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[Champion Concept] Gola'Gola Zyd, The void-touched Dragon (AP/AD hybrid)

regonas··10 votes·2,768 views
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Attack range: 180

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Passive: Darkest Energy: your basic attacks cause 15 (+your level) (+10% of ability power) bonus magic damage to your target and refresh 1/2/3/4/5/6 mana per basic attack.

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Iron Wings [q] Increase range of your basic attacks by 75 for 5 sec. In addition, first 3 basic attacks will gain 10/15/20/25/30 bonus armor penetration and deal 10/14/18/22/26 (+10% of ability power) bonus magic damage. Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8 sec Mana cost: 40

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Crushing Tail [w] Deal 70/110/150/190/230 (+120% 100% of bonus attack damage) physical damage to targeted enemy and knock him/her back. Cooldown: 12 sec Mana cost: 30/35/40/45/50 Range: 270 Knock back distance: 300

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Brimstone Flames [e] Breath out flames for 1 sec dealing 20/35/50/65/80 (+20% of ability power) magic damage to enemies inside them every 0,25 sec. Cooldown: 8 sec Mana cost: 50 Range: 500 Width at start: 150 Width at end: 200

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Dragon's Pounce [r] Passive: your every 5th ability will cause 50/70/90 (+15% of ability power) bonus magic damage.

Active: jump a distance stopping at first enemy champion hit causing 100/150/200 (+150% 125% of bonus attack damage) physical damage to him/her and stun him/her for 1,5 sec. Cooldown: 120 sec Mana cost: 80/90/100 Range: 550

~~ ~~ Some build examples:

  1. item 3020 item 3078 item 3146 item 3124 item 3116 item 3153
  2. item 3020 item 3116 item 3151 item 3003 item 3135 item 3089
  3. item 3006 item 3153 item 3087 item 3074 item 3142 item 3031
  4. item 3020 item 3078 item 3146 item 3115 item 3022 item 3071

32 Comments

Kanye Nord1 votes

Damn Though sounds a bit cough EXTREMLY cough OP!

regonas2 votes

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Damn Though sounds a bit cough EXTREMLY cough OP!

Why?

Kanye Nord1 votes

Overall too strong and won't be balanced with the others. Kinda like Garen is now

regonas2 votes

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Overall too strong and won't be balanced with the others. Kinda like Garen is now

Well, Garen's passive true damage is op and ulty does a bit too much damage. What's so about this concept?

gr8artist1 votes

I like it, but I have some criticisms.

  1. It seems too lackluster. Recent champs have more interesting mechanics, more "flair" and "style"... this guy is more like older League champs, simple and straightforward. Which people have migrated away from in recent seasons.
  2. What prevents him from suffering from Sion syndrome, namely that there are two opposing methods of play and little correlation between them. He needs better or higher AP ratios, or something other than "magic AP damage on hit" to bring the "hybrid" concept more into play.
  3. What do wings have to do with his auto-attacks?
regonas2 votes

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I like it, but I have some criticisms.

  1. It seems too lackluster. Recent champs have more interesting mechanics, more "flair" and "style"... this guy is more like older League champs, simple and straightforward. Which people have migrated away from in recent seasons.
  2. What prevents him from suffering from Sion syndrome, namely that there are two opposing methods of play and little correlation between them. He needs better or higher AP ratios, or something other than "magic AP damage on hit" to bring the "hybrid" concept more into play.
  3. What do wings have to do with his auto-attacks?
  1. He isn't that straightforward. However, you are right, he is simple. My recent mechanically difficult champs got tone of downvotes, so i thought that simpler champ would get more love.
  2. To be fair he have 3 methods to be played: AD, AP and hybrid. Also, from level 6 he could do 155 (+75% of ability power) bonus damage in three basic attacks with Q+R passive combo. And then also he have his flame breath that could also do good damage. His gets benefit from AD, AP and attack speed, so any items with these stats would benefit him.
  3. Well instead of attacking enemies with his claws he would slap/slash his enemies with his wings (also explains bonus range).
AChanceOfReign1 votes

I did something like this a while back, let me link it to ya. But I accidentally deleted it ;-;

Darlantan121 votes

Recipe for brilliant champion: 1.Void --- yes 2.Dragon --- yes ...... !!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

regonas2 votes

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Recipe for brilliant champion: 1.Void --- yes 2.Dragon --- yes ...... !!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

It's more than that.

