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Bethemos ~ The Terrene Guardian

DiamondMatthew·12/1/2014, 1:41:34 AM·12 votes·8,922 views

Bethemos ~ The Terrene Guardian

He would look like a giant titan made of stone carrying a large hammer (see pics below). His voice would sound very deep, crackly, and a little angry.

Giant

http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110803081648/infamous/images/d/d4/IceGolem1.jpg

Hammer (Would look like Entropy)

item 3184 Would look exactly like this

Stats

HP 455 (+85) HP Regen 5.5 (+.7) AD 48 (+3.5) AS .550 (+3%) AP 0 (+0) Armor 30 (+0) MR 30 (+0) MS 330 Range 175 (Uses HP as resource)

Background: Giant nature spirit awoken by the rune wars. Enraged by the destruction of the landscape he join the league to end wars and show the power of the earth.

Passive: Nature’s Wrath

Bethemos's AA slow his target by 25% for .25 sec.

CD: 10 sec

Bethemos's next AA deals an additional 30 (+ 15 × Champ lvl) (+20% Armor) true damage and doubles the slow and its duration. The Cooldown is reduced by 1 sec every time he is attacked, this doubles against champions, turrets, and large / epic Monsters.

Q: Catastrophic Blow

CD: 7 sec all ranks Cost: N/A

Bethemos’s next auto within 5 sec will deal 110/135/150/165/180% AD. Whoever is hit will be stunned for 1 sec and all enemies in a 150 radius of the enemy hit will take 40% of the damage and be slowed by 20/25/30/35/40%. This Auto will apply on-hit effects, but cannot crit. This will reset his auto. Both the extra damage and the AoE damage can deal damage to turrets. Bethemos's Q will apply his Passive. (His Q would have a giant smash animation with dust flying up, and the shockwave would look like a Mega-Gnar E)

W: Inspissate Armor Passive: Bethemos gains 1 armor for every 65/55/45/35/25 HP

CD 25/22/19/16/13 sec Cost: 10% Current HP

Active: Bethemos gains a 80/110/140/180/210 (10% Bonus HP) shield for 6 sec. At the end of the duration the remaining shield amount heals Bethemos for that amount. (If there was 150 left on the shield Bethemos would be healed for 150 HP). If Bethemos is under 50% HP, the Heal is doubled. (The shield would look like giant chunks of rock / earth circling around him and at the end of the duration or if the shield is broke the rocks break and fall to the ground)

E: Tectonic Fracture

CD: 10 all ranks Cost: 15% Current HP Cast Range: 600 Range: 100 Width: 100

Bethemos conjures a breakage in the tectonic plates that deals 95/115/135/155/175 (+60% AD) (30% Armor) damage. Enemies hit are knocked up for .5 sec and slows by 20/30/40/50/60% for 2 sec after. This ability would fire like a viktor E. It would take 1.5 sec for the fracture to travel from start to finish. (This ability would look like a braum ult, but out of stone)

R: Terraform

CD 240/180/120 sec Cost: 20% Current HP

After a 1.5 sec delay Bethemos slams the ground with his Hammer sending out a global shockwave dealing 280/360/440 (+60% AD) (+30% Armor) and slowing enemies hit by 20/30/40%. If he is interupted the ult goes on CD for 30/25/20 sec. (His ult would look like a giant earthy shockwave / ripple starting from Bethemos spreading out)

Upon selection “The earth shall tremble in my wake”

Plz send ideas for jokes and taunts

Jokes "Fi, Fy, Fo, Fum, I get fed by champs who're dumb" Champion

Rex'sai ~ 2 taunts ~ 1 joke "You have dug your last tunnel burrower" "Your next burrow with be 6 feet below the surface"

"You really get under my skin"

Zyra ~ 2 taunts "I will expel your seeds from the earth" "Your seeds shall not take root"

Sion ~ 2 taunts "You belong in the ground Sion" "Your carnage ends now, juggernaut"

