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[Champion Concept] Exiel, The Furious God - Kishin (mechanically special dream realm champion)

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Table of content:

  1. Shot lore
  2. Stats and kit
  3. Math for abilities
  4. Lore
  5. Quotes
  6. Other

#1 SHORT LORE

He is from the Dream Realm. Well, technically, he is a dream being, but not 100%. He was recreated in plane of history based on once existed creature. Original creature was believed to be able to kill and absorb gods to become almighty ultimate being. However, original creature was destroyed during First Rune War. Yet, someone found a way to recreate him in the Dream Realm. They don't even begin to understand what they have done. Ritual to create him was used in the Dream Realm to reforge Exiel from old fragments of him left around all realms of existence. He is nor ancient god, nor he is a dream creature. He is something between those two.

#2.1 STATS

HEALTH: 644 – 2105 HEALTH REGEN: 5,2 – 14,6 ATTACK DAMAGE: 65 – 125 ATTACK SPEED: 0,616 (+0% – 58%) ATTACK RANGE: 140 MANA: 285 – 995 MANA REGEN: 8,4 – 19,2 ARMOR: 32,0 – 88,7 MAGIC RES: 32,1 – 63,4 MOV. SPEED: 365

#2.2 KIT

Passive: Avenger Revenge: when an enemy champion deals damage to you, then begin to build up anger toward your enemies. 5 (+2 per level) (+10% of AD) (+15 per champion kill) physical damage is built every sec up to maximum 20 (+8 per level) (+40% of AD) (+60 per champion kill) bonus physical damage after 4 sec. Your next basic attack will use up your anger dealing stored physical damage to your target. This bonus damage can not be critical. If you do not attack any enemy within 7 sec, then all stored damage will be removed.

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Aura of Hate [q] Passive: add new resource bad called Hate. Grant 1 hate every 2 sec. Every time you kill an enemy get 1 hate. In addition, grant 1 hate whenever you are critically hit. Max hate: 20.

Active: consume all your hate and emit an aura dealing 20/25/30/35/40 (+10% of AD) (+2 per hate consumed) physical damage per sec to nearby enemies. In addition, if you use this ability at full hate, then taunt nearby enemies for 1,5 sec. Aura lasts for 5/6/7/8/9 sec. You can't use this ability while you are under effect of Godly Wrath. Cooldown: 18 sec Mana cost: 80 Range: 420

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Despicable Image [w] If used while under effect of Aura of Hate then: Create a stationary image of you. This image absorbs 20% of damage you take up to 400/600/800/1000/1200 total damage. Image lasts for 8 sec. Absorption range: 700

If used while under effect of Godly Wrath then: Create a stationary image of yourself. This image will deal 35/45/55/65/75 (+15% of AD) physical damage to nearby enemies every sec. Image lasts for 8 sec. Damage done by your image is treated as damage done by you. Range of AOE: 345

Cooldown: 14 sec Mana cost: 65 Range: 200 Image health: 1200

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Godly Wrath [e] Jump at your target dealing 75/110/145/180/215 (+65% of AD) physical damage to him/her, apply all on-hit effects and stun him/her for 1 sec. In addition, increase your attack speed by 15/20/25/30/35% and reduce all damage taken by 10% for 3,5 sec. You can't use this ability while under effect of Aura of Hate. Cooldown: 10 sec Mana cost: 50/55/60/65/70 Range: 520

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Unholy Ascension [r] Rank 1: using your Despicable Image ability will cause you to enter stealth for 1,5 sec and increase your movement speed by 20% for 3 sec.

Rank 2: remove using restrictions from Aura of Hate and Godly Wrath, and your Despicable Image now will summon both images if you are affected by both abilities.

Rank 3: unlock Obliterate ability.

