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[Champion concept] Oni, Lord of Calamity

Holdenmicgroin·8/24/2016, 12:43:06 PM·2 votes·1,693 views

Just a WIP idea i wanted to get down, passive needs balancing.

Overview: A AP fighter that relies AOE damage and effects to turn the tables in a fight.

version 0.0.2

Story: TBC Abilities: WIP Visuals: WIP

Abilities:

Passive: Catalyst Oni generates 1 catalyst every second, 2 Catalyst when he kills a small monster or a minion and 30 Catalyst when he kills or assists in the enemy champion death. Oni can hold a max of 100 Catalyst at a time and when he reaches that max all his Catalyst is consumed to generate a Cataclysm stack. When Catalyst is consumed to create a stack it refunds 10%(+2.77% per level) of the total catalyst consumed. Catalyst is also used to cast Oni's abilities, if not enough catalyst is available abilities cannot be cast. When Oni dies he loses all Catalyst and respawns with 0 Catalyst.

Passive: Cataclysm Cataclysm stacks are not lost on death. Cataclysm stacks grant Oni a passive AOE attack which deals 5 magic damage enemies within 450 units range per stack, per second. Can stack with item Immolate effect. Is progressive stack that has no limit.

Q: Death Grip Active: Death Grip Oni grabs a targeted enemy and pulling them towards him and silencing them for a second. Marks enemies with Enfeeble for 5 seconds.

Passive: Enfeeble Enemies afflicted with Enfeeble generate 5 Catalyst each time they are attacked.

---Damage: Deals 75/110/145/180/220 (+55% of AP) magic damage ---Effect: Silences enemy for 1 second ---Range: 360 unit cast range ---Type: Single target, Pull ---Cost: 10/9/8/7/6 Catalyst ---Cool-Down: 10/9/8/7/6 seconds

W: Burden Active: Oni afflicts a target enemy with Burden, causing certain positive effects they receive once they are afflicted to also be transferred to Oni.

---Damage: N/A ---Effect: When enemies afflicted with Burden are healed, shielded (health shield, spell shields), receive stat boosts (like Gallio W) and movement speed boosts. Does not include item passives, status effects (e.g. Tarric ult) and damage reduction abilities. ---Range: 400 unit cast range
 ---Type: Single target, Effect
 ---Cost: 25/22/19/16/13 Catalyst ---Cool-Down: 26/22/18/14/10 seconds

E: Dark Mass Oni channels for 2 seconds, creating an AOE which increases in range and magic damage as the channel progresses. When the channel is interrupted, triggered or reaches duration end he deals AOE magic damage to all nearby enemies hit as well as pulling them towards Oni.

---Damage: Initially deals 100/120/145/175/210 (+40% of AP) magic damage to enemies hit but increases 185/225/265/295/335 (+75% of AP) to full channel length. ---Effect: Pulls enemies 250 units towards Oni ---Range: 175 units to a max range of 1125 units at 2 seconds for AOE ---Type: AOE, Channel ---Cost: 25 Catalyst at all ranks ---Cool-Down: 21/19/17/15/13 seconds

R: Embargo Oni marks all nearby enemies with inactive Embargo mark, after a 3 second delay those marks become active dealing instant damage magic damage to all effected. The only way to rid oneself of the mark is to attack Oni within that 3 second interval and thus consumes the mark. Though when marked enemies deal damage Oni they heal him instead of dealing damage on that initial attack. If an marked enemy dies the mark is spread to a nearby enemy and the process repeats itself.

---Damage: Deals 100/140/190 (+55/65/75%of AP) magic damage when activated ---Effect: Marks with Embargo Ruin, enemies afflicted with Embargo runes heal Oni instead of dealing damage. ---Range: 450 unit AOE range ---Type: AOE, self cast ---Cost: 40/35/30 catalyst ---Cool-Down: 30/28/26 seconds

Visuals

Appears like a dark samurai.

8 Comments

CFatalis8/24/2016, 11:04:33 PM2 votes

i like the idea but you might want to look a few factors over how many Cataclysm stacks can he get to max you might want to make a move that converts them into a Cataclysm stack because if at 100 he will drop to nothing what if you get to 100 when the fight starts you might want a move that will help get catalyst stacks for that reason or the same move that makes the Cataclysm stacks can break it down as you see fit there is a cdr question but ill hold on that (not trying to be harsh to be honest i really love the idea its unique but the no mana and using catalysts as a resource will make things challenging)

Ninja Baby one8/25/2016, 2:20:42 PM2 votes

I'm sorry, but the W is a major dealbreaker. While the best of it's kind I've seen, buffstealing isn't balanced in League. Yorick Ult, Zilena Ult, Kayle Ult, Shen Ult, Bard Ult, Braum E, those are just some of the spells that would be extremely broken if they could be stolen. The only reason yours is somewhat balanced is you only steal all positive spells cast on them, not just stealing positive buffs already there. Still, it's a big problem. Otherwise, you just don't seem to have a grasp on how to scale spells and damage. I don't see a reason to max any of his spells as their scaling all suck.

CFatalis8/25/2016, 8:39:20 PM2 votes

looking at the other comment i re-looked at burden and i must say that skill is kinda broken like he said i would say it should cancel all buffs not including (neutral monster buffs and item buffs that are not actives) and he should get a temp bonus damage for all that he removes

Dark masses should have a minimum and a maximum damage that it does based on the charge time and change the range of it to say 200 at the start and 400 by the end if maxed out the charge time

i would change the Cataclysm passive range to that a sunfire or a little bit more just for more balance and you didn't specify the cap on it either

now i like the idea with embargo seance its a healing ult that doesn't do damage but i would make it a free cost and when it proc's you should get more Catalyst stacks out of it

to help fix the other problem with the Catalyst i would say increase the cap you can have on them like i would say 200 and your w could only convert 100 to a Cataclysm stack at a time

and ninja is kinda right you should look at some of the scaling moves to help fix some of your move scales and your cds are still a bit long

still loving this champ