Nifarea (support concept) The soul shepard

Bultz·3/13/2017, 4:20:39 AM·7 votes·764 views

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Edit SInce the shepherd of souls is Yorick, a new title would have to be given.

(Not my artwork, couldn't find artist)

Passive: The return

Slows opponents attack and movement speed continuously the longer the fight continues up to 75%

Q: Black veil

Turns an ally invisible for a few seconds

W: Helping hand

Sends her hands at an opponent or ally, grabs them and allows her to throw them in any direction or drag them if they are an enemy or shields them if they are an ally.

E: Celestial prayer

her arms clap, charge, and fire rings at opponents, stunning them.

R: Astro punch

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she can punch the life out of a champion, meaning when she punches someone, they leave their body and enter a protoplasmic form. For opponents it knocks them back and out of their body, having their body slowly draining their life force away until they reenter it, or they are killed.

If used on an ally, it allows them to leave their body and run, being invisible. They will lose half their current hp, but wont die even if their body does, giving them 6 seconds of invisibility to run before becoming corporeal again.

3 Comments

lCantPauseltMom3/13/2017, 4:29:07 AM1 votes

I will say that your abilities do need some more depth to them, a little more information telling us what they're about. The ultimate is a really cool concept though, I like it! I wont up or downvote, but you can definitely add more detail to it and show us what this champion is all about! NIce artwork too - if it isnt yours, do give the creator of the artwork a mention just in case :)

Chembaron Yamada3/13/2017, 1:43:48 PM1 votes

Champion design: Where did you get that picture from? Is it your own work? ^^ I really like it, having that mummy feel but not too much in the direction of Amumu and the extra hands for fighting are pretty unique. Only constructive feedback here: Change the title. It is too close to Yorick (the shephard of souls).

Kit design: Passive: A bit strong in my opinion. Reducing the attack speed from opponents just by your presence is not really fair. Maybe you could change that. Q: Simple ability, pretty good and solid. W: How does it work? Is it a skillshot? Is it point&click? I think it should be a skillshot, because having a point&click ability to throw the enemy in every direction you want is very versatile and probably too strong. E: You really have to describe the skills a bit further. It says it shoots rings... which way? Fan shape? Line? Or do you mean it is omnidirectional from your champ so all enemies in the area get stunned without any way to dodge it? R: Best skill in the kit and great concept. There definitely should be an indicator showing the enemy that the target has left his body if you are using it on one of your allies. I am a bit worried, because it is so versatile again, but I don't now if it's too much and I like the concept.

Facit: I like the champion idea and having an invisibility support is unique and surely fun. Your kit could use some tuning and further development, though. ^^