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[Champion concept] Advay the war-torn knight (second attempt)

Atinizer·4/3/2016, 9:36:44 PM·0 votes·728 views

So this was an idea I had awhile back to switch between ranged and melee, damage and utility, Demacian and Noxian. Feed back is very much welcome because I'm not sure if the numbers are skewed (This is my first time for actually suggesting hard numbers on abilities.)

Lore: Advay is the son of a Noxian mage and a Demacian general who wanted to end the feud but inevitably failed. The two of them ran away to Ionia to raise their son until the Noxian invasion, during this raid Advay was taken hostage and when they learned of his heritage he was trained in the arts of dark magic. During one of his attacks on a Demacian settlement he came across a little Yordle boy that he was soon ordered to kill, he understood that this wasn't right and defected to the Demacian side after slaying his commanding officer. It was only after he experienced the corruption in the Demacian army that he decided to clean his hands of their side as well. Advay now finds himself in the League where he must fight for what he believes, although he must choose a side, for now he must make the most of the duality in his training.

General stats before abilities (Lacking many a detail) HP: Average Mana pool: Slightly above average Armor: Below average Magic resist: Slightly above average HP regen: Average Mana regen: Average Movement speed: 335 Attack speed: Low Damage: Poor early but scales up into average

Passive - War-torn Every five minutes you may choose either your Noxian training or your Demacian training. (Before choosing which to start with you cannot skill or attack. Upon attempting either it will remind you to choose.)

Noxian: Advay gains magic penetration that stacks up on an enemy the more he hits them with magic as well as higher movement speed. Choosing Noxian makes you a medium-ranged champion. Range: 500 Magic pen: 5% (Stacking up to 3/4/5 times) Movement speed: 5/10/15 Demacian: Advay gains armor penetration that stacks up on an enemy the more he hits them with basic attacks as well as granting him flat damage. Choosing Demacian makes you a melee champion (with a Horseman's pick.) Armor pen: 5% (Stacking up to 3/4/5 times) Damage: 10/15/20

Q - Chaos flux / Balancing strike Chaos flux: Mana per second: 50 Magical energy radiates from his staff granting him attack speed and his auto attack bounces to one nearby unit and they take magical damage equal to 2/3 the physical damage he did. Attack speed: 40%/45%/50%/55%/60% Base bounce damage: 60/70/80/90/100 (+ 40% AP) Balancing strike: Mana: 100 CD: 14/12/10/8/6 Empowers Advay's next basic attack to deal a bonus 15 (+30% AD) physical damage as well as stealing life increasing by the difference of your health. Life steal: every 50 health difference = 1/2/3/4/5% (Max 100% life steal, does not stack with more life steal.)

W - Arcane surge / Righteous hunt Mana: 80/85/90/95/100 CD: 13/12/11/10/9 Noxian: Arcane surge allows Advay to dash a short distance and release a blast in front of him that steals mana from one enemy unit (Prioritizes champs. Think of it like Firoa's where it has the circle at the end of the dash.) Magic damage: 80/95/110/125/140 (+ 40% AD) Mana steal: 50/70/90/110 (+ 60% AP) Distance: 600 Demacian: Righteous hunt allows him to dash towards an enemy to attack them as well as marking them, hitting them with a Demacian ability slows the target for 30% movement speed for 2 seconds and hitting them with a Noxian ability stuns them for 1/1.2/1.4/1.6/1.8 seconds Physical damage: 70/85/100/115/130 (+ 60% AD)

E - Warning wisp / Fairy fire 100 mana CD: 10 seconds holds 2 charges with a recharge time 70/65/60/55/50 Warning wisp: Sends out a sentinel to patrol the area and upon finding an enemy champion the wisp flies into them slowing their attack speed by 20%/25%/30%/35%/40% and marking them, if hit by a Demacian ability the mark is consumed dealing 50/60/70/80/90 (+20% AP + 25% AD) in magic damage. If hit by a Noxian ability the target has their move-speed frozen below 400. Fairy fire: Sends out a sentinel to patrol the area and upon the end of the duration or being destroyed (2 hits to kill 15G bounty) it flies to the nearest allied champion healing them for 0.5%/1%/1.5%/2%/2.5% (+2% AD = 1% heal) of their max health. Duration: 30 seconds (+20% AP = 5 seconds)

R - Roaring soul Mana: 50 CD: 160/140/120 Advay gains Tenacity and slow resistance as well as the ability to freely switch between modes by pressing R again for the next 15 seconds, in addition he gains bonuses while in either of the forms, in Noxian he gains magic crit chance while in Demacian he gains Life steal and an over shield for if he heals over his max HP. Tenacity: 40%/50%/60% Slow resistance: 40%/50%/60% Magic crit chance: 30%/40%/50% (Damage is affected by Infinity edge but not the crit chance.) Life steal: 20%/30%/40% Max over heal: 150/250/350 (Life steal does not stack with righteous hunt should it surpass 100% )

responses Upon selection "Of all the people you could choose..."

