Lyria, Nightmare's Keeper

EibonEthos·10/10/2016, 2:48:11 AM·4 votes·1,414 views

Lyria, Nightmare's Keeper

Class: Mage, Support

Paired Concept: Sabriel

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Passive: Token Collector

Lyria collects tokens when minions or neutral creeps die near her. After collecting 10 they become a Nightmare, and it empowers Lyria's abilities. When assisting or killing an enemy champion Lyria gains a Nightmare. Can hold 3 Nightmares, and loses all of them on death. Nightmare won't be used or activated in Dreamscape.

Q: Fallen Carousel

Lyria summons a twisting metal carousel from the ground dealing physical damage to enemies. If she casts this again, or after 5 seconds it explodes slowing enemies and dealing magic damage. If cast in Dreamscape the carousel replaces the zone, and can be detonated for large amount of magic damage.

Nightmare: The carousel attaches to an enemy champion causing them to be slowed, and dealing damage around them.

W: Sanity's Eye

Lyria tosses a ball in a line attaching to the first enemy champion, and magic damage to minions. If it finds a target the enemy takes magic damage as they move, and receiving damage increases this amount up to 50% of the base. If cast in Dreamscape all enemies are revealed for 3 seconds after the duration, and leave bleeding trails granting allies increased movespeed.

Nightmare: The ball becomes a pulsing Eye that deals the damage in an area, and giving vision in an area around the target.

E: Grim Devices Lyria creates a evil bouncing jack that she throws in a straight line. Enemies it hits are blinded briefly, and take physical damage. If This is cast from Dreamscape she spawns a jack for each enemy champion moving around the zone 1 time. Damage from additional jacks is reduced by 50%.

Nightmare: The jacks stick to the first enemy champion. Dealing their damage as a bleed over 4 seconds instead, and reducing their AD and AP by a small amount.

R: Dreamscape Lyria disperses into a large circle becoming untargetable. Enemies entering the zone cannot move out of it for 7 seconds, and Lyria can cast one ability before being silenced for the duration.

Nightmare: Grants the Dreamscape spell Nightmare effects.


**Lore: **

Lyria was a young child when she first entered her dreams. In them she was a powerful mage who made everyone happy with candy and toys. She didn't know the dangers in her dreams. The shadows that hunger in the dark awaiting the innocent soul to wander through. Then, she met a curious creature called Sabriel. He was just a shadow in her otherwise colorful child-like dreams, and when she tried to talk to him he vanished into nothing. One night as she was sleeping away in her dreams. She called out to him, "Sabriel, the Lady of this Kingdom summons you!"

He appeared out of the colors of her imagination like a darkening of light. His voice was barely a whisper, but seemingly a whisper right in her ear, "What do you wish of me, Lady?"

Her child eyes held nothing but innocence as she gazed down, trying to sound like a high lady, "Sabriel, You are not one of the Gumdrop people, so why do you stay here?" In her own mind she thought she sounded quite like one of the High Nobles of Noxus she heard at one of her mother's parties. To Sabriel, she sounded like a child, a child who had made a grave mistake.

Sabriel gathered his form, and stepped out from the dark colors. His graceful form seemed to be made of smoke in the shape of a handsome man. His eyes held the color of dimming coals, and his hair a black, swirling ash. "I wanted to be close to you, My Lady," He said soothingly, "Your colors and light are so beautiful. We don't have them in my home."

Lyria felt sad for the man. His red eyes seemed so lost, and she decided that she would help him. Drawing herself taller she spoke "Well then I'll just have to bring colors AND light there! Everyone should have color." Sabriel smiled warmly, and reached out with his hand.

"Then I should stay here to protect your world while you go change mine." and when she touched his hand. The light all around fell away, and she found herself in a place of nightmares.

Many Years Later.....

A young summoner always had strange dreams, but for the last few nights his dreams were of a beautiful, young girl. Tonight was no different, but he decided he would talk to her this time. When he opened his eyes in the dream he saw her. The lithe body of a girl not quite a woman. Her hair was light a swirling smoke dyed yellow and purple. Yet, it was her eyes that always held him; those spheres of deep blue with strange symbols of gold.

