I challenge you, concept creators, to make the most well designed, breathtaking and simply the best champion concept you can make.
1 concept per person. No prizes or ranking, just a fun challenge.
P.S. i personally review and upvote all concepts you guys submit.
Lord Acacius2 votesFire Mage/ Fighter
Passive, abilities leave behind a path of fire or "ember" (based on the ability's path) that empowers the champion with bonus offensive or defensive stats (like bonus AP, Attack Speed, Penetration, etc.)
Q: Creates a zone that slows and deals damage to enemies, most likely a radius ability that covers a medium-sized area.
W: On-hit basic attack modifier that causes the target to be dealt DoT and leave behind a path of "ember". Additionally, basic attacks deal bonus AP. The cooldown of this ability is reduced if the champion auto-attacks a target while on "ember".
E: A dash that damages a medium sized area (much like Shyvana's ultimate, doesn't pull enemies). "Ember" is left behind the path that champion travels.
R: Awakens all active "ember" to deal burst damage and subsides to a DoT that damages enemies that stand within the "ember".
Main Weakness: If not standing within "ember", the champion's combat abilities are greatly reduced.
Main Strength: If the champion fights while on "ember", he/she is considerably stronger than other champions. Also, this champion provides lots of AoE damage, making it useful during teamfights.
regonas1 votes[{quoted}](name=Lord Acacius,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=TOZEWV0O,comment-id=0000,timestamp=2015-11-21T21:12:23.626+0000)
Passive, abilities leave behind a path of fire or "ember" (based on the ability's path) that empowers the champion with bonus offensive or defensive stats (like bonus AP, Attack Speed, Penetration, etc.)
~~ ~~ Plain and simple. Good for positioning. However, will strongly depend on number balance. Numbers must be not too high and not too low. Better lower than higher.
Q: Creates a zone that slows and deals damage to enemies, most likely a radius ability that covers a medium-sized area.
~~ ~~ Good. But how it will work with passive? Does it cover on radius of this ability? If yes, then ok. Will instantly appear or will it expand over time?
W: On-hit basic attack modifier that causes the target to be dealt DoT and leave behind a path of "ember". Additionally, basic attacks deal bonus AP. The cooldown of this ability is reduced if the champion auto-attacks a target while on "ember".
~~ ~~ Not bad. Will also be very depended on numbers. Is there a limit how many times you can dot enemies or is just a single hit buff? If it is a single hit, then consider making it AOE.
E: A dash that damages a medium sized area (much like Shyvana's ultimate, doesn't pull enemies). "Ember" is left behind the path that champion travels.
~~ ~~ Not bad. It should somehow interact with Q, though. For example refresh Q if you dash into or through it.
R: Awakens all active "ember" to deal burst damage and subsides to a DoT that damages enemies that stand within the "ember".
~~ ~~ Might be too OP. If multiple ember can damage single enemy, then it will deal too much damage. Maybe too similar to Singed's poison trail. I would recommend to rework this one.
Lord Acacius1 votesLol, I didn't provide numbers because I thought maybe this would just be a basic concept.
Anyways I'll go over your comments and expand upon them
Q: Yes, the passive spans the cover of the radius. I feel that it should just appear as it is his most reliable way of creating ember in an area without positioning himself elsewhere.
W: I didn't think about that, I'll make it stack a total of 5 times. Once again, like you stated it is dependent on numbers, but I probably won't expand upon that soon.
E: The idea of dashing through a Q is interesting. I think that I have a better idea for the interaction between the two, how about if you dash through a Q zone, your dash is extended beyond the zone?
R: You are only dealt damage if you are standing within the ember within a single instance, so you are only dealt damage once, as long as you are standing on the ember. The DoT would be dealt only if they stand on the ember, stopping once they step off the ember, similar to Rumble's ultimate.
Thanks for the insight, I want to see this concept expand a bit further and perhaps become successful?
yogozin2 votesName: Nublatant, The experiment gone wrong. Race: Unique. [Potion with eyes and stubby-legs.] Ranged, same range as Anivia. 500 start life. Average growth. Terrible regen. 300 start mana. Above-average growth. Slightly-above-average regen. Far below average attack damage. Average attack speed. Terrible defensive stats.
Abilities:
PASSIVE: Transformate! Whenever Nublatant casts a spell, he changes forms. He also changes colors. (Chroma packs would change the colors available to him.)
Flare! Mode: Passivly deal 5/5/10/10/20/20/40/40/45/45/60/60/60/60/70/70/80/85 (+10% AP) damage to nearby enemies, depending on level.
Chill! Mode: Gain 10% more armor and mana resist, and every 10 seconds, discharges a blast of snow that slows for 30%, and deals 20/20/30/30/40/40/50/50/60/60/70/70/80/80/100/100 (+10% AP).
Bushel! Mode: Create a Bushel at random areas in a large area around Nublatant every 5-20 seconds.
Q: Flare! (30/35/40/45/50 mana) [Line skillshot.] {17/15/14/12/10 second CD} Nublatant fires a bright fire blast that blinds enemies around it, while moving at 150 units per second, up to 1000 units. Any enemy hit directly by this ability takes no damage, however, they're blinded for the entire duration of how long Flare! stays on the screen, and reveals the projectile only, hiding everything else with fog of war. They're blinded for 2 seconds afterwards. Nublatant can detonate Flare! To perform Erupt!
W: Chill! (50/60/70/80/100 mana) {15/13/11 second CD} Nublatant slows all enemies in a large area around him, and deals 40/90/150/200/290 (+40% AP) as well, after a 1 second channel. He can move during the channel, with 10/16/25/30/40% increased movement speed. He is then slowed for the same amount of movement speed gained for 2 seconds afterwards.
E: Bushel! (10/15/20/25/25 mana) {10 second CD} Nublatant creates a bushel at the cursor, regardless of distance. The bushel is slightly smaller than a trundle spire. Any bushel can be ignited by ignite, Flare!, or Erupt!, dealing 30% of Erupt!'s damage every second for 4 seconds, dealing damage at .5 second intervals.
R: Fusion! Nublatant enters a channel for 5 seconds, running around wildly. If he's still alive at the end of the channel, he pulses thrice, still running around in a small circle, dealing physical (100% AD), magical (50% AP), then 200/400/600 true damage to all enemies in a Blitzcrank-ult-range around him. He then is stunned for 15/8/5 seconds. The screen is disoriented for the duration of the ult, and 20/15/10 seconds after the stun.
EDIT: Picture quickly drawn. https://i.imgur.com/SJsC3yb.png
regonas1 votes
- PASSIVE: Transformate! Whenever Nublatant casts a spell, he changes forms. He also changes colors. (Chroma packs would change the colors available to him.)
- Flare! Mode: Passivly deal 5/5/10/10/20/20/40/40/45/45/60/60/60/60/70/70/80/85 (+10% AP) damage to nearby enemies, depending on level.
