[My Champion Version] Omen, The Dream Eater (stealth tank/assassin)

regonas··11 votes·3,288 views
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Where did he came from? He is from dream realm. He is born out of dreams of traitors, thieves and liars. He managed to to escape the world of dreams and enter Runeterra through the final dream of dying magician.

Who he is? He is dream being. However, because he left dream realm he can't go back to where he came from. His origin is similar to Nocturne's, so you could say that they are relatives.

What do he want? Runetarra is nothing like the dream realm. This new world offers him so much, yet he still misses some of his kind he left in dream realm, so he wishes to open the gate between two world for all dream beings to invade Runeterra.

Is he evil? Not exactly. He is dream being, so he is without morality or common sense. All he does is normal and perfectly fine to him. He doesn't know the difference between good and evil, so he is neither.

Why did he became a champion? He wants to learn how Nocturne entered Runeterra and do the same for other dream beings.

Friends: Elise Nocturne Syndra Thresh Malzahar Enemies: Bard Soraka Lucian Vayne

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COMBAT

Attack range: 155

Passive: Dream Eater: basic attacks on enemies who are suffering from any disable effect will cause 10/15/20/25/30/35 (+2 per level) bonus magic damage and heal you for 50% of damage done by this effect. In addition, all your disable effect on jungle monsters lasts 50/60/70/80/90/100% longer.

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Bad Night [q] Passive: your basic attacks will heal you for 5/10/15/20/25 (+15% of your armor) (+1% of your max health) health.

Active: slowly meld into shadows over 1 sec (extended to 4 sec while suffering damage) and become invisible for 3 sec. While invisible you move 10/14/18/22/26% faster and exiting stealth cause nearby enemies to run in fear for 1 sec. Cooldown: 14 sec Mana cost: 55 Range of fear: 285

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Mind Impaling Spikes [w] Launch volley of spikes in a cone (5 spikes). Each spike deals 50/80/110/140/170 (+70% of attack damage) physical damage. If enemy is damaged by more than one spike, then total damage taken by this ability can't exceed 120/180/240/300/360 (+150% of attack damage) physical damage. If used while invisible, this ability will not reveal you, but deal 50% less damage. In addition, if you hit any enemy champion, then your magic resist will be increased by 20% for 2 sec. Cooldown: 8 sec Mana cost: 90 Range: 650 End Width: 440 Casting time: 0,2 sec

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Nasty Pounce [e] Pounce into targeted direction dealing physical damage equal to 3/4/5/6/7% (+1% per 20 attack damage) of max health of enemy hit (can pounce over the walls). If you hit an enemy champion, then stop at his/her location and stun him/her for 1,5 sec. Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8 sec Mana cost: 55/60/65/70/75 Range: 450 Casting time: 0,45 sec

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Dream Ravager [r] Passive: while invisible or inside of bush you gain 30/35/40% bonus magic resist. In addition, becoming invisible will reveal all other nearby invisible targets (but only to you). Range: 320

Active: ravage a targeted enemy for 90/140/190 (+100% of attack damage) physical damage and reduce his/her vision range by 50% for 1,5 sec. Deal 75% more damage to jungle monsters and stun hit jungle monster for 1,5/ 2/ 2,5 sec. If used while invisible, this ability will not reveal you, but deals no damage and reduces your target's vision range by 75% for 2,5 sec. Number of uses: 3 Global cooldown: 1,5 sec (how fast can you use build up uses) Recharge time of one use: 28/26/24 sec Mana cost: 75 Range: 300

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  1. item 3117 item 1039 item 3074 item 3072 item 3142 item 3742
  2. item 3006 item 1039 item 3153 item 3074 item 3742 item 3065
  3. item 3047 item 1039 item 3153 item 3742 item 3068 item 3143
  4. item 3047 item 3153 item 3748 item 3742 item 3068 item 3065

28 Comments

Simplicate2 votes

A stealth tank assassin.....no. On top of that he has sustain and can use abilities and remained stealth wtf man. CetainlyT could probably make this happen tho, all his shit is broken.

regonas1 votes

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A stealth tank assassin.....no. On top of that he has sustain and can use abilities and remained stealth wtf man. CetainlyT could probably make this happen tho, all his shit is broken.

It is assassin or tank. Building both wouldn't be very good. It can go Armor+HP tank or AD assassin. His abilities in stealth deals way less damage (ulty does no damage in stealth). I done math for numbers and he would be about Shaco level.

jmaishere2 votes

E is much too strong for an 8 sec cd with no cdr

regonas1 votes

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E is much too strong for an 8 sec cd with no cdr

Well, it do good damage only with high amount of attack damage and have casting time of 0,45 sec.

