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Champion: Profitis, the Wise

Mister Modesty·1/4/2018, 12:20:03 PM·3 votes·307 views

Profitis (pro - fye - tiss)

Origin: Shuriman; Ascendant Image: (like the Goddess Ma'at) A human female with extravagantly colored wings; wearing many bracelets and necklaces. She wields a magical scepter/rod. Style: Magic Specialty: Sustained combat

Basic Lore Concept: An ancient Ascendant of Shurima, Profitis the Wise awakes from thousands of years of deep meditation. Profitis played a major role in the education of Nasus, and of all Shurimans. When Nasus built his great library, Profitis retired into meditation knowing the minds of Shurima to be in good hands. The events that followed remain unknown to the Wise Ascendant, and now Profitis seeks to educate the world once again; only this time by participating in the League of Legends.

Abilities:

  • Passive: Articulate: Profitis gains Magic Penetration based on her bonus Ability Power.

  • Q: Analyze: passive: If Analyze is available to cast, Profitis gains a temporary burst of Movement Speed whenever a nearby enemy's abilities come off Cooldown. active: Profitis leaps back a short distance and channels the span of her vision, marking all enemy units covered by the scan for a short time. If Profitis damages an enemy marked this way, she deals bonus true damage to the target. Analyze can be reactivated during the channel to cast the ability early.

  • W: Admonish: Toggle: Profitis raises her scepter and magically reduces the damage from all sources while Admonish is active, costing mana each time damage is mitigated this way. Additionally, every time Profitis mitigates damage she gains a charge. Toggle: Deactivating Admonish consumes all charges and unleashes a powerful blast of light in an AOE around Profitis, dealing bonus damage based on the charges consumed and placing the ability on cooldown.

  • E: Arbitrate: Profitis heals target Champion. Profitis can target an Enemy Champion to heal herself and the enemy, doing so will allow the ability to be cast at no mana cost.

  • Ultimate: Castigate: Profitis summons a swirl of golden flames around target Enemy Champion, snaring them and dealing minor magic damage for the duration. When the golden flames subside, the target is silenced for a short time.

"Be the judge of your own actions, or I shall be." - Profitis, the Wise

1 Comments

JarodDempsey1/4/2018, 10:41:15 PM1 votes

P: snowball passive would require fine tuning

q: velkoz in a nutshell lol, mobility+utility hmm k interesting

w: is she able to attack while channeling this? can she move while channeling? does the channel break on stun/knock/suppress/silence? I think it might be better to instead activate for a set mana cost and a set maximum duration without a channel but give her the ability to recast it to end it early, this would allow her to do other things in the mean time. also, is this aoe or only for damage incoming to her?

e: interesting concept, id like to see whether this could be balanced

r: remind me of ryze root but with silence and dot instead of single instance damage. I assume this would have larger range than ryze root as well which would give her the ability to catch.

overall i like her

if you turn the q bonus damage into magic instead of true if attacked by allied champions (can still be true for her) and allow her to do other actions while w channel is active while providing the damage reduction have a reduced effectiveness in an aoe (still the same for her though) then she would make an amazing battle mage hybrid enchanter. Also im not a fan of the name, the wise part is fine but you might try making the first part more similar to the goddess you mentioned.