Baron ~ 3 quotes while fighting "Baron, your ravaging ends now" "I will stop the spread of your coruption" "Your corpse shall be buried by the earth"

Dragon ~ 1 quote while fighting (Need more) "Fly away dragon there is no safe place to land" "Your roars of defiance will soon turn into cries for mercy" "Fire cannot compete with the strength of earth, I will bend you to my will"

Death "To the earth, I shall return" "I shall rise again"

Dance

Would be the first part starting at 8:09 - 8:16 (Back view) and 9:38 - 9:45 (Front view)

Also, When the dancers do the punching towards the ground at the 8:12 mark, Bethemos would punch the ground and make the ground crack.

http://youtu.be/gtaGmyqk9vY?t=8m8s

Walking "My waking is irreversible" "I cannot be lulled back to sleep" "You have awoken what you cannot control" "Foreward" "Each step... An earthwake" "The Earth... Ravaged by war" "I feel the earths pain"

Attacking "Feel my blows" "I shall mute their cries" "I shall deaden their screams" "Their voices... Lost in torrent of earth" "The thunder of my steps will muffle the snapping of their bones" "They shall pay" "Feel my wrath" "My rise... was your fall"

Upon using Q "Become Dust" "Feel my wrath" "Return to soil" "None can withstand natures force"

Upon using W "The earth is my shield" "My armor... unbreachable"

Upon using E "The earth quakes" "None shall stand" "The very earth against you"

Upon using R "The ground trembles" "The forces of nature are beyond compare" "Feel my rage"

Items

Boots item 3117 item 3111 item 3047

Defense item 3102 item 3065 item 3083 item 3143 item 3068

Damage item 3078 item 3172 item 3156

HA and CS item 3184

Item Interactions item 3068 "Corpses... lay burn around the battle field" "They shall burn"

item 3083 "Made of nature itself" "This will suit me nicely"

item 3143 "Steel as hard as rocks"

item 3078 "They shall feel my blows" "This... shall hurt" "They shall suffer"

item 3184 "This... looks familiar" "They shall be trambled"

item 3110 "As cold as ice"

item 3172 "As fast as the wind"

When he owns a item 3110 item 3172 item 3068 "The elements... all in my control"

Thanks for looking at my idea :) and plz comment.

~ item 3113 summoner 6 item 3113 Diamondmatthew item 3113 summoner 6 item 3113

140 Comments

Talon Gerrard12/1/2014, 3:19:34 AM2 votes

A really interesting concept. The passive seems a little too powerful with the true damage though. I would change it do bonus physical damage or bonus magic damage.

Gibbish12/1/2014, 5:23:07 AM2 votes

i really like it but by god he's gonna be tanky

Tamur12/1/2014, 6:22:20 AM2 votes

Want to trade reviews

Talon Gerrard12/1/2014, 3:05:05 PM2 votes

Party ROCK. I see what you did there...

Shamont12/1/2014, 4:05:47 PM2 votes

Thanks for answering my questions, and I like what you did with the new possible second cast on E, him sinking into the ground an breaking out of the fracture. I like that better than a blink, it fits him better and it's much cooler. The animation would be wicked. Would it apply a knock up or knock back?

Shamont12/1/2014, 7:10:05 PM2 votes

At first when I looked at this picture (no offense) he looked about the size of malphite, even though I kno they are completely different. Then I saw that there were trees on his head and his shoulder and then I saw the people in comparison to him, and I was like OMG!!! This guy is so colossally enormous it blew my mind Also, like the dance

Othello the Cat12/5/2014, 12:48:19 AM1 votes

Okay, let's start at the beginning with the passive... It's OP as fuck. At level 18 with just base stats (Assuming you've leveled all of your abilities), he gets just over 90 True damage PERMANENTLY per basic attack. Master Yi is the only one who can even come close to that with his E and if he has 300 attack damage, but that's still less and only for five seconds. Plus, you add the slow to it, which makes it even more powerful. Sure, they can't be slowed every 10 seconds at level 1, but it's still a stronger slow than Ashe's Q, and when combined with a Frozen Mallet, you proc the 40% slow on EVERY BASIC ATTACK. So, just my opinion, I'd seriously nerf it. Twitch's passive True damage is over time and requires multiple basic attacks to do anything, and Corki's is only 10% of his AD. Even with 500 AD, he'd only get 50 bonus True damage.