- Chill! Mode: Gain 10% more armor and mana resist, and every 10 seconds, discharges a blast of snow that slows for 30%, and deals 20/20/30/30/40/40/50/50/60/60/70/70/80/80/100/100 (+10% AP).
- Bushel! Mode: Create a Bushel at random areas in a large area around Nublatant every 5-20 seconds.
~~ ~~ Too many forms. LoL players hate when champion have many forms, because it is too complex for them. Consider reducing number of forms. I guess that transforming into Flare cause single explosion and it damaged nearby enemies. Of yes, then ok, but you should increase damage a bit. If it does damage per sec, then maybe it does a little too much base damage. Mana resist? Unpredictable blast of snow is not a good idea. You should make something which would allow you to discharge this blast when you want. Bushel? If you mean bushes then that is a bad bad idea. Only ulty should be able to modify game map in such way.
- Q: Flare! (30/35/40/45/50 mana) [Line skillshot.] {17/15/14/12/10 second CD} Nublatant fires a bright fire blast that blinds enemies around it, while moving at 150 units per second, up to 1000 units. Any enemy hit directly by this ability takes no damage, however, they're blinded for the entire duration of how long Flare! stays on the screen, and reveals the projectile only, hiding everything else with fog of war. They're blinded for 2 seconds afterwards. Nublatant can detonate Flare! To perform Erupt!
- Erupt! Nublatant detonates Flare!, and after a .75 second delay, implodes the projectile, dealing 75/155/200/355/400 (+50% AP) in a small area. This de-blinds all enemies afflicted with Flare!'s blind, and negates the after-blind.
~~ ~~ Pretty strong blind and Erupt does way too much base damage. It is AOE and deals extremely high damage, so that's a bad idea. Maybe too many blinds, you should stick with one blind effect.
- W: Chill! (50/60/70/80/100 mana) {15/13/11 second CD} Nublatant slows all enemies in a large area around him, and deals 40/90/150/200/290 (+40% AP) as well, after a 1 second channel. He can move during the channel, with 10/16/25/30/40% increased movement speed. He is then slowed for the same amount of movement speed gained for 2 seconds afterwards.
~~ ~~ Slow is really unnecessary. 1 sec movement increase, 2 sec movement decrease. Blitz have something similar, but way better.
- E: Bushel! (10/15/20/25/25 mana) {10 second CD} Nublatant creates a bushel at the cursor, regardless of distance. The bushel is slightly smaller than a trundle spire. Any bushel can be ignited by ignite, Flare!, or Erupt!, dealing 30% of Erupt!'s damage every second for 4 seconds, dealing damage at .5 second intervals.
~~ ~~ Don't get this one, sorry. What is bushel?
- R: Fusion! Nublatant enters a channel for 5 seconds, running around wildly. If he's still alive at the end of the channel, he pulses thrice, still running around in a small circle, dealing physical (100% AD), magical (50% AP), then 200/400/600 true damage to all enemies in a Blitzcrank-ult-range around him. He then is stunned for 15/8/5 seconds. The screen is disoriented for the duration of the ult, and 20/15/10 seconds after the stun.
~~ ~~ Rework this completely. Everything in this ability is wrong. Long channel time, wtf damage, cosmic self stun, screen effects, everything wrong here.
theDusty2 votesName: Chen The Mercury Blade Race: Human(Ionian) Melee, 175 like Yasuo 510-1700hp 5-20 regen Base ad 60-125 Energy Armor: 23-75 Magic resist: 20 Move speed 365
Abilities: Passive: Mercury Blade Chen's blade will cut through the air and leaving a trail of mercury behind him, enemy who steps on it are damaged. Chen get 2/3/4/5% (Change based on level of ultimate) of the movement speed of hostile target(Enemy champions and minions, as well as monsters who are attacking). The mercury reduce all enemies' armor and magic resist by 1/5/10/20 (Based on level of ultimate) every 2 second as well as adding a stack of quick silver to enemy champions, upon being damaged by Chen deals true damage equal to 10% of Chen's Bonus AD or 10% of his AP, depending on whether AD or AP is higher, quick silver stacks up 5 times. Q: Stepping Stone Cost: 50 Energy CD: 15/14/13/12/10 seconds Chen jumps towards a location within 900 units, dealing 10/20/30/40/50+50% AP magic damage to target within 200 units range. Chen then dash forward for another 1000 units, dealing 10/20/30/40/50+60% of bonus AD physical damage to all targets hit. W: Unseen Mark Cost: 100 Energy CD: 20/15/10/5/0 seconds Passive: The last target being damaged by Chen is marked, the mark becomes invisible after 3 seconds of Chen dealing damage to the target. Only one target can be marked, marks may be applied to Enemy champions, minions and neutral monster. Active: Chen dashes to the marked target dealing physical damage equal to 10% of total AD, and magic damage equal to 10% of AP to the target and 25% of the damage to enemy within 400 unit of the marked target. This damage can critically strike the target, if it crit Chen then slice the target again dealing 6/7/8/9/10% of the target's missing hp as true damage. After dealing damage, Chen goes invisible for 3 seconds. E: Mercury Slash Cost: 20 energy CD: 4 seconds Chen slashes in a direction slicing the air with his blade as well as throwing out a blade of Mercury, dealing damage to all targets in the path dealing 50% more damage to targets who are standing closer to Chen, however upon collision with a terrain/champion the projectile stops. The original slash does 50/100/150/200/300 + 50% of Chen's total AD and 50% of Chen's AP, as well as slowing the target by 10% for 5 seconds. After the projectile stops after reaching the end of the line, or upon collision as previously mentioned. The projectile remains in place as a piece of invisible blade. Enemy champions walking to it will cause the blade to spring dealing 25% of the initial damage of the spellcast to all nearby enemy, the blade then disappear while refunding Chen 5% of the damage dealt as HP and 50 Energy. All invisible mercury blade within 2000 units of Chen are summoned when Chen use the active of his W, and fly to Chen when W is cast. Dealing 50% of the damage of the E activation. R: Mercury Fuel Cost: All of Chen's Current energy CD: 90/60/30 seconds Chen gains 200% movement speed and ignores unit collision for 20 seconds. Chen turns himself into a Mercury Blade for the duration and will cut through all enemy that he comes into contact with. Chen however can only damage enemy 5/7/10 times each cast. During Mercury Fuel, Chen will have zero energy regen but double energy regen after the effect end. Chen cannot autoattack during the effect of the spell. Chen deals 100/150/200 + 100% of bonus AD and 70% of AP as true damage every time he comes in contact with the enemy.
regonas1 votes510-1700hp
~~ ~~ Max HP is kinda too low. Usual HP of champions is between 1800 and 2200.
