Talon
His kit's damage seems to be placed in the wrong spot, and I'm not talking about his passive. His W damage is insane for something that cannot really be dodged if you're melee and don't have a directional dash, as it moves to him, so him moving aside you means it'll hit you. It's also got a fairly short cooldown (9 seconds) and a average mana cost, but Talon's got pretty good base mana (377 at lvl 1).
Now that poke hurts like hell early game, especially top lane.
His Q damage, however, is absurdly low. When he goes in on you with Q, you barely feel it, except his W damage.
My proposal?
Put his W damage into his Q damage.
Lengthen W time. The delay is an illusion. You still can't dodge it without a directional dash.