Most of the story seemed to take place on the operating table and it was difficult to tell exactly what the writer wanted us to be seeing. There should be more clarity or maybe even less word clutter in these descriptions.
LostFr0st5 votesThe word "clutter" was part of the atmosphere. We were reading the logs Singed wrote for his scientific notes. They need to be descriptive.
Mogarl2 votesThis, but also, because it's a first person view from Singed it's extremely informative not just on what we believe to be the creation of Warwick the wolfman, but also very telling of Singed's personality.
