[November (M)CCC Entry] Atten, the Feral Soldier

Othello the Cat·11/2/2014, 7:13:30 AM·6 votes·1,009 views

ATTEN, THE FERAL SOLDIER Assassin/Fighter, Melee

STATS

Health: 440 (+97) 2186 @ 18 Health Regen: 6 (+0.85) 21.3 @ 18 Range: 125 (Melee) Attack Damage: 61 (+2.75) 110.5 @ 18 Attack Speed: 0.644 (+2.5%) 0.918 @ 18 Armor: 14 (+3) 68 @ 18 Magic Resist: 30 (+1.25) 52.5 @ 18 Movement Speed: 370

LORE

"Atten, you're sounding crazy," said the one with black fur, "You don't have any special powers, you're delusional."

"YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND. YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT POWER FLOWS THROUGH MY VEINS," I said.

"Just calm down, Atten. If we want to survive, we need to be a community," said the one with white fur, "We need to hunt together, defend eachother, but most importantly, we need to stay calm."

"I've heard voices," I said, "Calling to me, telling me that I was chosen. Do you not believe that means I have power?!"

"The only thing that you have, Atten, is a tendency to disturb the peace. You KILLED three of our own!" said the one with brown fur.

"They were... They were..."

"What, Atten? What were they? What reason could you possibly have-"

"...Delicious..."

The three stared at me for a while. They had fear in their eyes. Their hearts were beating. Blood was rushing to their veins. I could smell it. Victims taste much better when they're afraid...


I remember those Ursine. They did taste delicious. One of the best meals I've ever had. They had a lot of blood in them. And it was warm... So warm. It warmed my insides from the cold of the ice around me. It made me feel more alive than ever. I wish there were more of them, Ursine has been the best meal I've had yet.

I grow tired of walking. I need to sleep. There's a river nearby. I will choose that to be my home. It calls to me.

It calls to me?

The voice that calls to me was the voice that gave me strength...

I must go to the river. I must claim my power.

There is nothing here... No mystics, no runes, no power... Just a voice... Telling me to hunt... To kill...

A rabbit... A test...

I will do as you ask, river. I am your servant. I am the savage you asked for. I will kill what you ask until my fur is stained red, my teeth are dull and my claws are shards, and even still I will gnaw at my enemies; at YOUR enemies.

All I ask in return is that I eat what I have killed... For I am so hungry... Please, let me eat, and I will be yours forever.

I am your savage, your servant, your soldier. I fight for you.

ABILITIES

Passive: The Art of Savagery After casting a basic ability, its base damage is increased permanently by 0.5%

Q: No Remorse: Atten slashes a target, dealing 30/55/80/105/130 (+0.5% per times cast) (+40% Total AD) Physical damage (+ (+1 per unit killed with Q) True damage). If it kills a unit, the health cost is permanently reduced by 5 and the ability permanently deals 1 bonus True damage. Health Cost: 5% of current health (-5 health per unit killed with Q) Cooldown: 8 Range: 300 (Note: If the health cost would be below zero, then it does not heal him, it just costs nothing.)

W: Pound of Flesh: Atten's next basic attack in three seconds will gouge his target, dealing 15/25/35/45/55 (+0.5% per times cast) (+15% Total AD) bonus Physical damage and giving him 100% Lifesteal for that attack. Health Cost: 0 Cooldown: 9/8.5/8/7.5/7

E: Closing In: Atten hurls himself forward, ravaging any enemies he passes through, dealing 30/55/80/105/130 (+0.5% per times cast) (+30% Bonus AD) Physical damage. For every non-champion he damages, the ability's cooldown is reduced by 1 second. For every champion he damages, the ability's cooldown is reduced by 5/6/7/8/9 seconds (Can only reduce the ability's cooldown on 2 champions.) . Closing In is not affected by Cooldown Reduction, with the exception of Make or Break's passive. Health Cost: 30/40/50/60/70 Cooldown: 24 Range: 400

Ult: Make or Break: Passive: Upon reaching 20% health, all of Atten's ability cooldowns are immediately reset. This includes Make or Break's cooldown. Cooldown: 60/50/40

Active: Atten digs his claws into an enemy unit, slowing them by 80% for 3 seconds, dealing 80/170/260 (+50% Total AD) Physical damage immediately and 50/80/110 (+100% AP) Magic Damage over 3 seconds. If the targeted unit doesn't die, he immediately attacks again on the same unit, dealing the same damage. Health Cost: 10% of his current health Cooldown: 70/65/60 Range: 300

QUOTES

Upon Selection: "Their blood will warm my stomach..."

