Chipping/Toiling Away at these Fan made patch notes (thoughts?)

https://mocklolpatchnotes.wordpress.com/ So its pretty messy atm, still need to work on formatting and fix up a lot of the text. pretty rough draft. I'm posting this now, half done because I'd like to get some input, advice, pointers from you guys.

The first one is the toughest. Once i get the gist of it and a good template down I think my next patch notes will be a lot easier/ better.

For now look at the pictures more than the text for the items