Karn Bot2 votes

No idea why you would build anything except tank + attack speed considering that with max q, 200 armor and 3k hp you would be healing 85hp per attack and if you get to a 1.5as you get 127hp per second... this is before lifesteal even comes into the picture. Add that to being a tank and the concpet having a good amount of HARD cc means that this is going to be gross. Also there is a reason that tanks don't mix with stealth... kibda counter intuitive to what a tank is supposed to do

regonas1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Karn Bot,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=UWpcbgWA,comment-id=0005,timestamp=2015-10-13T15:44:40.600+0000)

No idea why you would build anything except tank + attack speed considering that with max q, 200 armor and 3k hp you would be healing 85hp per attack and if you get to a 1.5as you get 127hp per second... this is before lifesteal even comes into the picture. Add that to being a tank and the concpet having a good amount of HARD cc means that this is going to be gross. Also there is a reason that tanks don't mix with stealth... kibda counter intuitive to what a tank is supposed to do

Well, keep in mind that most of his kit is strengthen by AD, so building tank+attack one of two ways to build him. You can go either sustain and off-tank or go assassin. Q - cc can be activated only once by exiting stealth, so it's an engage tool, but it is more important for assassin build. E - have casting time, so enemies can avoid it, and it deals very low damage without AD items. While tank build is perfectly viable, it is not the only build for him.

And, as you said, we have no tank with stealth in the game, maybe we need one just like this.

Noctius282 votes

ok let me get this in a list

Innate lifesteal Innate heal based on % hp and armor Stealth with bonus movement speed AOE Fear AOE stackable attack that scales of ad that does not disrupt stealth and augments mr dash with % MAX health damage and stun % Bonus mr Innate sweeper with no cooldown Spammable ulti that reduces sight radius and does not disrupt stealth...

Yeah you are right, that IS a nightmare...

Well congrats, you created a champion capable of having more utility then Thresh, with the mobility of Tristana, the damage of a fed Vayne, more sustain then pre gutted Aatrox and more tankyness then Garen...

I COULD be constructive but I don't have enough free days to point out how much this goes over ANY power budget ever developed by Rito

regonas2 votes

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That's your opinion and you can stick with it. Everyone can have their opinions. However:

  1. His passive isn't life steal, so it doesn't benefit from higher AD
  2. His healing based on armor and max HP is what allows him to build tank
  3. Well yea, we have Twitch with stealth+speed, we have Evelynn with nearly permanent stealth and Rengar with strongest stealth mechanics in the game.
  4. Tanks needs some for of CC and enemies exiting stealth almost always cause you a mini-heart attack.
  5. His sweeper have cooldown and you have to get closer to be able too see invisible targets, his sweeper have range.
  6. His ulty used in stealth does no damage, so you would be trading damage for higher reduction to vision range.
  7. All his abilities who do not disrupt stealth is somehow weakened while in stealth.
  8. If he is build AD, then don't be surprised that he does much damage. If he is build tank, then don't be surprised that he is tanky.
Skypual2 votes

You know why Riot dumped Omen? because it didn't bring hype, even now, when I look at Omen I don't get a feeling like damn that champion looks cool I'd like to play it. NO he just looks like a minion from Black Market Brawlers,

regonas1 votes

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You know why Riot dumped Omen? because it didn't bring hype, even now, when I look at Omen I don't get a feeling like damn that champion looks cool I'd like to play it. NO he just looks like a minion from Black Market Brawlers,

Well, i can't speak about all LoL players, but for me personally a lot of recent champions doesn't like "that champion looks cool I'd like to play it": Bard Braum Ekko Gnar Kalista Jinx Nami Lissandra Lucian Quinn Sion RekSai Velkoz Yasuo Thresh

So, maybe they will bring back omen if a lot of people will want it to be back.

Axis the Dragon3 votes

maybe they will bring back omen if a lot of people will want it to be back

See, that's the problem - not enough people want it back. Omen looks like a critter, not an intelligent Champion. Take Rek'Sai, for example. She's a creature too, but she exudes intelligence. Kog'Maw is a lot dumber, but he's endearing. Omen is just... meh.

regonas1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Axis the Dragon,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=UWpcbgWA,comment-id=000800000000,timestamp=2015-10-13T19:48:40.755+0000)

See, that's the problem - not enough people want it back. Omen looks like a critter, not an intelligent Champion. Take Rek'Sai, for example. She's a creature too, but she exudes intelligence. Kog'Maw is a lot dumber, but he's endearing. Omen is just... meh.