Abilities: Passive: Mercury Blade Chen's blade will cut through the air and leaving a trail of mercury behind him, enemy who steps on it are damaged. Chen get 2/3/4/5% (Change based on level of ultimate) of the movement speed of hostile target(Enemy champions and minions, as well as monsters who are attacking). The mercury reduce all enemies' armor and magic resist by 1/5/10/20 (Based on level of ultimate) every 2 second as well as adding a stack of quick silver to enemy champions, upon being damaged by Chen deals true damage equal to 10% of Chen's Bonus AD or 10% of his AP, depending on whether AD or AP is higher, quick silver stacks up 5 times.
~~ ~~ A bit too much. Movement speed, damage, defense shred (also extremely high at max rank), true damage. Way too many effects. I suggest sticking with max 2 effects: movement speed and defense shred (but change numbers, because 1 is too low and 20 is too high)
Q: Stepping Stone Cost: 50 Energy CD: 15/14/13/12/10 seconds Chen jumps towards a location within 900 units, dealing 10/20/30/40/50+50% AP magic damage to target within 200 units range. Chen then dash forward for another 1000 units, dealing 10/20/30/40/50+60% of bonus AD physical damage to all targets hit.
~~ ~~ Crazy jump range. Consider reducing it. Dash is also insane. Combined 1900 unit range movement is beyond crazy. That is more than half range between top/bot and mid. More realistic range would be: 400 for jump and 300 for dash.
W: Unseen Mark Cost: 100 Energy CD: 20/15/10/5/0 seconds Passive: The last target being damaged by Chen is marked, the mark becomes invisible after 3 seconds of Chen dealing damage to the target. Only one target can be marked, marks may be applied to Enemy champions, minions and neutral monster. Active: Chen dashes to the marked target dealing physical damage equal to 10% of total AD, and magic damage equal to 10% of AP to the target and 25% of the damage to enemy within 400 unit of the marked target. This damage can critically strike the target, if it crit Chen then slice the target again dealing 6/7/8/9/10% of the target's missing hp as true damage. After dealing damage, Chen goes invisible for 3 seconds.
~~ ~~ Does dash have limited range. If no, then consider adding it. Also, stealth is unnecessary, because it will be of much use. Also, how long will silence last? In addition, damage is way too low and cooldown doesn't make sense. Extreme sticking power with stealth = crazy OP.
E: Mercury Slash Cost: 20 energy CD: 4 seconds Chen slashes in a direction slicing the air with his blade as well as throwing out a blade of Mercury, dealing damage to all targets in the path dealing 50% more damage to targets who are standing closer to Chen, however upon collision with a terrain/champion the projectile stops. The original slash does 50/100/150/200/300 + 50% of Chen's total AD and 50% of Chen's AP, as well as slowing the target by 10% for 5 seconds. After the projectile stops after reaching the end of the line, or upon collision as previously mentioned. The projectile remains in place as a piece of invisible blade. Enemy champions walking to it will cause the blade to spring dealing 25% of the initial damage of the spellcast to all nearby enemy, the blade then disappear while refunding Chen 5% of the damage dealt as HP and 50 Energy. All invisible mercury blade within 2000 units of Chen are summoned when Chen use the active of his W, and fly to Chen when W is cast. Dealing 50% of the damage of the E activation.
~~ ~~ Base damage is too high. How long each blade lasts before disappearing? Will they last until enemy steps on it? Also, 2000 range is crazy much. Cooldonw is too short for this kind of damage.
R: Mercury Fuel Cost: All of Chen's Current energy CD: 90/60/30 seconds Chen gains 200% movement speed and ignores unit collision for 20 seconds. Chen turns himself into a Mercury Blade for the duration and will cut through all enemy that he comes into contact with. Chen however can only damage enemy 5/7/10 times each cast. During Mercury Fuel, Chen will have zero energy regen but double energy regen after the effect end. Chen cannot autoattack during the effect of the spell. Chen deals 100/150/200 + 100% of bonus AD and 70% of AP as true damage every time he comes in contact with the enemy.
~~ ~~ Wow wow wow crazy numbers. +200% movement speed for 20 sec? This is simply insane. Damage is also beyond crazy. 2000 (+1000% of AD) (+700% of AP) max damage to a single enemy when you can damage multiple enemies? Are you serious? Super speed + long duration + insane damage = OP
xfeNNie2 votesName: **Gliphy ** the Sword Enhancer
Melee Champion. Attack Range: 150-550 Health: 580.7 (+93 per level) Mana: 296.98 (+40.23 per level) Attack Damage: 58.71 (+3 per level) Attack Speed: 0.638 (+3% per level) Movement Speed: 325 Health Regen: 6.47 (+0.57 per level) Mana Regen: 7.12 (+0.58 per level) Armor: 27.88 (+3.5 per level) Magic Resist: 30 (+1.25 per level)
Passive: Enormous Sword His sword gains size and attack range based on how much Bonus AD Gliphy has. 1 Bonus AD gives him 2 attack range reaching the maximum amount of 400 bonus range from 200 bonus attack damage so Gliphy can attack from 550 with a fairly long sword, In addition Gliphy's **attack speed is increased by 3% for every 50 range he has to a maximum of 33% **when you will reach 550 range.
Q: Windslash: After a 1 second delay Gliphy will dash in a targeted direction (Long Range).If he hits a champion while dashing he will start slashing him. The damage from the slash is equal to 80/90/100/110% AD + (1 Damage per 1 Attack Range) physical damage.If the sword is long enough to attack from 350 range the enemy will be knocked back to Gliphy's current attack range away from Gliphy and will be stunned for 1 second.
W: Deadly Swing:
Gliphy will swing his sword forward (much like 
's Q) and will pickup the first enemy hit on the sword dealing 30/70/110/150/190 + (100% AD) physical damage to it. He will then start spining with the champion on his sword for 2 seconds. Reactivating the ability will throw the enemy in the direction the sword is to Gliphy's current attack range. Gliphy can walk while spinning.The first cast of the ability has 100 more range than Gliphy's current attack range.
E: Hard-Hitting Blows Passive: Every 3rd attack Gliphy will deal 4/5.5/7/8.5/10% of the enemies max health as bonus magic damage and will slow the target by 60% for 1 second.**Enemies Affected by the slow and the bonus damage are then immune to this effect for 3 seconds **, In addition Gliphy gains 2.5% dodge chance per 100 attack range to maximum of 12,5%.
R: Devastating Hit: Gains double range for next basic attack witch will deal 100/150/200 + (100% AD) mixed damage and stun the enemy targeted for 1.5 second. After **1 second **it will make a pulse around that target stunning all enemies around it for 1 second and dealing 50% damage to them.
So i think this champion should be played in the botlane as an AD Carry with a utility support that will sustain his early game.
Supports much like 
will work with him.
Note that will increase his range with her E if he doesn't already have 550 range.
Items like: 
will work perfectly will him due to the damage increasing for hiss passive.
Building the items in this order will give him max range of the passive and the 33% Attackspeed: 
And then finish your build with: and 
into 
or 
or 
.
regonas1 votes{quoted} Melee Champion. Attack Range: 150-550
~~ ~~ Everything beyond 300 range shouldn't be consider melee. 550 is ranged range, not a melee.
