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[Champion Concept] Narima, The Infinity Lord of Law (AD mid)

regonas··2 votes·1,131 views
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Links for other info about infinity lords: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/EYgjBeJ3-champion-concept-kawen-the-infinity-lord-of-truth-mobilityutility http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/1EoevnAH-themed-concepts-infinity-lords-wanna-join-me

Basic info

She is Demi-god and she personify the divine order of Law, so nobody can oppose her. She search for something who could allow her to travel back in time to the time before first rune war, so that she could fuse with ancient gods and become Almighty Law of Runeterra. Not like other beings in this world, she can not be killed. While her mortal body can be destroyed, her immortal soul will reincarnate, so Narima can never be stopped, she can only be delayed. She also represent The Will of Control, so lesser living beings are forced to obey her commands no matter what. Her favorite beings are voidborns, be she changes them to suit her better. She even fused her mortal body with few voidborns and transformed into some-kind of hybrid, but she is nothing like normal voidborns.

Friends: Chogath Velkoz +other infinity lords Enemies: Ekko Zilean

COMBAT

Attack range: 175

Passive: Mutations are Evolution: killing an enemy champion will permanently increase your attack damage by 3. Getting assist on a killed enemy champion will permanently increase your attack damage by 1. When you have 5 or more kills: increase your armor penetration by 10/13/16. When you have 10 or more kills: increase your attack speed by 10/15/20%. When you have 15 or more kills: all your damage dealing abilities can be critical now. When you have 20 or more kills: increase critical damage done by 20/25/30%.

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Order of Attack [q] Cause mutant worms to strike targeted area after 1,5 sec dealing 100/145/190/235/280 (+95% of attack damage) physical damage to enemies in targeted area. If enemies hit are in the air, then they will receive 50% more damage. Cooldown: 8 sec Mana cost: 45 Range: 600 Range of AOE: 250

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Law of Execution [w] Launch dark energy sphere at targeted enemy, but if any enemy is between you and your target, then that enemy will be hit instead. Hit enemy will suffer 40/70/100/130/160 (+10% of missing health +1% per 30 attack damage) physical damage. If enemy is stunned or rooted in place, then he/she suffers additional damage equal to 5% of his/her max health. Cooldown: 12 sec Mana cost: 30/35/40/45/50 Range: 700

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Law of Evolution [e] Launch 4 blood worms in rapid succession over 2 sec (you can't move while shooting out worms). Each worm will deal 30/45/60/75/90 (+30% of attack damage) physical damage to first enemy hit and then slowly comes back to you and heal you for 20/30/40/50/60 (+25% of damage done) health. Cooldown: 10 sec Mana cost: 55/65/75/85/95 Range: 750 Worm returning speed: 300 Worm health: 100/140/180/220/260 (+20% of your max health)

(A note: worms can only be damaged when they are returning to you)

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Absolute Law [r] Passive: increase your bonus attack damage by 5/ 7,5/ 10%.

Active: cause your targeted enemy to obey your command to damage himself/herself for 200/260/320 (+100% of attack damage) and be knocked into air for 0,75 sec. After Landing enemy will remain stunned for 0,75 sec. Cooldown: 60 sec Mana cost: 85/100/115 Range: 500

~~ ~~ Some build examples:

  1. item 3158 item 3153 item 3074 item 3072 item 3031 item 3035 Mid
  2. item 3006 item 3153 item 3087 item 3074 item 3742 item 3065 Top
  3. item 3117 item 1039 item 3153 item 3748 item 3742 item 3022 Jungle
  4. item 3158 item 3004 item 3074 item 3072 item 3031 item 3035 Mid/Top

19 Comments

NaturesMayhem3 votes

Every champion in this game just feels like it fits in the world. Im sorry but that just doesn't look like it would fit right into the world of League of Legends. Looks like something that might be in another game though. It is a very cool character but just doesn't fit the aspect and feel of the game.

regonas2 votes

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How does she not fit?

DrugsForRobots1 votes

I think what NaturesMayhem means is that the artwork you've given as an example, the kit you've created, and her lore and title, don't really mesh all that well together.

Every champion is an attempt to fulfill some 'fantasy' or play on some recognizable archetype. What makes LoL successful is that Riot has done this and done it well, combining art, lore, and kit into a cohesive theme and identity that transcends cultures.

Now when we look at your champion we see: 1) she is stated to be the god-like incarnation of Law; but we see in her art 2) a red-white mass of bones? armor? blood? with 3) abilities that reference 'worms'? who 4) has an affinity for the creatures of the Void?

You see what I'm getting at? She seems to be all over the place, to the casual observer such as myself (and anyone else I imagine). There's no point harping on whether her numbers or ratios are balanced when her theme is so... uncertain.

Consider the questions Riot asks themselves whenever they design a champion: What niche does this champion occupy within the game? What makes his / her silhouette stand out against the other characters in the League? What artistic, narrative, and gameplay elements are her strongest features? What resonates with players and what falls flat? What design space does this champion explore that we haven't touched on yet?