Anyway, on to the Q. The Stun should not increase with levels. You've already got enough sustain and displacement that your other abilities will easily land with a 1 second stun. The slow should be decreased early and work up to 40%, because a 40% slow if incredibly debilitating at level 1. Darius's W, which is very similar, starts at 20% and works it s way to 40%, and it doesn't even have a stun. Not to mention, by the way, that a 200 radius AoE is actually quite large, bigger than the passive from Ravenous Hydra. Aside from that, it's an okay ability. Not much synergy with the other stuff, but it's okay.

The W: The passive is in dire need of a nerf. With base stats alone, when maxed, it gives almost 100 bonus Armor for free. If you want to make this a bit more balanced, make it percentile, about 1/2/3/4/5% of his Maximum health is converted into armor. Now, the Active: Equally Overpowered. There's very little to counter this early game, seeing as it gives you a 130 based damage shield, which is more than 10% of this champion's Maximum health at the time. Not to mention that he is healed for double the amount remaining, so if he's being pushed to tower and being poked, all he has to do is use his W and suddenly he gains all his health back in a few seconds. Just as a reference, Sion's W scales off of 10% of his Maximum Health, but it doesn't get to 130 until it's Maxed. Janna's shield starts at 80 and works its way to 240, but it's because she'll be in a lane where people will get poked down, so it needs to be strong. Plus, it lasts for less time.

The E: Is there a reason this has to be a vector skillshot? And is there also a reason for you to have a mini Braum Ult as a basic ability? Sure, it does less damage, but it's a massive AoE that has a stronger slow than Braum's slowing field, even though it lasts for less time. It also doesn't help that it's on a 10 second cooldown and there's no delay for when it knocks people up. Like you W, it's inredibly annoying and broken early game.

The R: Well, there are a few things missing here, namely the radius of the AoE, the duration of the buff/debuff and the cast time. If I knew these things, then judging the ability would be a bit easier, but for now, I'll work with what I have, being the most damage of any instant damage AoE Ult without any modifers, and the fact that the buffs and debuffs are beyons underwhelming. You have a 70% slow on your E, but you only give your enemies a 40% slow on your Ult. Not to mention that a 10% speed boost is really not much, although it gets adequate as it levels up. One more thing, though, is that the cooldown is tied with revival abilities for being the longest cooldown in the game. I'd really lower it, as well as the damage, but I'd increase the boost and slow.

Anyway, numbers aside, it's a decent kit, just a bit unnecessarily overpowered, underpowered and redundant in a few places. Fix it up a bit and you can have a great champion.

Tamur12/6/2014, 7:11:52 PM1 votes

have you thought making Nature's Wrath where instead of you hitting them it activates on them hitting you

Shamont12/7/2014, 5:24:57 PM1 votes

I would, but you already have a solid visual for that, even if its not one of him doing the dance. I wanted to do the animations to give better a better feel of what he looks like and what his actions look like. Your reference video already does that.

Quote for against dragon: "Your roars of defiance will soon turn into cries for mercy" "Fire cannot compete with the strength of earth, i will bend you to my will"

DiamondMatthew12/7/2014, 10:17:33 PM1 votes

Hey guys, Just posted a new Champ Idea

Krieger ~ The Might of the Rakkor http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/IBViwLKW-champion-idea-krieger-the-might-of-the-rakkor

DiamondMatthew12/9/2014, 12:05:43 AM1 votes

Hey guys, edited my Krieger Idea a lot, and now he is Thaddius!