Passive: Enormous Sword His sword gains size and attack range based on how much Bonus AD Gliphy has. 1 Bonus AD gives him 2 attack range reaching the maximum amount of 400 bonus range from 200 bonus attack damage so Gliphy can attack from 550 with a fairly long sword, In addition Gliphy's **attack speed is increased by 3% for every 50 range he has to a maximum of 33% **when you will reach 550 range.
~~ ~~
Nah, mate. Melee champion gaining that much range and still being melee will be extremely complicated. Your passive would strongly interfere with these items: 
.
Q: Windslash: After a 1 second delay Gliphy will dash in a targeted direction (Long Range).If he hits a champion while dashing he will start slashing him. The damage from the slash is equal to 80/90/100/110% AD + (1 Damage per 1 Attack Range) physical damage.If the sword is long enough to attack from 350 range the enemy will be knocked back to Gliphy's current attack range away from Gliphy and will be stunned for 1 second.
~~ ~~ How long will slashing lasts? Long range is how much exactly? I would think that up to 700-800 makes sense, but more than that might be too much. Overall, pretty good ability, if it can't be critical.
W: Deadly Swing: Gliphy will swing his sword forward (much like
~~ ~~
Too strong for a normal ability. It is as strong as 
ulty. Consider not allowing you to move and reduce duration to 1 and 1 full spin around per sec.
E: Hard-Hitting Blows Passive: Every 3rd attack Gliphy will deal 4/5.5/7/8.5/10% of the enemies max health as bonus magic damage and will slow the target by 60% for 1 second.**Enemies Affected by the slow and the bonus damage are then immune to this effect for 3 seconds **, In addition Gliphy gains 2.5% dodge chance per 100 attack range to maximum of 12,5%.
~~ ~~ Two problems here:
R: Devastating Hit: Gains double range for next basic attack witch will deal 100/150/200 + (100% AD) mixed damage and stun the enemy targeted for 1.5 second. After **1 second **it will make a pulse around that target stunning all enemies around it for 1 second and dealing 50% damage to them.
~~ ~~ Pulse stun is unnecessary and AOE damage should happen instantly after main hit. Also, double range might be too much. 50% bonus range sounds more reasonable. Also, if this ability can crit, then it will be too OP.
So i think this champion should be played in the botlane as an AD Carry with a utility support that will sustain his early game. Supports much like
~~ ~~
I don't think that would work for him.
Overall: not bad, but needs few changes. Main problem is range and items (and whether he can crit with his abilities).
xfeNNie1 votesThe Q can not crit so its fine.. i guess?
R can not crit as well.
I agree about the W cuz if he has 550 range he can cast it from 650 so its op, and it scales with 100% AD.High cooldown and cost on this will be fine i guess what do you think?
I do not think double range is a problem on R because if he has like 250 range he will strike from 500 and the max is 550 so he will strike with 1100, and 1100 is not much in my opinion.
And MAN! I seriusly didn't tought about :D
By the way thanks for the insight. :)
ImortalLyfe2 votesName: Maxx
Primary Role: Marksman Secondary Role: Tank
Statistics: Health: 350-900 Health Regen: 3.5 Mana: 325 Mana Regen: 2.5 Ranged: 525 Attack Damage: 30 Attack Speed: 0.68 Armor: 53 Magic Res: 42 Mov. Speed: 323
Abilities: Passive- Bullseye: Every 5th attack is a 50% Crit. Strike and can go up to 100% and is leveled up every 6th level (50%/75%/100%). Q- Cooldown: 25/20/15/10/5: Flaming Arrow: Maxx enchants her arrows with a burn effect that last for 5 seconds. The arrows deal 25/30/35/40/45 damage over time plus whatever her current attack damage is. W- Cooldown: 20/20/15/15/10: Foul Blow: Maxx locates a pressure point on the target enemy. The next attack will stun the target for 2.5 seconds and deal true damage. E- Cooldown: 35/30/25/20/15 Revenge: Maxx gets furious and gains 25 movement speed and 30% attack speed for 4 seconds. When Maxx uses her E, she sacrafices 30 health. R- Cooldown: 100/85/70: Crimson Strikes: Max gains three huge arrows that will shoot off in the direction that she choose when the ability is activated again. These arrows will go through the targets hit and have a 750 range. These shots deal true damage and decaying damage over time 40/60/80 and will last for 7 seconds.
Rival: Riven
Friends: None
Basic Attack: Maxx shoots an arrow
Dance: Maxx puts her bow down and either does Push Ups or Punches the Air like a boxer.
Quotes:
Spawn: “I’ve been training just for this” “I’m ready to Kill”
Death: “I could do better..” “Finally my Blood Drips” With Riven: “You failed me again…” With Riven: “Every time I trust you…” Against Riven: “You stabbed me in the back again!” Against Riven: “You’ve let me down… again…” Against Riven: “Dad would be proud… of you…”
Abilities: Q: Burn! Q: There’s Fire in my eyes!! W: Bullseye! W: Stunned by my Beauty. E: The Fire.. Is Burning!! E: We’re not done yet!! R: Let’s see how Lucky we are. R: Try not to get hurt.
Taunt: “Come on, I know you can do better” “Let’s go, just me and you”
Joke: “A duck walks into a ba- Nevermind” “Mocks Riven's Dance”
Against Rival: “You ready to fight me?” “I’ve gotten better” “Finally I will Shine”
With Rival: “By the way, I borrowed your shoes” “What? No I’m not excited to be on a team with you!” “You better not die”
Lore: Maxx Telling the story “Once.. Upon.. A Time.., There was a girl named Maxx who had an old sister.. Her sister’s name, Riven. When they were around the age of eight, their Father laid down a sword and a bow on the table, and told the girls to choose one. Riven rushed to the sword and tried to pick it up. Since Riven rushed to the sword, that meant the bow was Maxx’s. Maxx didn’t really care. Every day their father would help them practice, but always helped Riven more. Riven grew up to be a strong warrior and honored woman, but Maxx.. Maxx grew up and started to envy her sister for taking all of the attention away. Maxx hated her sister for taking all of their father’s attention, but secretly still looked up to her as a great warrior.
As Maxx was younger, even though her father was neglecting her, she still tried her best to practice. She learned how to shoot the bow and locate weak spots on people. One day she ran away to the Voodoo Lands, where the people there taught her things. They taught her some basic spells that she could perform to help her. She trained for Ten years straight to get better, and tried out at the Institute of War and got accepted into the League.”