Also, Kayle kinda already has the whole 'Law & Order' thing going for her as she is 'the Judicator'. That isn't to say that we couldn't have another champion dabble in that field though.

Don't take this personally - it isn't a slight against you. I do think you can do better though.

regonas2 votes

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I have answer for those. Ok, lets start with who this champion is. Infinity lords are something between demons and gods. They are something like other halves of true gods (from first rune war). Lets call infinity lords gray parts of full gods.

These gray parts is like something completely focused one one word of power. Words what gives power from all its meanings and variations. This time that word is "Law". Not any particular type of law, but every kind of law.

"Now when we look at your champion we see: 1) she is stated to be the god-like incarnation of Law; but we see in her art 2) a red-white mass of bones? armor? blood? with 3) abilities that reference 'worms'? who 4) has an affinity for the creatures of the Void?"

So, lets start with what we have. Yes, she is incarnation of law, but in wider version of it. Evolution is a law of survival, so she is evolved beings and that happened because she infused herself with different type of creatures, some of them were from the void, some of them were not. Even after that, her power doesn't change. Devouring is something like a law in the voidborns, so it becomes part of her body, too. In the world there are those who give order and those who obey, that's like a Law, so she command other being (even those made out of her flesh, because The Will of Control is also part of her power, which allows her to project her will into any living being or her own cells) to do her work. Those beings made by her out of herself is something like personal minions, and lower beings must obey superior beings, that's also a law. Also, her affinity for voidborns are pretty simple: strong always survive, that's a law, and voidborns are just stronger than humans.

You have to look at big picture. It not only about the law what abides the people, it's about all forms and versions of law.

"What niche does this champion occupy within the game? What makes his / her silhouette stand out against the other characters in the League? What artistic, narrative, and gameplay elements are her strongest features? What resonates with players and what falls flat? What design space does this champion explore that we haven't touched on yet?"

  1. She is something who are evil not just for being evil, but at a same time isn't fully evil. She just wants to be complete and live like she used to- as a god.
  2. She is something between assassin and juggernaut. Doesn't have huge damage at first (like juggernaut), but gets stronger as game goes on (as juggernaut) and she is good on killing unsuspecting enemies fast (like assassin). Also, she is dependent on getting fed (like assassin). So, she is a champ who progress like juggernaut and assassin, but doesn't have natural tankiness of juggernauts and extreme mobility of assassins. Something between those two.
  3. Her diverse kit and need on play very well makes her stand out. She have many good abilities, but overall performance hugely depends on your skills on roaming and collecting kills. She is something similar to Rengar before his rework, be her abilities are all ranged.
  4. Her strongest features are her type and her story elements. As a gave out, her power is Law, but there lies a lot of mysteries about which laws are applied to her and how. It leaves huge space for imagination and creations. Also, as i said, her kit is something that we don't have in the game.
  5. And also, she explore possibilities or old gods returning to Runeterra or even new gods being created. Adding infinity lords could open path for new events (like 5 champs vs 1 god, or something). As it stands, we have only 2 semi-demi-gods (Nasus and Renekton), but they aren't godly beings and are just ancient immortals. Adding demi-gods born out of gods, may open doors for few new champion and more lore for the whole game.

I know, that not everybody can see the big picture about what i want to do here, but i hope that you will at least try to.

Lonely Flame1 votes

But that doesn't really seem like it meshes together. It seems more like you found a picture you liked and then built a lore/kit around that. Was your original idea to have a Law-based semi-God that used worms? Or did you find an angry looking monster with worms and thought 'how can I turn that into a champ?'

regonas2 votes

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Hi there, random downvoter. For your knowledge, i evolved her concept over the month.

First try. Second try. This is third concept based on similar kit theme, so yes, my original idea was something worm based strange being. Law demi-god is another theme i tried with worm user champion.

So, i fused two themes i was working on: "worm user" + "infinity lords" = this concept.

Lonely Flame1 votes

Hey dude, trying to be civil. Again I'll tell you that I wasn't downvoting your stuff and only started doing it when you called me out for no reason. But sure, you want to go down that road again we can do it.

So then I wasn't wrong when I said you found a pic and based a lore and kit around it. The thing is, if you're going to take the champion in a different direction but still use the concept you originally wanted, you have to let go of the old character and start from scratch. This idea didn't need to have anything to do with the Void. It could have been a completely original idea. Look at Tahm Kench. Everyone was so sure that the gambler mentioned in his lore was Twisted Fate and the wife was Eve. Nope. 2 random people we've never heard of. And it didn't effect his character in the slightest.

regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Lonely Flame,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=KM7g48Q5,comment-id=0000000000000000000000000000,timestamp=2015-10-19T09:20:34.957+0000)

Wrong again, mister downvoter. Lore and kit was done way before i had the picture. And even when i evolve same theme of "worm user", every form of this champion is different in design and type. First try was about champ with pure heart who would tame void beings. Second try was about person who just grew up with them. Now it is about demi-god who can control and fuse with them. Three different champs with same base theme.

