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[Champion Concept] Reiker (a bit mechanically difficult AP marksman/ next lol's satan)

regonas··2 votes·1,370 views
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Attack range: 540

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Passive: Boiling Acid Arrows: your basic attacks deal 10 (+10% of ability power) bonus magic damage instantly and 30 (+30% of ability power) bonus magic damage over 6 sec stacking up to 2 times..

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Acid Mine [q] Place an invisible mine which deals 60/100/140/180/220 (+70% 40% of ability power) magic damage over 3 sec 5 sec to first enemy who steps on it. Max number of mines: 4. Cooldown: 14/12/10/8/6 sec Mana cost: 35 Range: 220 Mine's health: die in 1 basic attack

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Sky-fall Shot [w] Jump over your target landing in an opposite side of him and deal 100/150/200/250/300 (+75% of ability power) magic damage to him/her if you click on him/her when you are directly above him/her. Cooldown: 14 sec Mana cost: 45 Range: 400 Max range traveled: 800

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Cursed Mist Arrow [e] Shoot an arrow into targeted area dealing 50/80/110/140/170 (+45% of ability power) magic damage to enemies in that area. Arrow will leave stuck in the ground for 3 sec. By reactivating this ability you teleport to location of that arrow and gain 20/25/30/35/40% bonus attack speed for 1,5 sec. Cooldown: 15 sec Mana cost: 50 Range: 660 Range of AOE: 125

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Acid Sentinel [r] Place an immobile turret like structure which will shoot at nearby enemies dealing 50/80/110 (+20% of ability power) magic damage per shot. It will prioritize attacking enemy champions. Max number of sentinels: 1/2/3. Cooldown: 100/90/80 sec Mana cost: 60 Range: 300 Range of sentinel's attacks: 580 Health of sentinel: 300/400/500 (+70% of your ability power) Armor and magic resist of sentinel: 30/35/40 Attack speed of sentinel: 0,562

~~ ~~ Some build examples:

  1. item 3020 item 3115 item 3135 item 3089 item 3157 item 3100
  2. item 3020 item 3115 item 3091 item 3153 item 3146 item 3004
  3. item 3006 item 3115 item 3153 item 3003 item 3004 item 3025
  4. item 3006 item 3115 item 3003 item 3004 item 3100 item 3027
  5. item 3020 item 3115 item 3004 item 3100 item 3027 item 3800

32 Comments

Lyevi3 votes

Skeleman/10

TheArsynist3 votes

Being a %%%% is not going to get your idea approved.

regonas2 votes

{quoted}

Being a %%%% is not going to get your idea approved.

Don't do upon other what you don't wish to be done upon you.

Teslablade2 votes

You gave him a Teemo Shroom for a q. Why?

regonas2 votes

{quoted}

You gave him a Teemo Shroom for a q. Why?

Q doesn't give vision, doesn't slow and don't expire, but have limited max number and can't be thrown. Also, new satan must be similar, but better than current one.

Teslablade2 votes

Why add another satan to begin with?

regonas2 votes

{quoted}

Why add another satan to begin with?

http://x3.cdn03.imgwykop.pl/c3201142/comment_pWIP0Xr1xONJNANBlTuNF5fABf5sBGl8.jpg

Teslablade2 votes

I can't take your idea seriously with that ability though.

regonas2 votes

{quoted}

I can't take your idea seriously with that ability though.

K, move on then.

Teslablade2 votes

No, I mean the rest of it is really good, but I don't understand why the q is what it is.

regonas2 votes

{quoted}

No, I mean the rest of it is really good, but I don't understand why the q is what it is.

If you play in-bot line then you need to keep enemies from bush, deals something against ganks. Put some of those babies in right places and have a clean and safe line for yourself and your support.

Teslablade2 votes

I just think a double-scaling, invisible, DOT mine is a bit excessive.

regonas2 votes

{quoted}

I just think a double-scaling, invisible, DOT mine is a bit excessive.

Well, only one dot can be on one target, so if enemy steps on 3 of them he will be damage only by one not stacking dot effect.

Teslablade2 votes

What if instead, it slowed the enemy and gave vision of them?

regonas2 votes

{quoted}

What if instead, it slowed the enemy and gave vision of them?

That would be just a weaker version of Caitlyn traps then.

Rockman2 votes

this is pretty terrible

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

originally I was just going to mark this down without even looking at the abilities, but I decided to give you the benefit of the doubt.

here goes

passive: so basically you want a free teemo passive on someone who's going to be having a support? the fact that it stacks is ridiculous, it's got an additional second of burn on it, and it's already pretty OP.

not as OP as teemo's, but that's because teemo players have to rank it up.

Q: so teemo ult. I get it, limited number and doesn't give vision blah blah blah. this is literally a near carbon copy of teemo's ULTIMATE ABILITY. as a Q. people are going to aggressively abuse thise because people already abuse a more balanced version of it. like jesus cherry freakin' cola man.

W: this is the soundest ability in your kit. it's an engage, has some pretty hefty consequences if you screw up and can catch you out, and still requires decent timing. good job on this, and I'm not being sarcastic.