Moving (Nation specific responses are marked.) "Your choice summoner" "If you say so" (Noxian) "sigh on it" "Let's go already!" (Noxian) "Forward march!" (Demacian) "Right then" "Gotcha" "Okay let's go..." (Demacian "You ready for this summoner?" (Noxian) "Where to?" (Demacian)

Attacking "C'mon is that it?" (Noxian) "Had enough yet?" (Noxian) "Have at you!" (Demacian) "On your guard!" (Demacian) "Decide, run or fight?" "I guess I have to...."

Taunt "C'mon, I thought this would be a challenge!" (Noxian) "Fight me in the fields of honor!" (Demacian) "You better step down, or the summoner might choose me to kill you."

Joke "We all have choices, left or right, light or dark, COFFEE OR TEA?" "We all have choices, left or right, light or dark, CHOCOLATE OR VANILLA?

Upon casting Spells "For my own power!" (Upon choosing Noxus outside of ult) "For glory!" (^Same as that) "For honor!" (Choosing Demacia outside of ult) "For the truth!" (^) "I'll take that!" (Upon casting Arcane surge) "More Mana more problems!" (^) "I'm onto ya!" (Righteous hunt) "Get back here!" (^) "Hide and keep hiding!" (Upon casting Warning wisp) "Hide and seek!" (^) "A guiding light" (Fairy fire) "Search for others" (^)

Casting ultimate "I CAN'T CHOOSE!" "I CARVE MY OWN PATH!" "HERE WE GO!" "Why not both?"

Buying items item 3124 "Rageblade the roar of the heart." item 1001 "One step at a time" item 3115 "Uhm...I'm no dentist but this looks weird." item 3078 "Trinity force, for those who can't decide..." item 3742 "Deadman walking..." item 1038 "Best friend sword" item 3031 "Infinite possibilities."

2 Comments

Mister Modesty4/5/2016, 11:45:41 PM2 votes

I think the problem you're having with this concept is a clear kit. One- The passive divides the champion's functionality. So it's difficult to follow the intended kit. Think of your champion as a person. What is he like? And thus, how does he leave his mark on the battle field? ^You should have ONE, very general answer. Like- super tank, then you build from that. (Horacio is creepy, so I worked with the aspect of fear and terror) Also, about the kit: it's kind of all over the place. He's meant to have a sense of duality, but the skills seem to cut him into more than 2. Going Demacian makes you melee Going Noxian makes you AP

But then when you get into the skills- Demacian: Q- Auto Attack buff w/ lifesteal W- A charge that marks enemy- and the mark affects the next ability Demacian/Noxian depending on the skill E- Sentinel, vision and healing.

Noxian: Q- "Bouncing" Auto Attack W- Dash that steals Mana E- Sentinel, vision, move speed reducer, and marks enemies like Demacian W.

^These aren't bad ideas- they're just bad for him. -Sentinels: I don't understand how it fits the concept. -Marks: Marking an enemy is fine, but 2 marks? Also, given interchangeability: Using the Ultimate would encourage someone to simply go: Noxian Sentinel, Ult to change faction, Demacian W. The Demacian W gains extra damage from Noxian E, then marks the enemy again- switch to Noxian, and hit an enemy with the Q AA buff. Now you've stunned them. GG. It's a little too strong, if you get what I'm saying. -Mana steal- I don't see this sticking. A- Not all champs use Mana, and that would put a niche in his kit if he faced someone like Shyv. B- Riot doesn't like Mana rejuvenation. They 86d mana pots, and have removed many Mana rejuvenation effects from kits- like Soraka's ultimate.

My advice- trim it down to almost nothing. Keep the champ in mind, and replace the abilities as they make sense. It's your concept, if you like it then you like it. But my biggest concern is the sentinels. They just make no sense to me- that is; it makes no sense that this champion would have such an ability. Keep up the work!