  1. Void
  2. Dragon
  3. Breathing out dark flames
  4. Can use his tail
  5. Can use his wings
  6. Can pounce the living hell out of your enemy
Lonely Flame1 votes

So this is the third Void champ you've suggested in the last few days, and each one has become less and less Void-like. This champ, both concept-wise and kit-wise, it completely unrelated to the Void.

Void champions hunger for something. They all have a thing that they pursue ruthlessly and mercilessly that ties into their kit. Cho'Gath has his passive and ult that relate to his hunger, Kog'Maw's Q and W abilities both relate to regurgitation and stomach acid (again, hunger) and so on.

His kit, as others have said, is very boring. He is EXTREMELY straight forward. His passive enhances his basic attacks, his Q enhances his basic attacks for a short period, his W is a targeted skill (not a skill shot), his E involves him standing there, his ult AGAIN enhances his basic attacks and is a variation of Shyvana's ult.

What purposes does this champion have? What role or niche are they filling?

regonas2 votes

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So this is the third Void champ you've suggested in the last few days, and each one has become less and less Void-like. This champ, both concept-wise and kit-wise, it completely unrelated to the Void.

~~ ~~ First of all, as his title say, he is void-touched, so he isn't from the void. He is more like Kassadin or Malzahar, who are from Runeterra, but got corrupted in one way or another by void powers.

Secondly:

  1. All Voidborn champions (except Vel'Koz) have an ability that enhances their basic attacks in some way, so does he.
  2. All champions that are Void-related stack something, so does he.

So, my friend, you are wrong and now should feel stupid for saying that.

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Void champions hunger for something. They all have a thing that they pursue ruthlessly and mercilessly that ties into their kit. Cho'Gath has his passive and ult that relate to his hunger, Kog'Maw's Q and W abilities both relate to regurgitation and stomach acid (again, hunger) and so on.

~~ ~~ When did pouncing at your pray stopped being related by devouring something? Also, he isn't from the void. He is FREAKING VOID-TOUCHED.

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What purposes does this champion have? What role or niche are they filling?

~~ ~~ Well, if it is too difficult to figure out, then i will say:

  1. Mid-liner who would excel in fighting low-range squishy champions
  2. Top-liner who excels in fighting low-range enemies
  3. Jungler who excels in ganking enemies without mobility

He is quick to burst hybrid assassin who can easily engage with his R and put his enemy into right position with his W. His combos his basic attacks with his ability to get maximum damage in the shortest amount time possible.

Lonely Flame

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First of all, as his title say, he is void-touched, so he isn't from the void. He is more like Kassadin or Malzahar, who are from Runeterra, but got corrupted in one way or another by void powers.

...So a Dragon-type creature is more inclined to act like a human than the monsters that exist in the Void? What makes him Void-like then? Nothing about his kit links him to the Void in any way, so what makes him 'Void-touched' other than the fact he's a purple robot dragon?

Secondly:

  1. All Voidborn champions (except Vel'Koz) have an ability that enhances their basic attacks in some way, so does he.
  2. All champions that are Void-related stack something, so does he.

So, my friend, you are wrong and now should feel stupid for saying that.

No not in the slightest. The issue wasn't that he enhanced his basic attacks. The issue was 3 parts of his kit do this. That should have been clear by the fact that that I say how incredibly straight forward he is to play and bring that up. And yes, you're absolutely right all Void-champs stack something. Your champ doesn't, so by your own reasoning that you stated, he's not a Void champ in that regard.

When did pouncing at your pray stopped being related by devouring something? Also, he isn't from the void. He is FREAKING VOID-TOUCHED.

That's the best you could come up with? Let's forget that he's 'Void-touched' because at this point he isn't, the best you could come up with, for an ULT, was that it jumps as someone and stuns them for a short period? Sure, Shyvana does that, because she's transforming from a human into a dragon, and then she has use of a different kit.

Well, if it is too difficult to figure out, then i will say:

  1. Mid-liner who would excel in fighting low-range squishy champions
  2. Top-liner who excels in fighting low-range enemies
  3. Jungler who excels in ganking enemies without mobility

He is quick to burst hybrid assassin who can easily engage with his R and put his enemy into right position with his W. His combos his basic attacks with his ability to get maximum damage in the shortest amount time possible.

