[Champion Concept] Excyz, The Hextech Trooper (marksman support)

regonas··2 votes·1,058 views
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Attack range: 555

Passive: Hextech Bullets: your basic attacks deal 2/4/6/8/10/12 (+20% of AP) bonus magic damage and heal you for 50% of this bonus damage.

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Power Pulse [q] Your next basic attack will deal 35/60/85/110/135 (+45% of AP) bonus magic damage and stun your target for 1.2 sec. Cooldown: 16/15/14/13/12 sec Mana cost: 50

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Hextech Barrier [w] Create a shield on friendly target to absorb up to 100/140/180/220/260 (+70% of AP) damage over 4 sec. If used on yourself, then shield strength will be reduced by 50%. Cooldown: 10 sec Mana cost: 70 Range: 400

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Reload and Go [e] Passive: this ability is automatically triggered when you are about to die.

Active: increase attack speed by 20/30/40/50/60% and movement speed by 10/12/14/16/18% of anybody around you for 3 sec. In addition, cause you to become invulnerable for 1 sec. Cooldown: 20/18/16/14/12 sec Mana cost: 65 Range: 460

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Tactical Supplies [r] Leave small bag of supplies in targeted area. Friendly champion can pick it up to be healed for 100/200/300 (+35% of your AP) health and get their attack damage increased by 20/30/40 for 4 sec. Enemies champion can destroy your supplies by standing on them for 3 sec. Up to 5/6/7 bags of supplies can be placed around the map. Max number of charges: 2 Recharge time of one charge: 30/27/24 sec Mana cost: 100 Range: 300

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12 Comments

antymattar3 votes

There really is nothing unique about him. His passive is very bland and unfair. It gives him a boost to damage AND massive sustain, it really is not a good idea to combine the two unless there is some obvious drawback. Q is basically twisted fates stun card, W seems to not fit at all. He is a soldier, his passive and Q are about muredering the fuck out of someone, why would he shield people? E is extremely op on someone like him. Fiora also has an invoulnerability ability, but she has to stand still to use it and cant do anything else. This just is like a mini kayle ult combined with warwicks W. Ult is literally bard's healing shrine.

Final verdict is that it's not very original, sorry. When designing a champ, try to make it something very unique in the game that has not been seen before, as everything else will look, regardless of theme(at least most of the time) like just a mashup of other champions.

I suggest reading up on riots design philosophy and on anti-fun as well as their champion design principles. It really helps get an idea. Also, just in general, read up on design or look to some youtubers like Stonewall008's analysis of champions. It really helps.

regonas2 votes

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K. One thing, though:

  1. Passive sustain: 6 (+10% of AP)
  2. He is front line soldier, so it is natural for him to defend the back line, so there is W.
  3. Fiora's invulnerability does damage, slow and reflects CC.
  4. Bard shrines increase movement speed and there can be fewer of them in the map. You have walk over it to get the effect. His R have to be clicked on to work, increase AD and there can be more supplies in the map.

I wasn't aiming for 100% unique champion, because those usually have one of two flaws:

  1. Could never be implemented in the game OR
  2. Isn't actually unique

Don't forget that waht might be unfun to you, could be extremely fun to me, so you can't say that something is 100% unfun.

Also, you can clearly see that i didn't put a lot of work into it, because this champ is just a small idea of marksman support. If it becomes popular, then i redesign it into something much better (but it seems that it won't become popular).

antymattar3 votes

Passive 6+10% ap is a lot. That's basically irelias sustain but scales more and more as the player gets more items. His role is determinable by how players want to play him. He looks like he could easily go as a hybrid Marksman. W would most likely be used as a shield to win trades in lane. Always think of the ways that things can be abused in game, because they will. While im sure you think he will be a strange semi marksman frontliner hybrid thing, he looks like he can be abused into being a toplane menace. Poke with Q, shield with W, free stats and invincibility with E and massive sustain with R. He would be the nightmare of toplane that nobody would want to play against. Plus, the guy has very few weaknesses. He has damage, he is ranged(or so I assume) so he has poke with his Q and W that allows him to win trades, he has a steroid that not only gives movement speed but also invulnerability with his E and he has sustain with his passive and R. He really has everything, which is not a fun thing to play against(no counterplay). You must always consider what it would be like to play against your champions. If it's anti-fun(riot term, theres some good reads on that) then it probably is not done right.