Obliterate: target an direction and begin to gather energy. After 1,5 sec release huge laser--like energy beam dealing 160 (+20% of AD) magic damage every 0,2 sec to all enemies in the laser beam. You continue to release this beam of energy for up to 2 sec or until you cancel it by reactivating this ability. Using this ability will alert all champions in the map (enemies and allies will see the path of this ability when you start to gather energy). Cooldown: 140 sec Mana cost: 150 Range: global Width: 200

#3 MATH FOR ABILITIES

For calculations i will use this build: item 3158 item 3074 item 3022 item 3156 item 3068 item 3812 Masteries: link Runes: link

Health: 3385 Attack damage: 399 Armor: 143 Magic resist: 141

Passive min damage (with no kills): 81 Passive max damage (with 10 kills): 924 Q min damage per sec: 80 (that is 720 damage per 9 sec) Q max damage per sec: 120 (that is 1080 damage per 9 sec) W damage per sec: 135 (that is 1080 damage per 8 sec) E damage: 474 R damage per 0,2 sec: 240 (that is 2400 damage per 2 sec) Deathfire Tough damage: 1233

Maximum estimated damage in 1v1 fight: 7785 physical damage Maximum estimate burst damage in 1v1 fight (over 1 sec or less): 1603 physical damage

#4 LORE

Group of powerful underground magicians found a way to enter and exit the Dream Realm. They visited all planes of the Dream Realm trying to find ancient knowledge of ways to manipulate this realm. Several of them died in plane of nightmare and plane of progress, but they continued to search. What they found was way different than what they expected to find. In the plane of history they found recreated mausoleum for ancient god. Bizarre textures, creepy statues and many more things were placed there. However, most important finding was a book where was written how to recreate this god in the dream realm. In the book was written detailed ritual how to bring this god back to life and that he will grant wishes to everyone in his presence. Author of book was unknown, but four letters were branded on the cover: SGTE. They done the ritual and recreated this god, but to their surprise, book lied. They made something which wasn't god, but the opposite of them who was called Kishin or in modern language -- The Furious God. Being made to kill and devour other gods if they misbehave. This being mercilessly killed magicians, torn a hole between realms and entered Runeterra. Nevertheless, after exiting the dream realm he was weakened by some unknown force. He doesn't know who done that, but he got so weakened that he almost disappeared again. His body got disfigured, especially his face, so Exiel made an iron mast to hide his face. His wings morphed into something horrific. To his surprise, Exiel started to regain his powers from rage and anger of others absorbing it from them and become stronger.

-- Hello there, nasty little mortals. My name is Exiel. Well, to say the truth, this is a new name i gave myself. I forgot my previous name. Funny thing, i think i was dead or... banished from existence. I don't remember much, just that one part of me still lives in the underworld, i think. -- Yet, no matter how much time have passed, it seems i still have enemies around here, because just after being broth to life i was attacked. I am not sure who could or would do that, but that actually hurt me. Maybe i am not like i used to be. To be truthful, i don't even remember how i was used to be. Everything in blur right now. Yet, i know i am myself. I can't be anyone else.

Talking to injured soldier who tried to fight him: -- You know, mortals always looked strange to me. You are born, you breed, you kill and eventually you get old and die. Why? Isn't that pointless? No one will remember you after you die. Your legacy is your children, but even they will day someday. All you do with your time is pointless. You have so limited life time and you spend it how? Wars, killing, stealing and even more wars. You compete who are better, you fight for land and for resources. Don't get me wrong, your aggression keeps me alive right now, but doesn't all the look pointless? Look, you waged war, got hurt and now you will die. But for what? For nothing. You think you done that for a higher purpose, for glory of your rulers or for safety for your people, but that is a lie. You done these things because you want to, that is in your blood. If you don''t kill them, then they will kill you, yes? That is rules of you, mortals, or i am wrong? No, i can't be wrong. Even in thousands generations you will not change. Don't get me wrong, i am very grateful for that, for a chance to regain my strength. That is just bad to you, being food for me until the end of time.

-- I hate everyone. I mean it. Gods, mortals, celestials, plants and everything. They are just so pointless. With no purpose, with no desire to do something more. I don't remember anything meaningful about this world. Nothing at all. And with my hate my powers grows.