Now run along mister downvoter, and when you lie, don't forget that there is moderators, who can tell who are downvoting stuff.

Lonely Flame1 votes

Then go ahead and ask the moderators. I'm not downvoting your stuff. I was for a period, like many other people on the forums, because you were acting like a child. Your attitude looked like it had improved so I tried to be civil. Guess that was a mistake.

For the record the last post of yours I downvoted was Irma, which was 11 days ago.

Understand something: You are nothing but antagonistic. That attitude will get you no where in life. I get it man. It's hard to have your work be criticised. But when multiple people tell you 'Hey, maybe you could improve this' and you respond with petty insults and complain that they don't get it, the issue isn't to do with your concept. This issue is your bad attitude. Grow up.

regonas1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Lonely Flame,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=KM7g48Q5,comment-id=000000000000000000000000000000000000,timestamp=2015-10-19T15:19:11.891+0000)

Funny, i already asked. Would you like to guess what they said, mister downvoter?

Lonely Flame1 votes

Tell me please. I'm begging to know. Cause I will screen shot your posts and show you that I'm not downvoting your stuff. Also which moderator did you ask? Because I'd be very curious to know who is telling you this information.

regonas1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Lonely Flame,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=KM7g48Q5,comment-id=00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000,timestamp=2015-10-19T15:30:54.731+0000)

Tell me please. I'm begging to know. Cause I will screen shot your posts and show you that I'm not downvoting your stuff. Also which moderator did you ask? Because I'd be very curious to know who is telling you this information.

Well, mister downvoter, if you beg so nicely, then i will tell. I made a request for you and other random downvoters to be banned from this forum permanently, but they didn't agree. Still, they agreed to investigate on your action and take necessary measures if they see the need for that.

In panic now? Will you go back and remove all downvotes you put? Don't think so, because little kids doesn't know what "taking the responsibility for one's action" means.

Good day, mister downvoter.

Lonely Flame1 votes

http://imgur.com/gallery/PADzs

There you go. A list of your last few champion concepts and comments and GASP what's that?! No downvotes?? I can post more if you want. As I said I didn't downvote your stuff. I reported you for Spam and Harassment. I'm not scared because I've done nothing wrong. You need to grow up and fix your attitude. I will say though, it's funny that all of my comments have 0 points while yours are still on 1. Are you by chance downvoting mine?

Lonely Flame1 votes

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regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Lonely Flame,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=KM7g48Q5,comment-id=00000000000000000000000000000000000000000001,timestamp=2015-10-19T15:41:00.959+0000)

http://imgur.com/gallery/PADzs

There you go. A list of your last few champion concepts and comments and GASP what's that?! No downvotes??

:DDD did you really think that wouldn't notice? I check on my concepts every hour.

Kera, Seven-headed Dragon Hydra suddenly changed from from -3 to -2 Sir Gram the Evil, The lord of bad luck changed from +3 to +4 Kara'Xai, The Beauty of the Void changed from 0 to +1

:DDDD oh my god you are entertaining when you are afraid :DDD

God, please, keep it coming. I love a good laugh.

Lonely Flame1 votes

Cool. Guess you really can't learn. Back to reporting you it is :) I tried man. I really tried being civil and you just can't be can you.

regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Lonely Flame,realm=OCE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=KM7g48Q5,comment-id=0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000100000000,timestamp=2015-10-19T15:55:45.732+0000)

Cool. Guess you really can't learn. Back to reporting you it is :) I tried man. I really tried being civil and you just can't be can you.

Oh really? You think that reporting is working? Because i know at least 2 people who report your harassment, daily, but nothing happens. Maybe i will try to do the same. Good luck, mister downvoter.

Lonely Flame1 votes

And look, Kera is now at -7. Did I downvote it 4 times? Sir Gram is now at 1. Did I downvote it 3 times? Kara has been at 1 since the day you posted her and I know that because I actually liked the artwork you had for her.

I'm not afraid because I'm not going to get banned. There's a reason the mods didn't ban me before and they won't now. It's because I'm not downvoting your things. As I've said multiple times now and you still can't seem to grasp, I've been reporting you. Your attitude is toxic. Downvoting just makes you mad, but if I report you hopefully you will be banned.

That said, I'm allowed to downvote whatever I want. Forum rules state "As always, vote on the content you enjoy based on how valuable you think it is" and I don't think your content has any value, like so many others, which is why it gets downvoted. When you do post something half decent, people upvote it. Simple as that.

And reporting me daily? Even though before yesterday I hadn't been on the forums in almost 2 weeks? Funny, that does sound like harassment, but I guess it's ok when you and your friend do it.

disembodiedsoul1 votes

Way too OP

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