“There’s a thin line between Sisters and Enemies, and it only takes a sword to break that line”
ImortalLyfe1 votesName: Maxx
Primary Role: Marksman Secondary Role: Tank
Statistics: Health: 350/900 Health Regen: 3.5 Mana: 325 Mana Regen: 2.5 Ranged: 525 Attack Damage: 30 Attack Speed: 0.68 Armor: 53 Magic Res: 42 Mov. Speed: 323
Abilities: Passive- Bullseye: Every 5th attack is a 50% Crit. Strike and can go up to 100% and is leveled up every 6th level (50%/75%/100%). Q- Cooldown: 25/20/15/10/5: Flaming Arrow: Maxx enchants her arrows with a burn effect that last for 5 seconds. The arrows deal 25/30/35/40/45 damage over time plus whatever her current attack damage is. W- Cooldown: 20/20/15/15/10: Foul Blow: Maxx locates a pressure point on the target enemy. The next attack will stun the target for 2.5 seconds and deal true damage. E- Cooldown: 35/30/25/20/15 Revenge: Maxx gets furious and gains 25 movement speed and 30% attack speed for 4 seconds. When Maxx uses her E, she sacrafices 30 health. R- Cooldown: 100/85/70: Crimson Strikes: Max gains three huge arrows that will shoot off in the direction that she choose when the ability is activated again. These arrows will go through the targets hit and have a 750 range. These shots deal true damage and decaying damage over time 40/60/80 and will last for 7 seconds.
Rival: Riven
Friends: None
Basic Attack: Maxx shoots an arrow
Dance: Maxx puts her bow down and either does Push Ups or Punches the Air like a boxer.
Quotes:
Spawn: “I’ve been training just for this” “I’m ready to Kill”
Death: “I could do better..” “Finally my Blood Drips” With Riven: “You failed me again…” With Riven: “Every time I trust you…” Against Riven: “You stabbed me in the back again!” Against Riven: “You’ve let me down… again…” Against Riven: “Dad would be proud… of you…”
Abilities: Q: Burn! Q: There’s Fire in my eyes!! W: Bullseye! W: Stunned by my Beauty. E: The Fire.. Is Burning!! E: We’re not done yet!! R: Let’s see how Lucky we are. R: Try not to get hurt.
Taunt: “Come on, I know you can do better” “Let’s go, just me and you”
Joke: “A duck walks into a ba- Nevermind” “Mocks Riven's Dance”
Against Rival: “You ready to fight me?” “I’ve gotten better” “Finally I will Shine”
With Rival: “By the way, I borrowed your shoes” “What? No I’m not excited to be on a team with you!” “You better not die”
Lore: Maxx Telling the story “Once.. Upon.. A Time.., There was a girl named Maxx who had an old sister.. Her sister’s name, Riven. When they were around the age of eight, their Father laid down a sword and a bow on the table, and told the girls to choose one. Riven rushed to the sword and tried to pick it up. Since Riven rushed to the sword, that meant the bow was Maxx’s. Maxx didn’t really care. Every day their father would help them practice, but always helped Riven more. Riven grew up to be a strong warrior and honored woman, but Maxx.. Maxx grew up and started to envy her sister for taking all of the attention away. Maxx hated her sister for taking all of their father’s attention, but secretly still looked up to her as a great warrior.
As Maxx was younger, even though her father was neglecting her, she still tried her best to practice. She learned how to shoot the bow and locate weak spots on people. One day she ran away to the Voodoo Lands, where the people there taught her things. They taught her some basic spells that she could perform to help her. She trained for Ten years straight to get better, and tried out at the Institute of War and got accepted into the League.”
“There’s a thin line between Sisters and Enemies, and it only takes a sword to break that line”
BTW, Her Primary lane is Top Lane (To go against Riven, Obvi) And she builds Attack Damage and Armor. The Concept for what she would look like is like Avasha. If you don't know who Avasha is, google it and It's pretty much the early concept for Riven.
regonas1 votes{quoted} Health: 350/900 Attack Damage: 30
~~ ~~ What does these numbers mean? They do not make any sense to me.
Passive- Bullseye: Every 5th attack is a 50% Crit. Strike and can go up to 100% and is leveled up every 6th level (50%/75%/100%).
~~ ~~ How it would work with crit chance items? I seen something similar before. Not very unique, though.
Q- Cooldown: 25/20/15/10/5: Flaming Arrow: Maxx enchants her arrows with a burn effect that last for 5 seconds. The arrows deal 25/30/35/40/45 damage over time plus whatever her current attack damage is.
~~ ~~ A bit crazy cooldown reduction. Early you will probably hit an enemy 2-3 times max. Late game you can hit enemy every 5 sec. Consider changing cooldown into more realistic numbers. Also, how long does ability lasts? How many enemy can you hit? Is it single use one target ability?
W- Cooldown: 20/20/15/15/10: Foul Blow: Maxx locates a pressure point on the target enemy. The next attack will stun the target for 2.5 seconds and deal true damage.
~~ ~~ Also strange cooldown. 20 sec cooldowns are usually for extremely important single use abilities. 2.5 sec stun might last too long and it is a ranged stun, so consider reducing it to 1 or 1.5 sec. How much true damage will this ability deal? True damage for a normal ability might be too strong.
E- Cooldown: 35/30/25/20/15 Revenge: Maxx gets furious and gains 25 movement speed and 30% attack speed for 4 seconds. When Maxx uses her E, she sacrafices 30 health.
~~ ~~ Why these extremely long cooldowns early? Your champion is like anti-early game: afk farm until late game. Base ability not bad, but why bonuses do not scale with rank?
R- Cooldown: 100/85/70: Crimson Strikes: Max gains three huge arrows that will shoot off in the direction that she choose when the ability is activated again. These arrows will go through the targets hit and have a 750 range. These shots deal true damage and decaying damage over time 40/60/80 and will last for 7 seconds.
~~ ~~ Again, true damage. This champion have too much true damage. Range and CD looks fine.
CanadianFarmer2 votesCaecus, the Sun's Embrace
Caecus was the former High Priest of the Solari. He went on a mission to convert foreigners to the ways of the Sun. He now has returned to the Solari in Mount Targon. (He is an old man)
Hp: 395 +83/lvl Mana: 375 +45/lvl AD: 53 +3/lvl Attack range: 545 H regen: 8 M regen: 7 A speed: 0.625 M speed: 335 Armor: 12 +3/lvl MR: 17 +3.8/lvl
Passive: Burning Passion
Every 25/21/16/10(lvl 1/6/11/16) seconds, Caecus ability will infuse him with Power of the Sun, improving his next ability cast within 4 seconds and rendering it cost free. The improvement will depend on which ability he used to activate the buff. In addition, Caecus gains an additional 0.35% of bonus ability power for every 1% missing mana.
Q: Radiance Outburst
Caecus calls forth the light of the sun towards the targeted area, dealing 70/95/115/140/170 magical damage (+ 85% ability power) in its path towards the targeted area.
900 range, 3 successive beams that keep same size (about 175 unit wide) but space between them changes depending where you select the last beam lands (kinda like how Diana's Q moon arc works).
5 seconds cooldown at all ranks, not affected by CDR.