E: why. just why. Let's give an ADC a ranged teleport. this is logical to you? and it buffs him when he teleports, because that's fair. what about the fact that this does damage. so you want a single ability that a) has god tier positioning b) has a massive buff in lane and c) deals damage with its utility/positioning ability.

really? really man?

and god...

last but not least, his ult:

R: So you've got a teemo e as your passive, and teemo ult as your q.

let's just add in some heimer dinger here.

that's literally all I'm going to say on this. I'm done.

Regonas, you're not going to be getting a champion made if you keep this shit up.

no amount of number balancing is going to fix these kits you keep coming up with. because numbers balancing isn't as heavy to the game as you think it is.

as I've told you many times, there are ideas that are conceptually broken.

please fix your kits before you post, or please stop wasting riot's server space with this.

you can't find a neato burrito picture and just decide that you want it to be a champion

regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Leonidas Freedom,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=E4u5h8YE,comment-id=0005,timestamp=2015-09-28T14:21:08.567+0000)

I was planing to ignore your ignorance, but well i have time and maybe you aren't a loss cause, so i give it a try to educate you.

For starters, a little kid like you might not know this, but AP marksmans need to do magic damage on their basic attacks. His passive does right that.

Because you are being a little bitch, then why don't go into balance forums and say that Caitlyn and Nidalee traps is just variations of teemo ulty? Hell, you can go and complain about every on hit effect dealing magic damage, every blind, every slow and every movement speed increasing effect being variations of teemo skills. Go on, see what will happens.

Because E doesn't do that much damage, enemies will know where you will teleport and he needs some mobility other than W, that isn't that great. It can be outplayed against, but also is a great way to bait out enemies to use their abilities. However, kid like you may never know what "outplay" or "counter" means.

R is just a bit similar to heimer. I may have done a better job on it, but it is still better than anything you may ever come up.

Bitch please. I make champion concepts better than your life. You have nothing on me. Any of my concepts would beat all of your suggestions combined.

Even if i type while i was with my eyes closed, i would still make a better concept that you could ever fathom.

Run along, kiddo, you have nothing on me and my work is better than you.

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

instead of insulting me, focus on actually trying to make champions that have a chance to make it into league.

regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Leonidas Freedom,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=E4u5h8YE,comment-id=000500000000,timestamp=2015-09-28T16:35:09.585+0000)

instead of insulting me, focus on actually trying to make champions that have a chance to make it into league.

Instead of downoting and being a little sassy girl, focus on actually reading stuff, because any of my suggestions have a chance to make into the League.

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

when people consistantly and near constantly tell you that they don't - excluding me because I am in fact an asshole - that should tell you something.

regonas1 votes

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Leonidas Freedom3 votes

again, for some reason you think that discussions and debates need to involve slinging insults.

you purposefully ignore or denounce people who say your champions are bad. I'm fairly certain if we could delete comments you would do so with reckless abandon.

your champions are interesting, don't get me wrong (with the exception of this one) but are unbalanced.

instead of sitting there with your head in the sand crowing about how they're absolutely perfect and should be put into the game, you should dedicate your time to working on the.

it takes months upon months to develope a champion fully, get all of the numbers just right, and make sure it's fair.

and even then it's not always fair.

you want a character that is "LoLs next satan" so you literally ripped off passive DOT, mines that deal DOT, and automated turrets.

these are great concepts. on the champions you stole them from.

APCs should do some magic damage, but take for instance TwistedFate. while he's generally played as a burst mage he can be played and does exceptionally well as an APC.

his ult has nothing to do with an absurd abount of magic damage. his E, the passive which makes him a remarkable APC, doesn't proc off of every hit and certainly doesn't do stacking DOT.

as I said, your W is great. it really is. I would love if you made an entire champion that had unique and similar abilities which fit together. I really would. like, please do.

Your E is an issue, though. you can easily use it to teleport into bushes and then gank. and that's just a simple idea. it's got remarkable playability.

it'd be great for a jungler, not an ADC. they're supposed to be mobile, but not ridiculously mobile.

Calling me names and acting like a dick aren't going to make you right, nor is it going to make me wrong. Work on your champion, think about whether you would play against them, rather than playing as them.

regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Leonidas Freedom,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=E4u5h8YE,comment-id=0005000000000000000000000000,timestamp=2015-09-28T16:52:52.279+0000)

again, for some reason you think that discussions and debates need to involve slinging insults.

you purposefully ignore or denounce people who say your champions are bad. I'm fairly certain if we could delete comments you would do so with reckless abandon.

your champions are interesting, don't get me wrong (with the exception of this one) but are unbalanced.

instead of sitting there with your head in the sand crowing about how they're absolutely perfect and should be put into the game, you should dedicate your time to working on the.

it takes months upon months to develope a champion fully, get all of the numbers just right, and make sure it's fair.

and even then it's not always fair.

you want a character that is "LoLs next satan" so you literally ripped off passive DOT, mines that deal DOT, and automated turrets.

these are great concepts. on the champions you stole them from.