Sitting in the battle field and surrounded with corpses: -- What i disgusting sight. Disgusting, yet, i feel so good around there. Not only because i am better than them, but because my powers return with their aggression. I may get used to this -- creating wars, seeing mortals kill each others, feeding on their anger. Everything moves in circles for mortals, i am just unmovable axis for them. I will not die, i will not stop and one day i will become almighty once again. He continues to talk with himself while he build a pyramid out of corpses: -- A person like me needs i way to pass time. My strength is returning so slowly, but what could i do. I don't know who took me powers and weakened me. I don't even remember how i died first time. All i can do right now is to pass time and get stronger, feed on anger and wrath of these mortals. I think i begin to remember my other six brother, but none of them could weaken me so much even if they wanted to. I guess they all are also dead. How much time have passed that there is no one like me left? Or maybe... Mortals have broth me back to life, so maybe mortals done something... These little worms got powerful, maybe too powerful.I don't know limit of their power, but if they are able to bring me back, then maybe they brought back somebody else or created somebody like one of my kind. I have... I have to know what they have done. Mortals should know these things, shouldn't do these things. Since when they can bring back gods from death? Somebody must be guiding them. I will find who.

#5 QUOTES

Upon Selection -- I am the answer.

Movement -- I move in mysterious ways. -- I will never reject them, they are my food after all. -- I will move to them and i will more through them. -- Yes, i feel anger and hate that way. -- Right, left, right, left, now both together.

Attacking -- Give me your face. -- I am taking your face. -- I will crack your skull. -- Puny bones of the mortals shatters. -- I will rip out your spine. -- I will tear you a part like a nesting doll. -- Your body is paint and i am the brush. -- Nasty little mortals. Die.

Joke -- Aggressive? Who, me? No, i am just passionate. -- No, i don't have anger management issues. -- Yes, i do love the sound of my voice. -- Who is this Morgan you say my voice sounds like?

Taunt -- You are mortal. I could just wait until you die, but i rather destroy you here and now. -- You mortals say: you are what you eat. Yet, i do not feel weak or pathetic like me food. -- I could kill you a thousand ways before you could even scream. -- There is no point for me to learn your name. You will die like the rest of your kind.

Using Q: -- Bath in my hatred.

Using W: -- Take form.

Using e: -- Fall. -- Die. -- Begone.

Using R: -- Into dusts. -- Ultimate attack. -- World burns.

#6 OTHER

How to play him Yea, that might be hard. Early, he is very limited, you could say even weak (like in his lore). You can use Q and E together of one after another. W can only reduce damage taken or deal damage. First two ranks of R do not give bonus ability, but augment his other abilities. He is slow starter. I mean really really slow. Slower than Nasus. However, he does get better while game progresses. As game goes one his fight style changes:

  1. Getting early ganks from your jungler or roaming yourself and getting kills will increase your damage from passive. At first it might not look like much, but every single kill with this champion counts. Every single of them. KS your team mates if you have to, but you will need kills more than Fiora needs nerfs.
  2. Early use of W means either not bad AOE damage or pretty average damage reduction. However, from mid to late game this will start to do both and even more. At 18 level W will give bonus movement speed, give short stealth, reduce damage taken and deal AOE damage. It might be a little too much for one ability, but remember how it starts. This champion is very slow to get good, even slower than Nasus.
  3. Q and E combo is early forbidden. However, after 2nd rank in R you will be able to use them both. At this point you should become bueling people and destroy them. Before this you would have to play very safe, farm as much as you can and avoid fighting other, but after this point just snowball them harder than Fizz. Just do it. Don't let your dreams be dreams.
  4. Yes, this champ is definitely late game champion. He is weak and fragile early on. If you sure that game will take more than 30 min to end, then take him. He becomes fun only after 3rd rank on R when you can damage enemies from other side of the map, but at this point game might be already over. Decide if you want to invest.
  5. R is something i made based on Yu-gi-oh. Sue me. Big scary beam dealing damage to everything in it, but you gain only during last minutes of the game, i just like tension of it. Yes, it deals lots and lots of damage to enemies who stand in it, but: enemies have 1,5 sec to move to completely avoid it and another 2 sec to move out of it. If they can't do that over 3,5 sec, then they deserve to burn.

His strengths: -- as game goes on he becomes harder and harder to kill -- decent amount of CC -- very good late game -- have engage and disengage tools (jump and stealth) -- 3rd rank R have global range, so you can snipe enemies from other side of the map -- can build full damage and still be pretty tanky -- KSing awards you big time -- he unique and fun kit to play with or against -- have good wave clear and can push lanes very fast -- good against pokeing mid-range champions

His weaknesses: -- terrible early game -- hugely relief on help of other early game -- passive only does good damage when you take damage from an enemy champion, wait for 4 sec and then attack -- mobile enemies can move out of your AOE damage dealing abilities easily -- pretty bad mid game unless got many champion kills -- don't have any sustain -- if he goes all-in, he can't escape or retreat without Flash -- he can be easily killed with surprise attack, because he is tanky only while using his abilities -- enemies can easily avoid your 3rd rank R -- he is so ugly he have to wear mask

P.S. I think i will add this concept to this month CCOS, so you, the readers, will have more time to review it for CCOS bonus.