That's nothing special. This guy is more like a bizarrely designed ADC than an assassin, and there are champs in the game who already do what this guy does and better (Vayne and Twitch come to mind).

This guy doesn't do anything. He's not special or unique. It's bland. It's boring.

regonas1 votes

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...So a Dragon-type creature is more inclined to act like a human than the monsters that exist in the Void? What makes him Void-like then? Nothing about his kit links him to the Void in any way, so what makes him 'Void-touched' other than the fact he's a purple robot dragon?

~~ ~~ Dark flames, aggressive kit, use of dark energy. Rings any bells?

No not in the slightest. The issue wasn't that he enhanced his basic attacks. The issue was 3 parts of his kit do this. That should have been clear by the fact that that I say how incredibly straight forward he is to play and bring that up. And yes, you're absolutely right all Void-champs stack something. Your champ doesn't, so by your own reasoning that you stated, he's not a Void champ in that regard.

~~ ~~ False once again. His Q give stacks of enhanced basic attack. His R passive have stacks. At this point i will assume that you haven't read his kit and that you don't know what are you talking about.

That's nothing special. This guy is more like a bizarrely designed ADC than an assassin, and there are champs in the game who already do what this guy does and better (Vayne and Twitch come to mind).

~~ ~~ Well, because you haven't read his kit and because you don't know how he would played, then maybe picking Twitch would make a sense to you, even when he is nothing like Twitch. ADC have range, builds lots of damage and attack enemies from far away. Because you don't know his kit, i can't explain why he is a melee champ and nothing like ADC.

This guy doesn't do anything. He's not special or unique. It's bland. It's boring.

Nah mate, you are bland and boring. I suggest that you read his kit like 5 times before you comment again.

Lonely Flame1 votes

{quoted} Dark flames, aggressive kit, use of dark energy. Rings any bells?

Oh I'm sorry. The flames are 'dark' instead of normal coloured. Clearly Void. Where exactly is this mentioned by the way? I would expect a non-Void-touched dragon to have an aggressive kit, and what 'use of dark energies'? His passive? His Q uses his wings: a normal dragon could do this. His W hits someone with his tail: a normal dragon could do this. His E breaths fire: a normal dragon could do this. (just because it's black doesn't make it different) His R is him jumping on someone: a normal dragon could do this. So please, really clarify for me now, what exactly makes this dragon 'Void-touched'

False once again. His Q give stacks of enhanced basic attack. His R passive have stacks. At this point i will assume that you haven't read his kit and that you don't know what are you talking about.

...Do you know what a stack is? You've described buffs. A stack is something an effect which can multiply itself several times. Look at Rek'Sai: Rek'Sai's Q 'Queen's Wrath' doesn't give her 'stacks' on her basic attacks, it just buffs her next 3 basic attacks. Her E on the other hand 'Tunnel' is something that 'stacks', because multiple ones of them can be active at the same time.

Well, because you haven't read his kit and because you don't know how he would played, then maybe picking Twitch would make a sense to you, even when he is nothing like Twitch. ADC have range, builds lots of damage and attack enemies from far away. Because you don't know his kit, i can't explain why he is a melee champ and nothing like ADC.

Nah mate, you are bland and boring. I suggest that you read his kit like 5 times before you comment again.

Where do you mention him being melee? That's not me not knowing his kit, that's you not explaining it in the first place, then trying to insult me for critiquing you idea. I didn't call his abilities shit and to kill yourself. I gave you a genuine review of your submitted champion. I broke down your idea on a level by level basis for you and explained issues I had with it, and you got upset.

regonas2 votes

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Freaking Attack range: 180, what does that mean, genius?

Fire and brimstone (or, alternatively, brimstone and fire, translated from the Hebrew גפרית ואש) is an idiomatic expression of signs of God's wrath in the Hebrew Bible (Old Testament) and the New Testament. In the Bible, they often appear in reference to the fate of the unfaithful. "Brimstone", the archaic name for sulfur, evokes the acrid odor of volcanic activity. The term is also used, sometimes pejoratively, to describe a style of Christian preaching that uses vivid descriptions of judgment and eternal damnation to encourage repentance. What does eternal damnation is similar to?

