Can someone analyze my game for me?
Just need to know what im doing wrong or right.
Just need to know what im doing wrong or right.
~1:47 You used your knockup Q before your flash, when you potentially couldve gotten the kill had you swapped them around. Same principle as using E right before your last Q to close the gap. Regardless, you kinda threw your flash away, and arguably would've been better off saving it for a little later. Knowing that he had to leave lvl 1 and popped his flash was more than enough
~2:30 You tried to close an unnecessarily large distance with your Q's, so even if by some chance you reached him, you'd have a good amount of your damage gone. Get a little closer.
~2:50 Try to get the auto off after your last Q, everything else was cool
Side Note: Avoid farming with your skills (except for cases where you'd miss cs otherwise or if you're intentionally shoving) since it'll shove the wave. Doggy likes farming under turret
8:53~ If you're just going back to lane, TP to turret. It'll give a lower cd than if you TP to a minion
[sry gtg, this was all I had time to watch]
I'm don't exactly analyze games, but here's what I think. Also note that all times are based off of the video time rather than the game time.
I'm going to start with your errors, and I'm not going to go too in-depth on what you did well.
Lane phase was fine, so no comments there.
The main problem I see is that your team wasn't very coordinated. The major mistakes started at ~24:20 when your team started doing baron. Ahri didn't help you, and Varus had to back. You could have improved here by alternating who tanked baron. You died when Lee still had half of his health left. Since Varus wasn't there, your damage dropped drastically. If your team was more coordinated right here, you could have taken baron with no deaths before Nasus got there.
This occurred again ~29:05, when your team fought without Lee and Ahri resulting in a 3 for 2 trade.
~33:35, things went pretty well despite the fact that your team fought without you or Ahri. However, this could have went horribly wrong.
~34:42 you didn't really do anything wrong here, but I would have headed bot and taken the other tower.
~35:00 your team got caught, resulting in a free baron for the other team.
~36:07, you could have pinged for your team to come help you. You still got dragon, but you and Lee both died.
~37:20, multiple members of your team wanted to group, but you went top instead. You also wasted TP (presumably to stop Nasus from getting a little bit of farm).
~38:22 "push bot together i have tele in 3" is misleading and ambiguous. In this case, you meant 3 minutes, but I would interpret this as seconds if I hadn't already seen you teleport. This may have confused members on your team.
~38:28, request to group mid. I can understand why you recalled, but there are some things you could have done here. The first is that you could have headed mid to group with your team, which may have helped. The second is that you could have continued recalling, but pinged your team to back off or be careful.
~45:07 you should have used your tp to go mid instead of bot. There was a teamfight happening mid, and you could have turned it in your team's favor while Draven was still farming bot. You didn't accomplish anything by teleporting bot, so it was just a waste of a summoner.
~46:53 going in on Draven was a bad move for a couple of reasons. The first is because of Draven's kit --- he can easily knock you away from him and escape. The second is because Draven had red buff. The third is because you were too far away and wasted your Q getting to him. If you rewatch this, you'll see that you also ulted too early; Draven was not low enough.
~50:14 you and Cass should have backed off. You had just wasted your ult, their entire team was mia before you turned around, and the rest of your team was not there. If you were intentionally stalling so that Varus and Ahri could take bot, though, then that's another story. Still, you could have stalled without dying.
~52:50 you should not have fought that because Ahri and Varus weren't there. A quick ping to Lee might have gotten him to back off.
Also at about ~13:57 I would have helped Cass destroy the tower and then headed back top. Cass got it anyways though, so it doesn't matter too much.
That about covers it for your mistakes.
As for what you did well
And that's the end of my analysis. I hope it gives you some ideas on how to improve.