18 Comments

Traxicus1 votes

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Traxicus1 votes

Also, as a friendly suggestion from someone who likes to post here a lot, with this board it's better if you can find a way to be more brief. The more you include on your post, the harder it can be to appreciate the concept, even if the ideas are really good. Ability math, strengths and weaknesses, playstyle advice, and most of the quotes (some key lines are fine) aren't crucial to understanding your concept, and you're likely to get more discussion without them.

That said, the fact that you took the time to do all that is commendable. I'm impressed :)

regonas2 votes

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Thanks for putting time into reading it. I will try to answer to your comments/questions:

  1. Yes and no. He have mana and Hate. His passive is stacking effect and not a resource. Mana is used on all his abilities, but Hate is only use for Q. That is because he feeds on hate, absorbs it and gets stronger, but Q, as name suggest, allows him to infuse others with his hate. Look at that this way: when he absorbs more hate than he needs (Hate resource), he can send it out like an aura, and if enought hate is released, then enemies become berserk (so, taunt effect).

  2. While it do may look similar, it have several differences: damage dealing or/and damage absorbing part, it have range and you can summon close in targeted location, it lasts longer, with 2nd R rank it will summon 2 copies. I prefer not to change abilities, because i build lore around them (there is way much more in the notes, i may add it later) and because doing balance for his kit took time.

  3. Hate recourse is only for Q ability, so i rather not.

  4. I rather not, too.

  5. We have several global or nearly global ulties who are hard to dodge (relatively) and most of them are used to finish fleeing enemies or get quick combat advantage. His ulty is a bit different. Ok, a lot different. His main uses would be limit movement of enemies, split push, steal objectives or scare enemies away. I will give examples: A) Enemies are doing dragon or baron and you have ward there. Wait a bit and then "surprise" them with laser beam. They will have two options: run away and leave the objective or risk to get killed. B) Enemies with huge wave are approaching your turret. Aim R at them and clear that minion wave, save a turret and even chase enemy away. C) You are doing something a see enemy doing funny business in your base. Boom, R. D) Enemies are running from your team into certain direction. Boom, their path is blocked.

  6. I am not sure about this one. Riot is currently changing lore and world of Runeterra right now. Map will probably gonna change, summoners were removed and much more. I have no idea how they will change lore, so i can't confirm or deny that he fits the current lore (because we don't have stable lore right now). I could update his lore a lot more of who was those magician who reforged him and why they done that (well why they were doing it was in a lore, but that was a short version), what ritual was used, what other factions might think about this new presence and much more. But, as you said, people here like shorter versions, so i am not sure if that is necessary.

Traxicus2 votes

...Why would you post to the forums if you are going to be entirely unreceptive to suggestions? I already understood all of the things you explained. What a waste of time.

regonas2 votes

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...Why would you post to the forums if you are going to be entirely unreceptive to suggestions? I already understood all of the things you explained. What a waste of time.

You suggest to redesign abilities, and i rather not. I don't see the need to do that only because W is little bit similar to Wukong's ability. I am not saying that your suggestion were bad, but i am saying that i don't see improvements in them.

Traxicus2 votes

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You can choose to ignore my feedback but don't pretend like there isn't potential to improve your concept.

regonas2 votes

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Why are you getting offended? I am not obliged to follow your suggestions and you are not obliged to follow mine.

Also:

  1. Every steal skill is counter with pink ward. Nothing surprising there.

  2. And W does make people to make a meaningful choice. Early game this champ can summon only 1 copy and get only 1 effect: damage or defense. Also, it may be boring to you, but it is not boring to me. You can put your opinion before anyone else, because your opinion is better than others.

  3. There is tons of similar spells. There is targetable stuns, stealth skills, jumps and other stuff, but that doesn't mean that all abilities have to be extremely different. Taric have targetable stun, would you like to comment on that, too?