APCs should do some magic damage, but take for instance TwistedFate. while he's generally played as a burst mage he can be played and does exceptionally well as an APC.

his ult has nothing to do with an absurd abount of magic damage. his E, the passive which makes him a remarkable APC, doesn't proc off of every hit and certainly doesn't do stacking DOT.

as I said, your W is great. it really is. I would love if you made an entire champion that had unique and similar abilities which fit together. I really would. like, please do.

Your E is an issue, though. you can easily use it to teleport into bushes and then gank. and that's just a simple idea. it's got remarkable playability.

it'd be great for a jungler, not an ADC. they're supposed to be mobile, but not ridiculously mobile.

Calling me names and acting like a dick aren't going to make you right, nor is it going to make me wrong. Work on your champion, think about whether you would play against them, rather than playing as them.

Because your comments are meaningless and boring i will not read it and just get to the point where are you wrong. Your top concepts have 5 upvotes on them (2 concepts). And those are nice concepts and is liked by some people, even when most of their kit is irreversibly broken, unless changed altogether. However, given that into perspective, my top 3 concepts have more upvotes than all your concepts combined and multiplied by 2 (even when there are about 3 or 4 people who search for my concepts and downvote them when they see one). And that just top 3. Most of my concepts are between average and really good. Most of your are between failed ones and average. So, you should think before you comment stuff.

I don't take offence on your petty words, i just try to write in same way you are. If that makes you unhappy, then change the way you are, because i just copying you.

Sorry mate, but looks like i just BURNED you to dead. No offence.

Lance The Mage2 votes

The guy literally tells you that this concept of yours could work, and admirably so, but that you need to change it because of reasons that will most definitely deny this champion entry to LoL.

Just because your other concepts are well liked, doesn't mean you can just throw out champion concepts with ludicrous amounts of damage or utility under the pretense that it's "new" and "interesting".

Work on your tantrum problem before you start fixing your champions because such an attitude doesn't last long.

regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Lance The Mage,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=E4u5h8YE,comment-id=000500000000000000000000000000000000,timestamp=2015-09-28T17:23:08.265+0000)

The guy literally tells you that this concept of yours could work, and admirably so, but that you need to change it because of reasons that will most definitely deny this champion entry to LoL.

Just because your other concepts are well liked, doesn't mean you can just throw out champion concepts with ludicrous amounts of damage or utility under the pretense that it's "new" and "interesting".

Work on your tantrum problem before you start fixing your champions because such an attitude doesn't last long.

The guy literally raged and and said it could never work. Are you on shrooms or something?

Lance The Mage1 votes

He gave you criticism. Yes, it takes on a hostile and insulting tone but if you look past it, you see criticism. Isn't criticism something you use to improve your work?

As it stands, Reiker is the king of burns and that's extremely unfair considering they can stack, what's more, he can just throw himself into a group to burn everything and he has his escape covered because of unbelievable mobility and turrets.

regonas2 votes

[{quoted}](name=Lance The Mage,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=E4u5h8YE,comment-id=00050000000000000000000000000000000000000000,timestamp=2015-09-28T17:44:37.996+0000)

He gave you criticism. Yes, it takes on a hostile and insulting tone but if you look past it, you see criticism. Isn't criticism something you use to improve your work?

As it stands, Reiker is the king of burns and that's extremely unfair considering they can stack, what's more, he can just throw himself into a group to burn everything and he has his escape covered because of unbelievable mobility and turrets.

Yes, criticism would be a good thing. Hell, if it helped to improve my concepts i would gladly thank a guy. However, what is helpful in these lines right here:

  1. "passive: so basically you want a free teemo passive on someone who's going to be having a support? the fact that it stacks is ridiculous, it's got an additional second of burn on it, and it's already pretty OP."

  2. "Q: so teemo ult. I get it, limited number and doesn't give vision blah blah blah. this is literally a near carbon copy of teemo's ULTIMATE ABILITY. as a Q. people are going to aggressively abuse thise because people already abuse a more balanced version of it. like jesus cherry freakin' cola man."

  3. "E: why. just why. Let's give an ADC a ranged teleport. this is logical to you? and it buffs him when he teleports, because that's fair. what about the fact that this does damage. so you want a single ability that a) has god tier positioning b) has a massive buff in lane and c) deals damage with its utility/positioning ability."

  4. "R: So you've got a teemo e as your passive, and teemo ult as your q. let's just add in some heimer dinger here. that's literally all I'm going to say on this. I'm done."

  5. "Regonas, you're not going to be getting a champion made if you keep this shit up. no amount of number balancing is going to fix these kits you keep coming up with. because numbers balancing isn't as heavy to the game as you think it is. as I've told you many times, there are ideas that are conceptually broken. please fix your kits before you post, or please stop wasting riot's server space with this. you can't find a neato burrito picture and just decide that you want it to be a champion"

Please, explain, maybe i am only one who don't get it. What is there helpful and not a cheap way to try to offence me? Maybe i don't get it, my first langue ins't english. Maybe there is a way to decode this into something helpful, inspiring or worth reading.

Lafouboy2 votes

Giving him a Teemo shroom for a Q?

Stopped right there. NOOOOOPE

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

don't forget the heimer turrets for an ult

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