[CHAMP CONCEPT] Kiura: Founder of the Spirit Hand V1.0

Frostydawg4344·11/3/2016, 6:41:59 PM·6 votes·560 views

Note: I will not put too many details in V1.0 of champions anymore such as full lore, stats, sayings/taunts/interactions, etc so, I can just get the concept out there quickly.

This is the first version of a champion concept I created. I thought up this Champion after realizing that characters with weapons and magic have been done a lot but not so much for Martial arts/Karate Champs. Anyway, pleases tell me what you think about this concept; I’d really appreciate it!

ToC

1.) LORE 2.) IN-GAME APPEARANCE 3.) STATS, ABILITIES AND, WHATNOT

1.) LORE Kiura will be a young monk girl who created her own unique fighting style by studying some animals and integrating her naturally overflowing spirit energy.

Kiura = Ki + Aura (Like how Lee Sin = Listen)

2.) IN-GAME APPEARANCE She’s young so her face is smooth looking. She’s been training her body since she was just a toddler so, her body is toned. She has short black hair. She wears robe/Monk-like clothing

Players would be able to see which tiers she’s in by having aura surrounding her; tier 1 aura would be faint and calm, tier 2’s aura would be more visible and flowing more; an extra visual layer would be added and, tier 3 would be completely visible and fully flowing; another visual layer would be added.

When she activates “Soul Ascension” her aura would be completely wild, another visual layer would be added (like seeing the air pressure from her aura on the ground), her eyes and hair would glow white and, she’d slightly float off the ground.

3.) STATS, ABILITIES AND, WHATNOT

Role: Fighter/Assassin

Mechanic: Spirit As Kiura fights, she gains spirit. Her moves need spirit to activate. She keeps the spirit that she gained until she expends them on abilities.

Passive: Rising Spirit

Kiura gets strong as her spirit increases during battle. she has three tiers of spirit energy that gives her a buff every time she reaches them. Using an ability while in a tier affects the abilities a bit.

Tier 1 threshold: beginning of the bar

Tier 2 threshold: middle of the bar

Tier 3 threshold: end of the bar/ full bar (only one ability at a time would be able to use Tier 3)

Q: Hummingbird Barrage

Kiura channels the Hummingbird’s speed so, she can unleash an unyielding assault on her opponents. She deals 5%/10%/15%/20%/25% more physical damage. Ability lasts for 5 seconds (autos don't gain spirit when activated)

Tier 1: gains 10% movement speed, slows enemies by 10% and, increases attack speed by 10% Tier 2: gains 15% movement speed, slows enemies by 15%, increases attack speed by 15% and, autos gain a bit of distance as her punches start going so fast that the air from them becomes just as dangerous. Tier 3: gains 20% movement speed, slows enemies by 20%, increases attack speed by 20% and, autos gain more distance.

W: Dragon Flight (You’re average gap closer/escape)

Kiura channels the dragon and flies at a targeted direction at great speeds. Kiura can fly through some walls with dragon flight.

Tier 1: flies a distance

Tier 2: distance increases

Tier 3: distance increases more

E: Elephant Blow

(Would work how Fiora’s Riposte works where it loads up before damaging; players would be able to dodge if they’re quick enough.)

As she harnesses the strength of an Elephant, Kiura slams her fist into her opponent's gut dealing 80/100/120/140/160 damage

Tier 1: Stuns enemy for 0.5 seconds.

Tier 2: Stuns for 1 second; force from punch creates a blast of air that damages anything behind opponent.

Tier 3: stuns for 2 seconds; damages anyone behind and stuns them for 1 second

R: Soul Ascension Cost: Full Spirit Bar

Ailing fei temporarily goes beyond her spirit’s limit; making her ascend to a greater being for a short duration. Champion stats increase and abilities all have tier 3 for the duration of the ult.

Because Kiura hasn’t mastered her unique fighting style yet and her body hasn’t been trained enough to handle the demanding transformation, it backlashes on her after ult ends. Spirit bar locks up, damage is dealt to herself and, she becomes slowed for a percentage for a couple of seconds.

2 Comments

Khorius11/3/2016, 7:36:57 PM1 votes

It kind of seems like you're trying to remake Udyr here. Not a bad concept, but a lot of these abilities seem like they're in place already in Udyr's kit. The E is similar to Lee Sin's ultimate, in that it disables someone and the people directly behind them.

CrazyBear198711/4/2016, 9:48:08 AM1 votes

WOW i'm actually surprised at how close your Passive and Ult work like my character XD http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/qjOI0MfM-champion-concept-lo-si-fu-the-god-fist

i actually like your "spirit" ideas more ;) but needs more calrift, like how fast does it charge? decay in and out of combat? increase from kills? minion and champions. Read mine and see it you get the idea.

Feel like her Q should be like Warwicks R, cause you already have your W to initiate, the movement speed is unessary and kind of cheating as she can use it to run instead of fight. Plus you already slow your attacking target. I also imagine the aniamtion like Patheons E, but with her fists instead. try it like this:

Hummingbird Barrage (Q): Kiura channels the Hummingbird’s speed so, she can unleash an unyielding assault on her opponent. She deals 5%/10%/15%/20%/25% more physical damage. Ability lasts for 3 seconds. (changed from 5, too long imo)

Tier 1: Kiura gains increased attack speed by 10% and Enemies hit are slowed by 10% Tier 2: Kiura gains increased attack speed by 15% and Enemies hit are slowed by 15%, her punches have increased range Tier 3: Kiura gains increased attack speed by 20% and Enemies hit are slowed by 20% her punches have greatly increased range (the idea is that enemies are able to still run, but if she uses tier 3 its harder to escape unless with dash or flash to the side, ) I just think this fits better with the "humming birds theme" and it's her arms/wings that are moving fast.

Her W sounds funny, she "flies" ? does she grow wings or something, how does it fit with her monk theme, are there dragons in the mountains? How about this:

Frog Leap(W): Kiura puts all her spirit into her legs, leaping toward a targeted direction at great speeds. (think Kung fu hustles bad guy) Kiura can leep over walls (like Zacs E, they show you were your going so your dont hit another wall etc.)

Tier 1: leap distance equal to a flash (425) or more? (500) Tier 2: Leap distance 1300 or morganna's binding) Tier 3: distance increases more (1700 jannas's howling gale max distance) (where do these number come from? http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Saarocker/Longest_Abilities'_Ranges_in_the_League)

Just some ideas, check out my concepts, it's easier on the eyes ;)

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