Would this passive be broken? (pls help)

SilverAthiest··1 votes·399 views

I'm trying to brainstorm for a new champion's kit and I thought of the perfect passive.

Passive- When ____ auto-attacks an enemy champion, a Void Wound mark is applied. Void Wound- A mark that can be stacked up to 5 times, where each stack lowers the target's armor by 1. The 5th stack consumes the wounds slowing the target by 75% for 2 seconds. (4 second cooldown)

Any tips or suggestions? Would this passive need a nerf or buff? Pls help

6 Comments

Sona Ping1 votes

Melee right?

Shouldn't be broken. Right now, it's like a worse not as good as Braum's passive, so there should not be a problem.

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SilverAthiest1 votes

DAMN I knew there'd be a champion with a similar passive that I wasn't familiar with. Yeah, this champion is melee, I'm thinking he'd be built like talon+yi? more-so like yi.

Sona Ping1 votes

"I'm thinking he'd be built like talon+yi? more-so like yi." You could try to do something new, but If you are thinking of making the champion "in the mold" of one of them, then you should choose one. Talon is an Assassin while Master Yi is a Melee AD Carry; They don't build the same items, and when they do, it's not for the same reasons. They are very different champions from each other, regardless of what Riot's champion line up says.

I'm not really into this "design your own champion" thing, but I can add feedback on the passive for you on this, if you would like. (I don't know if you want to go at this alone, so that it will be entirely your idea, whatever it is if you would create.)

SilverAthiest1 votes

It's nothing more than good fun in my spare time. I've had an idea for this champion in my head for the past few days and finally have decided to put it on paper. And my apologies on not elaborating earlier. I pictured this champion having a similar play-style as yi, where he relies heavily on his auto's, and the ability to assassinate single targets much like talon. Talon may had been a bad example, though. More so like old fiora, the duelist feel. Does that make sense? This isn't that serious, I was just thinking of writing a kit and doing some splash art in my spare time, and so I thank you for the help. I'll be sure ask you about the abilities when I'm finished. Thank you again for the help. Much appreciated

Filthy Wook1 votes

I think it needs a nerf and a buff, I think that the effect on hit should be increased, cause 1 armor isn't that much in my opinion, maybe your champion gains attack speed each hit, and i think that it should be like a 50% slow for a longer duration, to synergize with having to hit 5 times, a longer slow would benefit them more, and make more sense in the kit itself.

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