Also, posting ideas that "dont have a lot of work" put into them is not a good idea and not a good excuse. If you posted it, you are responsible for it. It floods the board with incomplete ideas and just overall makes it harder to navigate. Please try to not do that.

regonas2 votes

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Well, you can always compare things.

His 6 (+10% of AP) self healing with each attack VS Xin Zhao 50 (+ 70% of AP) self healing every 3rd attack. His stun which can be blocked VS Jax stun which can not be blocked. His shield which is 50% when used on yourself VS Lulu's shield which work full force on her. His E invulnerability VS Fiora's invulnerability, CC reflect, damage and slow. His sustain through R VS Yorick's sustain though his non-ulty ability.

I mean that he is no way perfect and i didn't spent +20 hours to perfect his kit. This champ is just an idea i got and i posted it before i forgot about it. Not every champ must have +20 hours behind it. Riot never reviews champion concepts, so there is no need for every concept to be perfect.

antymattar3 votes

You seem to want to defend a flawed concept while completely disregarding any actual criticism. There IS a need for concepts to be perfect. The reason that no Dev ever comes here is because of the massive amount of garbage posts, incomplete concepts, bad ideas and down right cringe-worthy posts about anime characters, deities and frankenmashes turned into champions. You are not here for the devs, you are here for everyone. Do not pollute.

You yourself admited that the concept is not complete and not completely thought out, yet you decide to defend it as though it were not.

And yes, things can be compared, that's why I compared them and I realized that they were too similar. Q is LITERALLY TF's STUN card. How can it be blocked if it's an autoattack?? You just forgot how your own design worked... The problem with E isn't invulnerability, the problem with E is that it's literally Warwick's E plus invulnerability and movement speed. What's the point of posting a champion for critique if you can't handle being criticized? The reason you want people to review these is to get better at making champions.

regonas2 votes

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So, how many perfect concept have you made? Have anyone ever made a perfect concept?

And devs never comes here because they don't value the work of usual people. Not because someone is posting awesome anime stuff.

And i give facts. If you treat that as a defense, then so be it.

On how basic attack can be blocked? Well, here is few examples: Braum Jax MasterYi Quinn Teemo MonkeyKing Yasuo -- walls, counters, blinds, clones and i am sure i missed some other ways to block basic attacks.

What you post is not criticism. It is a form of attack disregarding all my explanations and sticking with our own biased opinion. If you dislike something, but disregard simple facts, then you aren't criticizing -- you simply hating.

And that part about the reason is false.

antymattar3 votes

Yeah, with that attitude... whatever man. Don't expect people to be kept interested in your threads if you wana just diss everyone who doesnt just straight up tell you that you are the best.

regonas2 votes

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Yeah, with that attitude... whatever man. Don't expect people to be kept interested in your threads if you wana just diss everyone who doesnt just straight up tell you that you are the best.

I accept and value criticism, change stuff is people gives fair point on what is wrong. You just simply hating here. Don't expect people take you seriously or care what you say if simply go into threads and hate on stuff. Bye.

xfeNNie1 votes

Bad... Nothing unique and the abilities are just simple there is no fun in them...

regonas2 votes

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Bad... Nothing unique and the abilities are just simple there is no fun in them...

Who other have range stun like Q? Who other have buff and emergency invulnerability like E? Who else can set up supplies to boost AD and heal? Who else is AP marksman support?

Vorazun1 votes

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Who other have range stun like Q? Who other have buff and emergency invulnerability like E? Who else can set up supplies to boost AD and heal? Who else is AP marksman support?

Those qualities you describe...and the kit...that just makes you support that can AA... Why should I pick this guy as marksman instead of support?

xfeNNie1 votes

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Who other have range stun like Q?

Same as Tf but more op.. since actually u dont have to wait to lock it like tf card...

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