm kind of decent at writing, so I could help you out. I would need a general idea of where you want to go with a specific concepts's lore, though.

regonasSep 16, 20151 votes

Thanks. So:

Nigdoh is some kind of ancient magician lived before first rune war and he managed to resurrect himself. However, he can't resurrect any of his friends or his lost love, so he should be working on gaining enough power or some magical tool to resurrect his old comrades.
Kulkin should be some kind of spirit being from Shadow Island who isn't good or evil. All he cares is balance between good and evil, so he might do good things and bad things based on who should need help: evil side or good side.
Robis should be an ancient hero who was resurrected by evil being (something like she) to spread evil around the world. He should struggle with his new evil body and thoughts, but his soul should still be good.
Ter should be a living avatar of torment and despair who knows only how to inflict pain to other of himself. He should be an artificial being made to be a god, but his maker failed and created an abomination.
Possession beast should be a being who escaped from hell and now torments all living beings gaining power from their suffering. Similar to nocturne a bit, but he want to torment his victims forever.
Sir Gram should be an highest class of devil who traveled from hell to the world of the living. He got bored from his life in hell and decided to have so fun in Runeterra. He should sound and act like he isn't evil, but he should be completely sinister. He should always offer to play a coin flip, but he should never lose.
Ghyzla should be a being made by moon goddess or with power of the moon by an ancient civilization (same one who made diana's weapon). He should more like a machine executing commands he is given and the last command was to destroy humanity.
Sizzlebot should be one of special robots who was made to serve as medic in wars, however his inventor put brains of a dead person in it allowing him to learn and have mind of his own.

I hope that helps.

RossendaleSep 16, 20152 votes

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Sizzlebot should be one of special robots who was made to serve as medic in wars, however his inventor put brains of a dead person in it allowing him to learn and have mind of his own.

Alright, let's go with this one.

First of all, we need to think more or less about the general theme of the character.

What city state is he from (aka, where did they make him)? I imagine it would most likely be either Piltover or Zaun. Looking at the picture of him that you put up, as well as his abilities and attacks, I would be betting more on Zaun.

Also, who would have made him? Would it be a completely new character, or someone we already know? Stanwick could possibly have created Sizzlebot. Hell, even Mundo would somewhat make sense.

Moreover, is it just any old brain that was used? Or maybe it was the brain of some long-gone Zaunite genius medic? Maybe the Zaunite team that worked on Sizzlebot tried to purge the brain free of all of the thoughts and neuron connections and such, but they didn't quite manage it, creating a dual-personality character where you have Sizzlebot, who is all curious and wanting to learn of the world, but then you have bits where the original scientist that the brain came from breaks through? It could be an interesting thing to work with.

regonasSep 16, 20151 votes

Yea, he should be from Zaun. He could be made by several scientists, some who worked on recreating Zac and some who worked under another scientist. Someone who worked under Mundo would make sense, because of ability to use different drugs.

In addition, brains could be of some dead mad scientist or some kind of criminal. Who made him maybe thought that it doesn't matter what kind of brain they use, but it mattered. Some of his old thoughts remained causing him to mix different drugs and experiment on his enemies and allies alike.

Does that helps?

RossendaleSep 16, 20152 votes

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Yea, he should be from Zaun. He could be made by several scientists, some who worked on recreating Zac and some who worked under another scientist. Someone who worked under Mundo would make sense, because of ability to use different drugs.

In addition, brains could be of some dead mad scientist or some kind of criminal. Who made him maybe thought that it doesn't matter what kind of brain they use, but it mattered. Some of his old thoughts remained causing him to mix different drugs and experiment on his enemies and allies alike.

Does that helps?

More or less, yeah. I need to sleep now, but I'll brainstorm ideas and should be able to get back to you tomorrow.

Demacian SaintSep 17, 20151 votes

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Kulkin should be some kind of spirit being from Shadow Island who isn't good or evil. All he cares is balance between good and evil, so he might do good things and bad things based on who should need help: evil side or good side.

I'll try writing one for Kulkin.