50 mana at all ranks
Empowered by W : Light burst out of Caecus, dealing 85/115/150/195/225 (+35% of ability power ) in a 500 radius around him and blinding all ennemy champions hit for 1 second.
Empowered by E : Upon reaching the targeted area, the light inflicts 100/130/160/200/250 magical damage (+ 100% of ability power) to all ennemies in the area and stuns them for 1.5 seconds (last beam).
Empowered by R : Ennemy affected by R will always get hit by the last beam and will be slowed by 35% for 1.5 second.
W: Sun Ward
For the next 2 seconds, Caecus shrouds himself with the warmth of the Sun, becoming immune to damage and crowd control effects while not being able to move.
80/90/100/110/120 mana 23/21/20/19/17 seconds cooldown
Empowered by Q: Restores 1% maximum mana for each 2% life damage he should've taken.
Empowered by E : Everytime an ennemy hits him, a sunlight beam hits them (same damage as E).
Empowered by R : If Caecus receives damage equal or higher than 20% of his max health during W, R is refreshed on its original target and spreads to all nearby ennemies (250 range).
E: Sun Shower
For the next 1.25 seconds, Caecus channels the power of the sun to fall upon his ennemies, creating 5 sunlight beam to appear randomly around him, revealing any ennemy hit and dealing 50/75/100/135/170 (+ 100% of ability power) magical damage. One of the 5 beams will always hit a champion.
60/70/80/90/100 mana
5 seconds cooldown at all ranks, not affected by CDR.
Empowered by Q: All 5 beams will always hit a champion. Additional beam on the same target has its damage reduced by 18% for each previous beam.
Empowered by W: The 5 beams appear in a line behind Caecus, no cast time and they leave binding lights for 3 seconds that snares any ennemy who pass through them for 2 seconds.
Empowered by R: The shower epicenter is at the target of R and adds 1 sec to R for each champion hit by the shower. No cast time.
R: Destructive warmth
Caecus heats an ennemy with the warmth embrace of the sun, dealing 80/115/150/175/200 (+ 85% of ability power) magical damage over 4 seconds.
5 seconds cooldown at all ranks, not affected by CDR.
70/85/95/105/120 mana
Empowered by Q: Instead of dealing damage to the the target, a beam spawns on the target and grows each second (150, 215, 270, 335 wide). So a beam each seconds. Each beam deal 100/140/185/235/280 (+ 100% of ability power) magical damage to all ennemies in the area except the target.
Empowered by W: Caecus is healed for 50% of the damage done by the target during that period.
Empowered by E: Reveals the target and deals double damage if the target tries to stealth or if it is in a brush.
Rival: Diana, Karthus (because preacher of the Sun vs preacher of Death, warmth vs cold)
Friend: Leona, Shyvana and Jarvan IV (he helped them defeat the dragon)
Jokes: After every sunset, comes a new sunrise .... followed by breakfast. Sunset is life's way of saying "Good job, you survived today, have something pretty". @Leona: A beautiful dawn that was mistaken for a sunset.
Taunts: Prepare to be but ashes in my radiance. Sorry I can't see you in all this sunlight. @Diana: Your ways are but darkness, let sunlights brighten your path. @Karthus: Ashes to ashes. Let bones turn to dust.
regonas1 votes[{quoted}](name=Birdie Word,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=TOZEWV0O,comment-id=0005,timestamp=2015-11-22T08:51:29.463+0000) Hp: 395 +83/lvl Armor: 12 +3/lvl
~~ ~~ So, your champ have low early health, low late game health, low armor and no magic resist?
Passive: Burning Passion
Every 25/21/16/10(lvl 1/6/11/16) seconds, Caecus ability will infuse him with Power of the Sun, improving his next ability cast within 4 seconds and rendering it cost free. The improvement will depend on which ability he used to activate the buff. In addition, Caecus gains an additional 0.35% of bonus ability power for every 1% missing mana.
~~ ~~ Simple, effective, but early arming time might be too long. 18/16/14/12/10 sec looks way better.
Q: Radiance Outburst
Caecus calls forth the light of the sun towards the targeted area, dealing 70/95/115/140/170 magical damage (+ 85% ability power) in its path towards the targeted area.
900 range, 3 successive beams that keep same size (about 175 unit wide) but space between them changes depending where you select the last beam lands (kinda like how Diana's Q moon arc works).
5 seconds cooldown at all ranks, not affected by CDR.
50 mana at all ranks
Empowered by W : Light burst out of Caecus, dealing 85/115/150/195/225 (+35% of ability power ) in a 500 radius around him and blinding all ennemy champions hit for 1 second.
Empowered by E : Upon reaching the targeted area, the light inflicts 100/130/160/200/250 magical damage (+ 100% of ability power) to all ennemies in the area and stuns them for 1.5 seconds (last beam).
Empowered by R : Ennemy affected by R will always get hit by the last beam and will be slowed by 35% for 1.5 second.
~~ ~~ "3 successive beams" means that this ability can hit same enemy 3 times? Also, range might be too much. Does passive empowers this ability in any way?
W: Sun Ward
For the next 2 seconds, Caecus shrouds himself with the warmth of the Sun, becoming immune to damage and crowd control effects while not being able to move.
80/90/100/110/120 mana 23/21/20/19/17 seconds cooldown
Empowered by Q: Restores 1% maximum mana for each 2% life damage he should've taken.
Empowered by E : Everytime an ennemy hits him, a sunlight beam hits them (same damage as E).
Empowered by R : If Caecus receives damage equal or higher than 20% of his max health during W, R is refreshed on its original target and spreads to all nearby ennemies (250 range).
~~ ~~ If you are still able to use abilities, then Kayle have something similar, but it is her R. Q empower is kind useless. Other than that, seems kind good.
E: Sun Shower
For the next 1.25 seconds, Caecus channels the power of the sun to fall upon his ennemies, creating 5 sunlight beam to appear randomly around him, revealing any ennemy hit and dealing 50/75/100/135/170 (+ 100% of ability power) magical damage. One of the 5 beams will always hit a champion.
60/70/80/90/100 mana 5 seconds cooldown at all ranks, not affected by CDR.Empowered by Q: All 5 beams will always hit a champion. Additional beam on the same target has its damage reduced by 18% for each previous beam.
Empowered by W: The 5 beams appear in a line behind Caecus, no cast time and they leave binding lights for 3 seconds that snares any ennemy who pass through them for 2 seconds.
Empowered by R: The shower epicenter is at the target of R and adds 1 sec to R for each champion hit by the shower. No cast time.
~~ ~~ If range isn't too much, then this ability is not bad. Also, AP scaling is super high.
R: Destructive warmth
Caecus heats an ennemy with the warmth embrace of the sun, dealing 80/115/150/175/200 (+ 85% of ability power) magical damage over 4 seconds.
5 seconds cooldown at all ranks, not affected by CDR.