"Why do I keep dreaming of you, girl?" He asked her, and she tilted her head to him. The strange smoke that seemed to make up her form seemed to become more solid suddenly.

"Because I need help. Will you help me?" She said, her voice sounded so far, and the young man was surprised at her speaking.

"How can I help you?" He asked his hands reaching out towards her. Her form becoming more real as he approached. She smiled at him.

"Call to me and I will be saved. Call me my Lady Lyria." She seemed to cry out in fear and desperation. His heart pounded as he reached for her, and although his mind seemed to be buzzing oddly he ignored it. How could he leave such a innocent girl if he could help her.

"Come forth, Lady Lyria, I will give my life to help you." and his hands touched hers. Suddenly he was awake, and in the room was the girl he had seen in his dreams. No longer surrounded in smoke and fog. She stretched her body, and shook her long, swirling hair.

"Have you ever wondered how real dreams, and nightmares are, boy?" She asked, her voice cold and sharp. The man felt his limbs begin to grow numb. He reached up towards his face, and found it to be cold and covered in sweat. Lyria picked up a small object on his floor, a simple metal jack. She spun it between her fingers.

"What is happening to me? What are you!?!" His voice was faint, and chilled. His hands flopped down to his sides, and when his head fell back he saw a bloody eye looking down at him. Out of the corner of his eye he saw the jack smoke and glow red. A smile on the girl's innocent face.

"Don't trust your dreams, because they are often nightmares in disguise." She said gently as she tossed the jack, and it slammed into his eyes.

20 Comments

EibonEthos10/10/2016, 2:49:23 AM1 votes

To give credit

@Regonas for his wonderful Dream Concept

Lordllo10/10/2016, 2:50:07 AM1 votes

Doesn't seem broken at all..........

EibonEthos10/10/2016, 7:41:39 PM1 votes

The idea of planes was what sparked this creation, and I'm sure there are more ways to use the concept.

MrNhbdy10/12/2016, 4:01:02 PM1 votes

This is kinda interesting, but there are somthings that need to be elaborated on or possible changed.....

  1. What do these planes look like, how do they exist or something else to help us understand them.

  2. Why is there a shadow creature/ being in the "Plain of Joy"?

  3. What deal could have persuaded a child to leave everything behind?

  4. "Plain of Sanity" is a overwhelming sight? Sanity? Typo maybe?

  5. I'm not sure if you understand the current state of the lore. There is no Institute of War, which means no summoner battles. The end of this champs lore should be rewritten.(Riot hasn't clarified about summoners in general though, so that's probably ok to use as a means for her to escape into Runetarra )

If you want I can post a link to a thread explaining the current lore. =)

  1. I don't feel as though I know who she was/ is as a person.
EibonEthos10/16/2016, 12:38:58 AM1 votes

Lore rework complete. It might be disturbing to some.

EibonEthos10/20/2016, 12:30:59 PM1 votes

selfish bump*

boo91010/20/2016, 1:11:54 PM1 votes

this is awesome bump

boo91010/24/2016, 10:19:23 PM1 votes

here is my review of yours, since you offered to review mine

passive- like thresh, which is cool, but i need some clarification- is it like every stack empowers ability's, or that you consume a stack when you use one- if it is the latter, that really kinda sucks.

q is fine, but the way you discribed it makes it sound like a huge area- i dont want to have my entire team chunked by this ability at once, and coming of cooldown in a few sec

w- borderline broken, with this plus an really any champ, you can get the champ fed quickly by puttting your e on a champ and having them burst it down(unless its like a lux or quinn passive)

e- the e is really cool, but maybe rather then spawn another one in nightmare form, have it deal splash every bounce- then the enemy wont just get hit 5-6 times in a row during teamfights

r- dont give it any damage- just reduce armor and keep slow- otherwise this is broken in teamfights

overall- cool themactically-ok in laning, but broken in teamfights

thanks for reading![slayer-jinx-wink]

boo91010/27/2016, 9:31:51 PM1 votes

thanks for reviewing my champ! changed up some stuff if you actually want to see