Upon Starting a Match: sniffs "New prey..." "I hunger for this..." "The slaughterhouse is open..."

Moving: "The River guides me..." "I can smell them..." "Take me to them." "Warm... Wet..." "I am the savage..." "I feel like someone... Is right behind me..." "The speed of an Ursine." "Flesh... I crave it..." "I can't contain myself for much longer..." "Too... Many... VOICES!" "I... am a monster..." "The pain... It's unbearable..." "My jaw aches from battle..." "Peaceful? Only cowards are peaceful..." "Where are my enemies? I want ENEMIES!"

Attacking: "Blood... Blood... BLOOD!" "The cowards! There!" "The River demands a sacrifice!" "The River has spoken!" "I'll roast you over a spit!" "Fear makes you taste better..." "No, surrender is not an option." "The savage hunts..." "GRAAAAAAGH!" "I can't fight... Not like this..." "Anything to subdue the pain..." "My fur is going to get soaked..." "Smells like cowardice..." "Pain... PAIN!" "The end is near... For both of us."

Using No Remorse: "Your life is mine!" "Painful, isn't it?" "Embrace this pain..." "For the River..." "I'm... Sorry..."

Using Pound of Flesh: "Delicious..." "Delectable..." "Yummy..." "I'll take my pay..."

Using Closing In: "Get back here!" "Jump!" "Leap!"

Proccing Make or Break's passive: "TIME TO RUN!" "MY BLOODY LUST CONSUMES!" "THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE!"

Using Make or Break: "Death... DEATH!" "Bleed out and DIE!" "What a fine meal you are!"

Joke: Atten pulls out a glass of wine from behind him (Don't ask where he puts it.) "Why don't I make you Dinner, hm?" "A savage can still have finer tastes..." "Hm... A bit too... RED..."

Taunt: Atten growls and gnashes his teeth "You'd be more useful on a plate!" "Take a look. My teeth are the last thing you'll see." "You look like a nice slab of meat to me..." "Mind if I carve you?"

Taunt towards Volibear: "I thought I killed all of you..." "Ursine is a rare, but delicious, cut of meat you know..." "You call yourself a leader... You're less than a cub!"

Taunt towards Leona/Diana: "Your petty gods are no match for me!" "I may not be a God, but am I a messiah..."

Taunt towards Aatrox: "Hm... Haven't had Darkin before..." "I wonder what you'll taste like..." "Witness true ferocity..."

Joke towards Maokai/Zyra: "I was always told that I needed to go vegetarian..."

CHALLENGES

Lore Challenge: Lore shows how devastating the Rune Wars were on the psyche of its survivors, particularly the psyche of Atten. Serpentine River Challenge: Abilities all involve him ripping and tearing enemies apart, which shows ferocity.

4 Comments

Othello the Cat11/3/2014, 6:03:29 PM1 votes

Bump

Nagirte11/9/2014, 7:41:03 PM1 votes

Checking in with contestants. Am I right to assume this champ is from the Serpentine River? If yes you satisfy the requirements.

Definitely needs some more information in the lore, but you know that.

General comments I'm making to all contestants, so don't take this as critique. These are things that you may already have considered, but if not you should keep in mind: Make sure the kit flows well together. Would it be fun to play the champion? Do all spells make sense for your character to have based on the theme? Do all spells/skills make sense for your character to have based on his/her role? Does your champion have both weaknesses and strengths? Make sure your spells are balanced when considered individually and within the whole concept.