70/85/95/105/120 mana
Empowered by Q: Instead of dealing damage to the the target, a beam spawns on the target and grows each second (150, 215, 270, 335 wide). So a beam each seconds. Each beam deal 100/140/185/235/280 (+ 100% of ability power) magical damage to all ennemies in the area except the target.
Empowered by W: Caecus is healed for 50% of the damage done by the target during that period.
Empowered by E: Reveals the target and deals double damage if the target tries to stealth or if it is in a brush.
~~ ~~ R on 5 sec cooldown? Are you sure? That looks like a bad choice. Q empowerment makes no sense. Is it stationary beam, is is multiple beams, is it moving AOE? E is also strange one. Don't know what to say either than it is useful against stupid people and certain champions.
CanadianFarmer1 votesI forgot to ha MR. As for the champ think Xerath style.
His passive can't have a lower CD early game considering the Empowerments possibilities. It will make him able to bully ennemies out of lane early. His passive is his ultimate. Kinda. So all abilities can be upgraded 5 times but with only 18 points to spend.
Basic Q would be a zone a bit smaller than Xerath's W which selects where the last beam will land. Think a chain reaction of 3 successive beams with 0.25 second delay between each starting from caster to selected zone. There will be a minimum range cast so you can't have all 3 beams hitting the same zone in melee range.
The empowers are quite simple. Here is more information on them:
W empower- Different ability, more base damage, less scaling, aoe around him, size smaller than Amumu's R.
E empower- Same ability, more base damage, more scailling, last beam stun ennemies hit.
R empower- Same ability and damage but no targeted zone to select. Target of R is gonna get hit by last beam and will be slowed. So other beams between champion and target.
As for W, consider it like a shield that absorbs all damage for the duration but you can't cast, move or attack. You are also immune to CC. CC with damage component will deal the damage but won't CC. You are right about Empower Q. I'll have to find something else.
Range of E would be about 650 units radius around him, and about 75 units for the beams themselves.
I felt the champion already had enough aoe damage components so I wanted a dot for when people get close to you. About 450-500 range. Click ability like Swain's E.
Empower Q: Still a targetted spell but instead of a dot, a beam spawns on the target each second over 4 seconds. The first beam is small but each subsequent beam is bigger. The target doesn't receive damage, only affect his allies.
Empower E: I want to fill a niche vs stealth champions plus can be useful when chasing in jungle or if you play Top.
When I say Empowered by Q, I mean that you used Q to activate the passive Burning Passion. Which means Q is on CD and your next ability within 4 seconds becomes empowered by Q, granting an additional effect.
So the champ does not have a real ultimate, just a passive that makes you think about in which order you want to use your spells.
wardrobe monster2 votesR-Nine, The Zaunite Peacemaker
Roles: Primary: Marksman Might seem a little bit strange later on, as it lacks autoattacks in Civil form; however, his Q in both forms scales well with AD; the low cooldown on Civil Form Q actually makes it sort of a replacement autoattack. His autoattacks in Military Form are devastating.
Secondary: Assassin Lightning-fast movement speed, dash, plentiful CC... Any question here?
It is a powerful tool for coordinated ganks and can provide great support fire, but will probably be annihilated by CC heavy assassins or strong duelists.
http://www.wowhead.com/screenshot=sidebar&id=309576&power
http://images.techtimes.com/data/images/full/101483/arkham-knight.jpg?w=600
Appearance: As shown above, I have imagined him as a Batmobile/tank sort of vehicle, with design elements from Forsaken machinery.
Lore: In the laboratories under the dark Zaunite lands, R-Nine was created; a machine of war, and of fear. His primary purpose was to serve as a way of riot disbander that was unmanned, but he can be also used in active warfare.
Stats:
Hp: Low-Medium Secondary Resource: 100 AD: High Attack range: N/A (see description) HP regen.: Mediocre RF regen: 5 Atk. speed: N/A (see description) Mov. speed: N/A (see description) Armor: Mediocre
Skills:
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/tiny/inv_misc_key_14.gif Passive: Streetroam Whilst in Civil Mode, the movement of R-Nine acts in a special way. Right-clicking a ground spot will make him start moving towards the spot at the speed of 100, also costing 15 RF- Regenerative Fuel. Right-Clicking again will build up more speed; his speed decays at the speed of 20/second when the momentum boost is not used, and he WILL NOT STOP MOVING until his momentum ends. You can click in another direction to build momentum towards there and reduce momentum to other directions; but if moving at full speed ahead, turning back can be a REAL pain. When he collides with an enemy unit, it takes 15+ 4xlevel damage and is knocked aside. Also, bumping into a wall will stun him for 1.5 seconds. If he merely "scratches" a wall, he loses momentum.
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/large/inv_weapon_rifle_23.jpg Q: Pacifier Gun R-Nine starts firing his Pacifier Gun in a line towards a target spot, firing ten shots in a second. This is a channeled ability; each bullet deals a minuscule amount of damage, scaling well with AD, and stuns for 0.03 seconds, the first enemy unit hit. No cost. Max range 800. Moderate to Low Cooldown
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/large/spell_fire_burningspeed.jpg W: Automatic Defense Systems: Ground Target: R-Nine dashes towards 400 units towards the target spot and puts the ability on a 10 second cooldown; costs 20 RF, does not interrupt Q channel. Allied Champion or Self Target: R-Nine sends out tracking missiles that destory all projectiles prone to hit the targeted champion in his current position- note that blocking from other units is not counted. 60/55/50/45/40 second cooldown. No cost.
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/large/ability_rogue_smoke.jpg E: Tear Gas R-Nine throws tear gas into a targeted 400-units area within 1200 units; the gas slows the attack and move speed of enemies in it greatly with a reapplying 2-second debuff. Deals minute true damage per second. No Cost. High Cooldown.
http://cdn.wow.mmoui.com/images/icons/m143.jpg R: Military Mode R-Nine becomes immobile and shreds all armor until an ally enters by right clicking it; after that, he gains superb armor and magic resist, and moves like normal champions do at 275 movespeed; he has no abilities, and the ally gains use of an alternate ability set, aside from using autoattacks at a slow attack rate with that deal damage based on boosted AD of R9: Q: Heavy Shell: Fires a single skillshot nuke in a line, affected by AD of R9. Moderate to High Cooldown. W: Defense Zone: Creates a zone for 2/3/4 seconds in 300 units radius around R9 that blocks all incoming hostile projectiles. Very High Cooldown. E: Electric Defense System: Deals low AP scaling magic damage (ahh yes, all other damage used by R9 is physical unless otherwise noted) to all enemies within 250 units; stuns them for 2 seconds. R: Eject: Tosses the ally out into an area within 800 units; returns R9 to Civil Mode; auto-applies after the 50/60/70 second duration of the ability has ended, putting the ally 200 units to R9's back. Ultimate has a High Cooldown when compared to an average ultimate.
