Patch 8.6 Notes Patch Notes

I understand that most people should be able to interpret the information from the patch notes with little-to-no difficulty, as is, and proofreading the patch notes is a secondary concern to actually producing content for the game. However, there are a few places in the patch notes that could use a minor buff to grammar. Here are just a few stand-out problems that could use improving:

Dead Man's Plate: "While we do so, we'd like to sharpen its identity as the item for fighters, who really shine when they get the opportunity to maneuver around a fight laying down damage" Fix: "While we do so, we'd like to sharpen its identity as the item for fighters who really shine when they get the opportunity to maneuver around a fight, laying down damage" or "While we do so, we'd like to sharpen its identity as the item for fighters, who really shine when they get the opportunity to maneuver around a fight, laying down damage" (these sentence options actually do mean two different things)

Kai'sa: "One thing that really stands out is that? she does pretty well in the games where she gets ahead" Fix: "One thing that really stands out is that she does pretty well in the games where she gets ahead" (this is the one that prompted me to write this post)

Abyssal Mask: "As a result, we're seeing a lot of mages pick it up as a 'get me through mid lane with no interaction possible' item" Fix: "As a result, we're seeing a lot of mages pick it up as a 'get me through mid lane with as little interaction as possible' item" or "As a result, we're seeing a lot of mages pick it up as a 'get me through mid lane with no interaction, if possible' item" (honestly, this one could be improved in a number of ways, depending on what the devs are actually trying to say)

I know that I can come across as excessively critical, at times. I do understand that game development is very demanding, and you don't always have the time to catch these. I just hope this helps.