To be fair, Rek'Sai is least intelligent of all champions in league and should be classified as an animal.

BlackSunNocturne2 votes

I'd say RekSai is, in Dungeons & Dragons terms, a Magical Beast with an intelligence of 4. Not completely animalistic (2 Int), but not human-level (8-9 Int).

Rek'sai isn't smart by any stretch, but her lore makes her seem very clever.

GreenLore1 votes

Overall the thing is that Omen didn't really have a solid theme to him. He was like this uh creature with spikes on his back and thats kinda all.

The champs you listed above all have clear themes to them,sometimes even multiple ones(shinto god,shieldguard/strongman,timetraveler/street punk,caveman/hulk,vengeful spirit,gunfreak,etc.)that make them stand out already,but Omen doesn't. You make him a dream creature,but that pretty much just makes him a different nocturne,who is a nightmare. (and i think a dream eater could have some more unique aspects,like putting enemies to sleep.Your kit has abilities that don't relate to dreams at all)

regonas1 votes

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Well, as far as i know, riot doesn't want to add sleep mechanic to LoL, so i had to work around that. Also, why something from the same place where nocturne came is a bad thing? Look how many champions are from same place, but only nocturne came from dream realm. I think what i done is pretty unique: it opens doors for Omen to become a real champion, it allows more champions from dream realm to be made and it opens new location in LoL lore.

GreenLore1 votes

The thing is that Omen simply looks like he is just another nightmare. There is nothing wrong with champs being from the same place,but if they pretty much are the same thing then it becomes bad. I mean Garen is a knight,JarvanIV is a prince/dragoon,XinZhao is a chinese warrior,Lux is a light mage,etc. Omen however just comes off as a nightmarish dream eater,which simply is too close to nocturne.

Sure you say Omen is a dream eater,but in the end that isn't conveyed through his abilities,which could be slapped on him regardless of what he actually is(all those abilities would still make sense even if he was just a random monster). And well originally Riot didn't want to include abilities that could CC your teammates,yet we've got Kalista Bard & TahmKench.Times change and so do Riots design policy and currently they are going more for individuality.

Skypual1 votes

Well you just listed champions which are most fun to play. Around 90% of community finds them fun to play.

Axis the Dragon2 votes

I'd change a few of the kit names

"Bad Night" sounds kind of... childish? If that makes sense?

How about "Silent Night"?

"Mind-Impaling Spikes" -> "Shadow Thorns"

"Bad Pounce" -> "Nightmare Latch"

regonas1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Axis the Dragon,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=UWpcbgWA,comment-id=0009,timestamp=2015-10-13T18:56:08.077+0000)

I'd change a few of the kit names

"Bad Night" sounds kind of... childish? If that makes sense?

How about "Silent Night"?

"Mind-Impaling Spikes" -> "Shadow Thorns"

"Bad Pounce" -> "Nightmare Latch"

It's "Nasty Pounce". Also, i like names i given it. You are welcome to make a concept with names you suggested.

Axis the Dragon2 votes

Lol my bad, I was thinking of the Q name

And nah I'm good, Omen never really struck me as an inspiring Champion concept, so I never really felt compelled to make a kit. I'm just a stickler for words in general. I used to be an English tutor, so forgive me for sticking my nose into it. xD

Tartoken1 votes

Im loving this champ concept, looking great already. May need a bit of work on expanding the lore, but other than that, everything looks good to me. Hope Riot revives this champ. Upvoted!

regonas1 votes

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Thanks, man. He look like he could be a fun champ. Also, it would be nice to have more non-humanoid champs.

Mallory3301 votes

Ummmmm, he was already gonna be a champ. Gj finding the pic on gbay99's youtube channel tho.

regonas2 votes

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Ummmmm, he was already gonna be a champ. Gj finding the pic on gbay99's youtube channel tho.

As far as i know he was canceled.

Fowus1 votes

I hope you know that the pic wasn't just off gbay's youtube channel

KnighRrider1 votes

Its cute but we have TOO MANY TANK /ASSASSINS RIGHT NOW DX

regonas1 votes

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Its cute but we have TOO MANY TANK /ASSASSINS RIGHT NOW DX

So, who we need right now then?

Killstrado1 votes

Add a fifth poll option because I think he looks down right beautiful, kit sounds pretty cool too

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