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[Champion Concept] Remmus, the Mirror's Echo

LuaDotExe·10/10/2016, 8:12:29 PM·1 votes·901 views

Ah yes. Remmus Rem. Rem is designed to specialize in macro, with his holographic clone. Essentially, his thematic is holograms of things, specializing in things from the past; hence A Wound to Remember's name and effect. His E, Holo-Switch, is designed to have lots of utility, being able to be used aggressively or defensively; however, it has a lengthy cooldown, similar to the thematic of Hard Light Bridge. And yes, that's a little poke at Portal. Although he's aimed at being a support, I can see him going anywhere-- except mid. Mid is a no-go. Oh, and yes, full AD Rem WOULD probably be a thing with that Q damage. Trinity Force <3

EDIT: Renamed to "Rem."

Remmus Rem The Mirror’s Echo Support/Tank

[P] Echo in the Mirror Rem has a hologram of himself that follows him around. 20% of the damage he takes is redirected to the hologram. While below 10% of his maximum health, this damage reduction is halved, but it still takes just as much damage. If the hologram dies, this is placed on a 40 second cooldown. The clone is controllable. Edit: all of its stats are zero, except its movement speed and health, which is 60% of Rem's. The clone does not apply on-hit effects.

[Q] A Wound to Remember 16/15/14/13/12 second cooldown Rem’ next attack marks the target for 5 seconds. Attacks from Rem during this time deal additional physical damage equal to 15/17.5/20/22.5/25% of the damage the original attack dealt. If an ally attacks this target, they deal bonus damage equal to half of this bonus, slowing them by 15/20/25/30/35% for 1 second. This deals 50% increased damage against minions and monsters.

[W] Hard Light Bridge 18 second cooldown Rem creates a bridge over the targeted terrain, allowing it to become passable. Units gain 20/25/30/35/40 movement speed while on the bridge. After 2 seconds, he can reactivate this, removing it. Enemies caught on the bridge while it disintegrates take 80/90/100/110/120(+8% HP) physical damage. If an ally is caught on the bridge while it vanishes, they are slowed by 50% for 1 second.The bridge lasts up to 6 seconds.

[E] Holo-Switch 20 second cooldown Actively, Rem switches place with his clone, applying a rapidly decaying slow to him, starting at 40% and lasting for 1.5 seconds. The clone taunts nearby enemies for 1 second after switching.

[R] Mimic Reciprocate 120/100/80 second cooldown Rem turns his clone into a clone of himself or a target allied champion for 10 seconds, or until it or Rem is killed. The clone mimics their stats, and deals 60% reduced damage, while having 60% as much health. Edit: Renamed to Reciprocate

10 Comments

Rook Loux10/10/2016, 8:59:35 PM1 votes

-e +a Rammus ok

Ninja Baby one10/10/2016, 8:59:47 PM1 votes

Okay, two things. First, Don't call him Remmus. It's WAY too close to Rammus and the name shouldn't be the same as an already excisting champion. There are few 'rules' about naming champions in this game. This is one of them. Second, a permanent clone that can only be controlled by Alt-controlling and which seemingly can go wherever you want doesn't work with the way the game is played. Controlling the clone would suck, so bad.

KillAMoose10/10/2016, 11:59:52 PM1 votes

Quick criticism:

  1. Mirrors don't have echoes, they have reflections. Echoes refer to sound.

  2. Thematically, this champ's kit doesn't fit a support champion. I mean, he has no hard CC abilities-- or CC at all. And as I understand, that's something that support champs absolutely must have to do their job effectively. In fact, the way his kit is set up strikes me more as an AP assassin than anything. He has abilities that allow him to dive in, burst down the squishy backline, and get out by swapping places with his clone. He is not unlike Zed, or Leblanc in that regard.

So, mid lane would probably be the best place for him as he is now.

  1. Remmus is way too close to Rammus-- but you know that already.
figold66610/11/2016, 12:59:45 AM1 votes

I see a lot of similarities to other champs.

Name= Rammus

Passive= LeBlanc Passive

Q and W are pretty original

E= Urgot Ult

R= Name is same as LeBlanc ult, active is really similar to Morde ult.

LuaDotExe10/11/2016, 8:09:36 PM1 votes

Thanks for the feedback, everyone; I've made edits. Including a name change. Meaning I shortened it to "Rem" :P

To FIGOLD666; although it's similar to Morde ult, I'd see it as more similar to old Yorick's ult, as it's an ally/self cast and not an enemy cast, and the clone does damage. Additionally, it doesn't require death. Oh, and I renamed it to Reciprocate. I see what you mean on the Urgot ulti part, by the way, although it's to the clone, and not to an enemy.

To KillAMoose; scalings, friend. His only damaging scaling is his Hard-Light Bridge. Additionally, I know that a reflection is referring to mirrors; I thought that "echo" would sound better. Additionally, it's a reference to the song "ECHO."

To Ninja Baby One; I s'pose it would, although DOTA and HOTS managed to pull off macro like this. I don't see why LoL players can't; plus, the rest of his kit doesn't require as much skill as the macro part-- a lot less, in fact.