Because of your ignorance and no desire to even read whole concept i will no longer reply to your useless comments on champion you didn't even read about. Bye.

Lonely Flame1 votes

You're right, I genuinely didn't read that he was melee, the single like of text between the giant picture and his passive that you put a box around. I was wrong to think that was irrelevant.

Great copy and pasting of wikipedia there. What you've just described IS STILL FIRE. If you understood and read the paragraph you just pasted ""Brimstone", the archaic name for sulfur, evokes the acrid odor of volcanic activity." Brimstone is an old word for sulfur, which is the smell that commonly comes from volcanic activity, like say where a dragon would live (hey I seem to remember Shrek making a joke about this). But yes, answer me, what is eternal damnation similar to? Because it sure isn't the Void from everything we know about it. People aren't sent to the Void for punishment for what they did in life. You took a basic concept of things wanting to eat/consume stuff and tried to make it Biblical?

No worries man, thanks for completely ignoring my critiques and not answering my questions. Enjoy spamming the forums with your half ideas that will never be made.

Asayake 5150glow1 votes

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So this is the third Void champ you've suggested in the last few days, and each one has become less and less Void-like. This champ, both concept-wise and kit-wise, it completely unrelated to the Void.

Void champions hunger for something. They all have a thing that they pursue ruthlessly and mercilessly that ties into their kit. Cho'Gath has his passive and ult that relate to his hunger, Kog'Maw's Q and W abilities both relate to regurgitation and stomach acid (again, hunger) and so on.

His kit, as others have said, is very boring. He is EXTREMELY straight forward. His passive enhances his basic attacks, his Q enhances his basic attacks for a short period, his W is a targeted skill (not a skill shot), his E involves him standing there, his ult AGAIN enhances his basic attacks and is a variation of Shyvana's ult.

What purposes does this champion have? What role or niche are they filling?

Kha'Zix and Rek'Sai both don't hunger for anything. Well, I guess Kha' hunger's for change, but not Rek'sai.

MoloMan8D1 votes

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Kha'Zix and Rek'Sai both don't hunger for anything. Well, I guess Kha' hunger's for change, but not Rek'sai.

Umm... Don't know about Rek'Sai but Kha'Zix???? He hungers for evolution ( not the glorious one though )Viktor

Lonely Flame1 votes

Kha'Zix whole premise is that he wants to eat the strongest things possible so that he can make himself stronger through evolution. What are you talking about Rek'Sai doesn't hunger for anything? Her species literally controls a territory in Shurima because anything that walks through there gets eaten. She's just straight forward like Kog: They're just hungry. Rek'Sai's entire kit is related to her hunting style used to eat stuff. Her 'Tremor Sense' is used to detect and stalk prey. She has an ability that is called 'Ferocious Bite'.

therealdragon1 votes

I like this guy too. Riot should seriously start making a drag champ or take one of your ideas and then mold it to be one of their ideas.

regonas3 votes

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I like this guy too. Riot should seriously start making a drag champ or take one of your ideas and then mold it to be one of their ideas.

Yea, we need more dragons and more beautiful female tanks.

I would love to see one of my suggestion become a champ. Would buy it instantly. However, a lot of people are suggesting a lot of different cool champs. I am just one of them. Riot can make a champ based on any good idea there is.

MoloMan8D2 votes

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Yea, we need more dragons and more beautiful female tanks.

I would love to see one of my suggestion become a champ. Would buy it instantly. However, a lot of people are suggesting a lot of different cool champs. I am just one of them. Riot can make a champ based on any good idea there is.

Any female other than a halfdressed slim godess would be awesome. I mean League told us we would get a "strong" female a while back... We got Quinn.... And Leona is the only one with a full set of armour but she still has the slim hot body all females in League has. I want to see someone strong, fat, old or with some kind of scary voice. We got Rek'sai but she doesn't have a voice she just growls. Plz RITO get on with it!

Otherwise cool champ. IT'S AO SHIN!!! I'd love to see some kind of dragon or dinosaur from the void ( like a T-rex ) so this guy looks really cool. His kit sounds kind of dull though but that's just me I suppose, I always come up with the most crazy complex Champions. A tip: It would be cool if his Q made him flap his wings so that some kind of wind projectile was his basic attack. If he's void touched he shouldn't have a ' in his name. Kha'Zix Cho'Gath are voidborn but Malzahar and Kassadin are not.