Thaddius ~ The Might of the Rakkor http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/aLpbwkav-champion-idea-thaddius-the-might-of-the-rakkor

DiamondMatthew12/13/2014, 3:42:47 AM1 votes

Bump item 1028

Luckyghost9112/20/2014, 6:48:10 AM1 votes

I like the concept of the earth sprite becoming enraged and encasing them self in a suit of rock armor. His passive is a little op, his basic attacks are gonna slow and chunk his enemies in just a few hits from level 1. I'd take the true damage away and just apply it to another ability. The slow is fine. Q - is fine i'd scale the damage down just a bit. maybe by 15 W - I'd change it, If he is below 30% health he is healed for double not 50% cause he would never die as long as his w was active. E - take the additional 60% damage, and just reduce their armor for 30% for 3 seconds. R - its okay.

Jellycake Demon12/20/2014, 6:53:04 AM1 votes

i like this concept we need more non-human Champions, i bet you got some replies like he's just Malphite with a Hammer just because he's a "earth elemental golem". well any way this seems like a solid desingee & the Abilities, States & Items look good & the additonal stuff is just icing on the cake.

Luckyghost9112/20/2014, 7:31:47 AM1 votes

Now i've given my opinion and feedback... care to review one or few of my champions: Camile http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/8d94c8bP-camile-heiress-of-the-lizard-clan Yon'Kai http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/eqrXE9yt-yon-kai-creator-of-the-void or one of the other 17 http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/AefAFHZZ-my-17-champions

DiamondMatthew1/7/2015, 2:11:52 AM1 votes

Hey guys just posted another idea!!!

Triton ~ The Storms Rage http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/pfQj436E-champion-idea-triton-the-storms-rage

DiamondMatthew1/8/2015, 2:58:02 AM1 votes

Just posted another idea!

Thrain ~ The Bow Hunter http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/yPEA2V6R-champion-idea-thrain-the-bow-hunter

DiamondMatthew1/9/2015, 1:39:52 AM1 votes

Bump item 1028

DiamondMatthew2/4/2015, 11:11:35 PM1 votes

Bump item 1028

Hey guys, sorry I have been gone, I am returning tho with 3 new champs!!

DiamondMatthew2/12/2015, 3:42:39 AM1 votes

Bump! item 1028

DiamondMatthew4/16/2015, 1:24:53 AM1 votes

Bump!item 1028

DiamondMatthew5/8/2015, 10:11:28 PM1 votes

Hey guys, should be releasing a new champ within a week or so!

DiamondMatthew7/29/2015, 6:06:26 PM1 votes

Hey, I have finally awoken from my slumber to start again on the boards.

SpiceIsRight8/3/2015, 12:41:25 AM1 votes

Passive looks good, would be interesting to start higher at say 40% and have it lower per consecutive AA (enemy growing tolerant deal since it doesn't decay).

SpiceIsRight8/19/2015, 5:23:53 PM1 votes

Hey bud, I'll check your champions out when I get a chance but this school year is going to be nuts. If you want immediate feedback, you could ask for key points of interest for me to look over and I can reply with that much quicker.

DiamondMatthew11/15/2015, 4:05:25 AM1 votes

bump [slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

DiamondMatthew8/17/2016, 3:07:33 AM1 votes

Hey, this is only of my favorite concepts I have ever created, just wanted to comment on it.

Also, I have new concepts.

Basset ~ The Bilgewater Blacksmith http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/so1Ev7dg-champion-idea->basset-the-bilgewater-blacksmith

Freya ~ The Grand Orchestrator http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/LAk0ZdfX-champion-idea-freya-the-grand-orchestrator

Elvira ~ Witch of the Isles http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/KHGaqByO-elvira-witch-of-the-isles

ThebroSir8/20/2016, 3:08:38 PM1 votes

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

DiamondMatthew5/14/2017, 10:05:42 PM1 votes

bump item 1028

DiamondMatthew2/23/2018, 1:04:45 AM1 votes

Hey everyone, Prob gonna release a new concept soon. item 1028