**THIS IS IT. INFO UPDATED, ADDED, IMPROVED ETC. AT REQUEST. **
regonas1 votes[{quoted}](name=wardrobe monster,realm=EUNE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=TOZEWV0O,comment-id=0006,timestamp=2015-11-22T21:15:11.371+0000)
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/tiny/inv_misc_key_14.gif Passive: Streetroam Whilst in Civil Mode, the movement of R-Nine acts in a special way. Right-clicking a ground spot will make him start moving towards the spot at the speed of 100, also costing 15 RF- Regenerative Fuel. Right-Clicking again will build up more speed; his speed decays at the speed of 20/second when the momentum boost is not used, and he WILL NOT STOP MOVING until his momentum ends. You can click in another direction to build momentum towards there and reduce momentum to other directions; but if moving at full speed ahead, turning back can be a REAL pain. When he collides with an enemy unit, it takes 15+ 4xlevel damage and is knocked aside. Also, bumping into a wall will stun him for 1.5 seconds. If he merely "scratches" a wall, he loses momentum.
~~ ~~ While it sounds interesting, riot will never make something like this. Sorry, bro.
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/large/inv_weapon_rifle_23.jpg Q: Pacifier Gun R-Nine starts firing his Pacifier Gun in a line towards a target spot, firing ten shots in a second. This is a channeled ability; each bullet deals a minuscule amount of damage, scaling well with AD, and stuns for 0.03 seconds, the first enemy unit hit. No cost. Max range 800. Moderate to Low Cooldown
~~ ~~ Not bad. Would be fun to hit enemies while you pass them. However, 10 shots might be too much. Less shots = easier to balance. Also, 0.03 stun doesn't mean anything. I think 0.3 sec stun would be much better.
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/large/spell_fire_burningspeed.jpg W: Automatic Defense Systems: Ground Target: R-Nine dashes towards 400 units towards the target spot and puts the ability on a 10 second cooldown; costs 20 RF, does not interrupt Q channel. Allied Champion or Self Target: R-Nine sends out tracking missiles that destory all projectiles prone to hit the targeted champion in his current position- note that blocking from other units is not counted. 60/55/50/45/40 second cooldown. No cost.
~~ ~~ Missile destruction? Sounds a bit too OP. It is like a spell shield, but might be much more powerful. It do have long CD, so i am not sure what to do with it. Also, free movement is a bad, because it interferes with your passive.
http://wow.zamimg.com/images/wow/icons/large/ability_rogue_smoke.jpg E: Tear Gas R-Nine throws tear gas into a targeted 400-units area within 1200 units; the gas slows the attack and move speed of enemies in it greatly with a reapplying 2-second debuff. Deals minute true damage per second. No Cost. High Cooldown.
~~ ~~ High CD, huge range and AOE range. It's OP. Your champ already have long CD ability, i don't think he needs another one,
http://cdn.wow.mmoui.com/images/icons/m143.jpg R: Military Mode R-Nine becomes immobile and shreds all armor until an ally enters by right clicking it; after that, he gains superb armor and magic resist, and moves like normal champions do at 275 movespeed; he has no abilities, and the ally gains use of an alternate ability set, aside from using autoattacks at a slow attack rate with that deal damage based on boosted AD of R9: Q: Heavy Shell: Fires a single skillshot nuke in a line, affected by AD of R9. Moderate to High Cooldown. W: Defense Zone: Creates a zone for 2/3/4 seconds in 300 units radius around R9 that blocks all incoming hostile projectiles. Very High Cooldown. E: Electric Defense System: Deals low AP scaling magic damage (ahh yes, all other damage used by R9 is physical unless otherwise noted) to all enemies within 250 units; stuns them for 2 seconds. R: Eject: Tosses the ally out into an area within 800 units; returns R9 to Civil Mode; auto-applies after the 50/60/70 second duration of the ability has ended, putting the ally 200 units to R9's back. Ultimate has a High Cooldown when compared to an average ultimate.
~~ ~~ No. Riot failed with tahm kench killing his team mates fiasco. I don't think this ability is viable in the game.
wardrobe monster1 votesWhile it sounds interesting, riot will never make something like this. Sorry, bro.
Much hurt. On second thought, has Riot taken heed of my less fabulous projects? No? Then what is the difference? :)
Not bad. Would be fun to hit enemies while you pass them. However, 10 shots might be too much. Less shots = easier to balance. Also, 0.03 stun doesn't mean anything. I think 0.3 sec stun would be much better.
The CC on this was supposed to be more of a distraction than real threat.
Missile destruction? Sounds a bit too OP. It is like a spell shield, but might be much more powerful. It do have long CD, so i am not sure what to do with it
Also, free movement is a bad, because it interferes with your passive.
Does it now (interfere)? Because, you see, he is going to be like Sion ultimate all the time, and being the noob I am, without this ability to give me some level of control, I would spend more time stuck on walls than playing.
High CD, huge range and AOE range. It's OP. Your champ already have long CD ability, i don't think he needs another one,
Nerf range nerf cooldown remove damage?
No. Riot failed with tahm kench killing his team mates fiasco. I don't think this ability is viable in the game.
But Kalista Ultimate? At the worst, the bad player R9 will put his ally in a position he can escape 1000 unis away from, as he is probably not going to get melted. But, well, can't say I ever understood LoL.
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regonas2 votes[{quoted}](name=wardrobe monster,realm=EUNE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=TOZEWV0O,comment-id=000600000000,timestamp=2015-11-23T05:34:46.708+0000)
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WarchfGinger1 votesregonas1 votes[{quoted}](name=Warchief Rylon,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=TOZEWV0O,comment-id=0008,timestamp=2015-11-23T22:18:53.140+0000)
This challenge is for new concepts, sorry.
WarchfGinger1 votesAwwww... Can you still review them though?
regonas1 votes[{quoted}](name=Warchief Rylon,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=TOZEWV0O,comment-id=000800000000,timestamp=2015-11-23T22:57:19.434+0000)
Awwww... Can you still review them though?
Yea. When i have time to. I am a little buy right now and i just finished my awesome 3D champion concept.
WarchfGinger1 votesYeah, that is awesome 3D graphic design....
regonas1 votes[{quoted}](name=Warchief Rylon,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=TOZEWV0O,comment-id=00080000000000000000,timestamp=2015-11-23T23:32:55.156+0000)
Yeah, that is awesome 3D graphic design....
Well, that was my first try at 3D design, after all.
Shmoovus1 votesAm I permitted to reference my archives of unused concepts and failed champions? Even if you say no, I will still take up your challenge.
regonas1 votesAm I permitted to reference my archives of unused concepts and failed champions? Even if you say no, I will still take up your challenge.
Well, i made this post on idea of quickly making new champion concept as good as you can. Using older works is a bit unfair.
Shmoovus1 votesI just realized that this post is two days ago, so there is probably no way to make one off the bat now that I see it. I thought it was newer. Sorry.
Shmoovus1 votesAlso, my concepts are more thematic than mathematical, if that is permitted.