I am not ignoring your feedback. I am just choosing not to follow your suggestions, because i do not think they fit the champion. Don't get so offended. You people in USA are so sensitive.

Traxicus1 votes

I'm not offended at all. I could say you Europeans are so stubborn, but I'm not rude either.

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regonas2 votes

{quoted}

I'm not offended at all. I could say you Europeans are so stubborn, but I'm not rude either.

You're ignoring valid points and choosing what to respond to based on what you like. Of course stealth is countered by pink wards. What about how similar it really is to Wukong's ability? What about how, if you choose damage, all they have to do is walk out of a tiny area and then it does nothing for 8 seconds? Couldn't it be more interesting?

~~ ~~ So does walking out of their AOE skills: Anivia Fiddlesticks Gangplank Morgana Nunu Pantheon Singed Viktor. Walking out of AOE ability is always a counter for it. Do you have problem with counterable abilities?

I'd love to comment on Taric's stun. Even on an outdated kit it's well-designed. Moderately long cooldown, low damage, it's on a slow, easy to read missile that can be blocked by wind wall / braum, and the fact that he has no crowd control anywhere else makes it perfectly reasonable. Unfortunately, Exiel also has an AoE taunt that makes the potential for his cc-chain to be oppressive.

~~ ~~ A lot of champions have CC chains. Some have a single CC skill, like Taric, but have different tools like heals, like Taric, walls, like Braum and Yasuo, or other. This champ have CC on Q (as you said "perfectly reasonable", because it is on high CD, takes time to build hate and so on) and gap closer with CC on E. He doesn't have walls, heals, spell shields, attack negates or anything like that. As i said, he is blanced around his current kit and i see no need to break that balance.

Traxicus1 votes

If you're 100% convinced he's balanced, I'll ask again: Why'd you post here? What was the point of submitting this before the CCOS? To show off? To practice arguing?

Anytime I post anything here it's because I WANT feedback. Figured that's why everybody posts here. Guess I'm wrong.

regonas2 votes

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If you're 100% convinced he's balanced, I'll ask again: Why'd you post here? What was the point of submitting this before the CCOS? To show off? To practice arguing?

For people to read, of course. They may like it, they might don't. They may be inspired to do something similar or something opposite. Maybe rioters will use this, maybe they won't. I post because i done something creative and i want to share it. CCOS takes concepts posted this month, so i posted it this month.

P.S. if you see a painting, do you also go to argue with the painter that it is a little bit similar to some other paintings and that he needs to redone it? If you see a sculpture of a person, do you argue that sculptor can't make it, because you think it is boring?

Traxicus1 votes

That painting comment is so completely irrelevant. Art galleries don't have a big UNIVERSAL RULES link that warns against non-constructive posts.

Put some sort of disclaimer on it so other people don't make the same mistake I did and spend any time thinking about giving you feedback.

regonas2 votes

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That painting comment is so completely irrelevant. Art galleries don't have a big UNIVERSAL RULES link that warns against non-constructive posts.

Put some sort of disclaimer on it so other people don't make the same mistake I did and spend any time thinking about giving you feedback.

And what rules did i broke? P.S. art galleries do have many rules, for example: nobody will redo a painting if you don't like it.

Ok, here is a disclaimer: i will not redo my champion concept if you do not like it. It is done by me and i decide what will be in it.

Lonely Flame3 votes

Dude, don't bother. I've had this same discussion with him a few times, and so have other people. He spams the forums with 'concepts' and will refuse to budge on anything. He ignores any valid points made against him and insults you when you runs out of excuses. Just report him and move on like I do.

regonas2 votes

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K, you are reported.

Lonely Flame3 votes

Haven't done anything worth reporting :) You don't scare me.

regonas2 votes

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Haven't done anything worth reporting :) You don't scare me.

As do i, however you throwing empty threats, so do i.

Traxicus1 votes

Yep. I've got better things to do than waste time arguing with stubborn people over half-baked ideas. If you've got any concepts that you've posted, I'd be happy to give em feedback. Here are some of mine in case you want to do the same. http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/6V9FITMg-champion-concept-vern-the-wild-child http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/IKqRTErB-champion-concept-delver-the-scrapyard-scourge http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/WAirjt3k-champion-jovah-the-keeper-of-the-forest

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