Kulkin was once human. Not much is known about his life. The only thing he remembers is that he went on an expedition to document the changes of the landscape that became the Shadow Isles. He was soon consumed by a spirit, which inhabited and attempted to control his body. His soul, however, battled for control against this spirit, until one day, his soul merged with the spirit. His nature of good merged with the spirit of evil, and created the being known as Kulkin, Nature's Balancer. He lost his physical form but gained an ethereal one to replace it soon after the merge. He now floats from location to location, seeking to fix what he sees as imbalance between the forces of good and evil, as it is the only way to keep his soul and the evil spirit from destroying each other and thereby destroy him. His actions matter not to him, but to his desire to keep the balance in check. This is the reason he joined the Institute of War. The constant swaying of good and evil within the ever expanding champion roster attracted him their, and is now his mission to even out the two forces as a champion of balance.

regonasSep 17, 20151 votes

Not bad. Quite good actually.

regonasSep 16, 20151 votes

Added another one to the list. It might be a bit ignored one, but still might be good.

Aa Gram should be a tool of grim reaper and a living avatar of death. However, before becoming this being he should have been a loving husband and a good father. But, because of sudden illness of his daughter he made a pact with the death: life of his kid for his eternal enslavement. Now he is forced to hunt those who should be long dead and send them to their graves- now he is a hunter of undead and immortals.

SALF should be an experiment gone horribly horrible wrong like scientist (something like Victor) tried to toy with artificial superhuman and demigod cells. Instead of getting perfect living organism he got a mutated symbiotic parasite. Parasite managed to get inside of the body of some lab worked and transformed it in his own image permanently fusing into one being. Now this mutant is looking for other people to fuse with and evolve even more. And by saying evolve i mean mutate into even more dangerous being.

MoloMan8DSep 16, 20151 votes

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Added another one to the list. It might be a bit ignored one, but still might be good.

Aa Gram should be a tool of grim reaper and a living avatar of death. However, before becoming this being he should have been a loving husband and a good father. But, because of sudden illness of his daughter he made a pact with the death: life of his kid for his eternal enslavement. Now he is forced to hunt those who should be long dead and send them to their graves- now he is a hunter of undead and immortals.

Umm.... Kindred? The eternal hunters? They are death first of all. Look at the teaser "all things must meet this man bla bla" and also they hunt people that should be dead and kill them sooo.... nice idea but its the new champion. :3

regonasSep 16, 20151 votes

Oh, i was kinda too late.

MoloMan8DSep 16, 20152 votes

About Zizzlebot. Why not make Victor create him? He's trying to evolve the human race why not make him try to create a human in a robots body with only it's brain left? Another note, Is he evil? Because he seems to be a support so he could as I said before, be a good guy. A doctor trying to make Zaun a better place by helping the people in need. But while helping a family that are being chased by some bandits he gets blown up and then wakes up inside of a robot and relaises that Victor has put him back together. He flees from his lab and goes into Zaun again to help heal the people there with his newfound powers. Just an idea I had that sounds fun and also not that generic. His splash could be him giving a child a flower and he just looks completely disgusting but he isn't evil. It's kind of a don't judge a book by it's cover character.

regonasSep 16, 20151 votes

Thanks for reply. Your idea could also work.

RossendaleSep 17, 20151 votes

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About Zizzlebot. Why not make Victor create him? He's trying to evolve the human race why not make him try to create a human in a robots body with only it's brain left? Another note, Is he evil? Because he seems to be a support so he could as I said before, be a good guy. A doctor trying to make Zaun a better place by helping the people in need. But while helping a family that are being chased by some bandits he gets blown up and then wakes up inside of a robot and relaises that Victor has put him back together. He flees from his lab and goes into Zaun again to help heal the people there with his newfound powers. Just an idea I had that sounds fun and also not that generic. His splash could be him giving a child a flower and he just looks completely disgusting but he isn't evil. It's kind of a don't judge a book by it's cover character.

That's actually pretty decent. I was brainstorming some ideas, but this could certainly be worked off of. A good-hearted doctor that got killed in an accident and rebuilt by Viktor, but ended up escaping.

If you don't mind, I might work off of that.

By the way, sorry for not posting at all today. I had stuff to do >.>. I should be pretty free during the weekend though.

MoloMan8DSep 17, 20151 votes

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That's actually pretty decent. I was brainstorming some ideas, but this could certainly be worked off of. A good-hearted doctor that got killed in an accident and rebuilt by Viktor, but ended up escaping.

If you don't mind, I might work off of that.

By the way, sorry for not posting at all today. I had stuff to do >.>. I should be pretty free during the weekend though.

Ofc! I just love Viktors whole concept and it's never really been used so that's sad. A character that is created by Viktor sounds so cool so please do your best! Viktor