Ps: Is the picture from GW2? Looks like the shatterer.

regonas2 votes

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Well, this champ is counter- concept to this one. Gola is simple to play and simple to master hybrid one-combo=kill champ. Zahro is easy to play and hard to master ap mage. I made them both.

About females: i made several suggestion on new female champions, but not many people like those. 1 2 3 4 5

His Q actually would make him to basic attack with his wings. Also, that ' in his name doesn't mean that he is from the void. He have because his name is Gola+Gola.

And i don't know on what based picture is. I asked my friend if he can draw or photoshop some cool dragon and he sent me this picture.

MoloMan8D1 votes

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Well, this champ is counter- concept to this one. Gola is simple to play and simple to master hybrid one-combo=kill champ. Zahro is easy to play and hard to master ap mage. I made them both.

About females: i made several suggestion on new female champions, but not many people like those. 1 2 3 4 5

His Q actually would make him to basic attack with his wings. Also, that ' in his name doesn't mean that he is from the void. He have because his name is Gola+Gola.

And i don't know on what based picture is. I asked my friend if he can draw or photoshop some cool dragon and he sent me this picture.

Sry dude I looked it up https://wiki.guildwars2.com/wiki/File:Dragon_03_concept_art_(The_Shatterer).jpg Looks like your friend was sleepy that day ( just learn to draw yourself man, you shouldn't trust friends! )

regonas2 votes

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Sry dude I looked it up https://wiki.guildwars2.com/wiki/File:Dragon_03_concept_art_(The_Shatterer).jpg Looks like your friend was sleepy that day ( just learn to draw yourself man, you shouldn't trust friends! )

I suck at drawing. Couldn't draw something decent if my life depended on it. Also, that friend is media designer and i know he can make really great picks. Looks like this time he just sent a picture from internet.

Well, i don't think that origin of the picture should effect whole concept that much.

MoloMan8D1 votes

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I suck at drawing. Couldn't draw something decent if my life depended on it. Also, that friend is media designer and i know he can make really great picks. Looks like this time he just sent a picture from internet.

Well, i don't think that origin of the picture should effect whole concept that much.

Ofc not! It was just funny how you said that your friend made it. Also everybody can draw. It doesn't have to be a good drawing, I just hate it when somebody adds a picture to their Champ / Skin concept and it's not even theirs. I made a pic to Golbert the helping hand. It's not good but atleast I'm showing my design of him to people, It's a great way of getting people to appreciate the hard work you put into the concept.

Køí1 votes

I'm pretty sure there are a lot of artists on this board who'd take your idea and draw it out. Then you could both post it and credit eachother or something. That is if the artist isn't an ass xD

regonas2 votes

{quoted} I want to see someone strong, fat, old or with some kind of scary voice.

Something like she: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/BupOwI2f-champion-concept-nazmuna-other-kind-of-female-champion-mechanically-difficult-to-master

MoloMan8D1 votes

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Something like she: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/BupOwI2f-champion-concept-nazmuna-other-kind-of-female-champion-mechanically-difficult-to-master

Im talking about someone that you can see physically that they're different. Nazmuna's just Nami but scary. Zarya from Overwatch or Ball & Chain from Orcs must die unchained are champions I'd like to see in League. What's so scary about seeing a female with some weight or muscles?

regonas2 votes

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Im talking about someone that you can see physically that they're different. Nazmuna's just Nami but scary. Zarya from Overwatch or Ball & Chain from Orcs must die unchained are champions I'd like to see in League. What's so scary about seeing a female with some weight or muscles?

There is nothing wrong about that.

P.S. this one isn't like Nami. She is worm user and she should live in/near swamps.

Asayake 5150glow1 votes

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Yea, we need more dragons and more beautiful female tanks.

I would love to see one of my suggestion become a champ. Would buy it instantly. However, a lot of people are suggesting a lot of different cool champs. I am just one of them. Riot can make a champ based on any good idea there is.

Yes. WE NEED MORE DRAGONS. I thought of a bunch a long time ago... didn't even realize this forum was a thing. I need to get something done.

Køí1 votes

I also hope we get a couple more female Junglers, other than Elise there are very few. Most female champs are support or mages and it would be cool to have a Viking type chubby tank girl too

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