Talon Rework Concept: The Assassin that specialise in killing high health/regen target

arcDapineapple·8/6/2016, 11:12:38 PM·2 votes·1,129 views
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Ok i see alot of talon rework concept idea going around and i just want to post my idea so the community can see. Riot game stated this is what they want to do with talon:

  1. Want to make him a roaming Assassin
  2. Give him a new passive ability
  3. Counter play

So taking in all this info i came up with an idea of making him like Juuzo from Tokyo ghoul. Juuzo is a character that specialise in fighting ghouls with high regeneration using knives and other blade weaponry and i thought what if talon could do that?

[ New Passive]: Momentum blade

Has Talon move around he start building momentum that will allow his next attack to do bonus damage base on 7%/10/13% of his current movement speed. If he reach 100% Momentum he will gain a 30%/40/50% MS and will be able lunge forward to his target in a 300/350/400 range target


[New Q] Noxian Mercy

Passive: Talon basic attack/abilities can apply grievous wounds on target for 3 sec Active: Talon next attack does bonus damage 30 / 60 / 90 / 120 / 150 (+ 35% ad) and cause opponent to be slowed by 45%. This attack can crit and can reset his auto attack.

Tl;DR

You stab them really hard


[W] Rake:

Stay the same


[ New E] Shadow Dash 15 sec all rank Range: 400 Talon can dash 1x to dodge attack and go stealth for 5sec, while stealth he gain a 30%/40/50 movement speed boost. Dash will grant 15/20/25 momentum. This ability can be used to go through walls.

Tl;Dr

It basically Vayne Q and ultimate with increase range to help you get close to your enemies while being sneaky. When i mean sneak you can use your tumble to go invisible and sneak pass wards when roaming.


[New Ultimate] 1000 Blade Assasult

Talon target an enemy an throw 6x knife at them dealing 20 / 35 / 50 (+ 25% AD)damage and marking them. Enemy impale by talons blade will have 80% reduction to health regen/Lifesteal, heals and spell vamp. If talon land his Q on them again the blade will explode out and deal bonus 100/175/250 magic damage to them. If the mark target die your E will get reset.

TL;DR

A challenge where you stand still and start throwing knives into your target. Your target will know you mark them for dead and you will have to find a way to get to them and kill them.


8 Comments

Eclipse13378/6/2016, 11:29:53 PM1 votes

Talon is NOT made to kill regening/healing targets; that sounds a little more like Katarina if anything.

Plus, don't base your rework off an anime character lol.. Base it off of what the given champion's nichè, strengths and weaknesses.

You did a good job of lowering his burst potential but I feel like he needs more reliable mobility.

Stalinium8/7/2016, 1:02:34 AM1 votes

Other than Talon being compared to that picture making me want to vomit, here is my opinion as a Talon main:

The passive: I think you math'd incorrectly here- you would actually deal MORE damage at every rank with <100% momentum. Although I guess that'd be the tradeoff for the blink

Q: I'm totally fine with this as long as it's an AA reset and can crit

W: Applying the bleed sounds ludicrously strong in lane. This is kinda the hidden power rito doesn't like, and makes killing the enemy laner easy if you land a couple Ws. Personally, I hope that this ability is left untouched

E: Vayne's ultimate is that for a reason... While this sounds great (especially in lane... E, W, AA, Q , Tiamat and they're pretty much dead), I think it's actually too powerful. I'd be happy with getting over walls with my E though

R: I'm not sure if this sounds most like Katarina ult, Lucian Ult, or Irelia ult, and then Kalista's spear pull... Personally, I kinda like his current ult, but I am a Talon main XD

Overall, I think you're actually giving him too much damage in dot form, and turning him into a Vayne + Irelia type fighter rather than an assassin. But I upvoted for attention toward my favorite champ anyway ;)

EvilUnicornLord8/7/2016, 1:41:34 AM1 votes

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