Riot, I noticed Ashe has a really long lore entry...

Zmuecat·5/16/2015, 6:14:49 AM·87 votes·2,789 views

Let me rewrite it for you.

When Ashe was a girl, she really loved Archery. She practiced every day, and began hunting when she was fifteen. While she was out one day, she stumbled onto a cave and found the bow of Avarosa. Now, she leads her people as a Queen, and wants to unite the Freljord.

I think I'm pretty good. I might need to flower it up a little, but this is a rough draft and took me a whole five minutes to come up with. You should hire me.

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I'm sorry if that sounds mean, but I'm really looking to write for you guys and I kept it to your current standard of "Short, sweet, SUPER MYSTERIOUS." I wanted to keep her being a leader, but I figured if I left out how she wants to be a peaceful leader than we could create a discussion on her. I took out the part about being attacked by assassins because it seemed like too much. I kept the points of her weapon of choice (bow), where she's from, and what she wants to do, but I can take out her goal if it's too much.

Someone who cares about lore, Me

25 Comments

Lafouboy5/16/2015, 6:16:42 AM46 votes

20/10. Rito hire him. He makes lore just like you.

Deep Terror Nami5/16/2015, 6:19:34 AM17 votes

Lore isn't important to them. Let it go.

Loken Stoneheart5/17/2015, 2:19:56 AM15 votes

You messed up. You called it the bow of Avarosa.

It should be "found mysterious ice bow somewhere," with no reference to its significance.

You also mentioned that she's striving to be Queen.

This is far too much detail.

"When Ashe was a girl, she really loved Archery. While she was out one day, she found the mysterious Z-BOW! Now, she leads some people and would fight for them."

Drackolus5/16/2015, 6:24:24 AM12 votes

Upvote if you cri evreytim

Old Man Teeto5/16/2015, 4:20:42 PM10 votes

When Ashe was a girl

No wonder Tryndamere's right arm is a lot stronger than his left arm.

AbsoluteSadman5/17/2015, 1:46:53 AM6 votes

Still a little too long, i see 4 sentences when lore should be 3 or less.

What about "Ashe is a deadly hunter with a magic bow who fights for the peace of frejloird"

Alljoy5/16/2015, 7:37:58 AM5 votes

I'm sure Riot's Narrative and Lore Team coughtheirjanitorsonlunchbreakcough would find this inspiring.

Epic Blue Toast5/17/2015, 3:51:49 AM4 votes

dont give them ideas they will just say she has pasion like katarina

The Soulforged5/17/2015, 6:33:58 AM4 votes

This is prolly better because it actually tells us a story instead of giving us questions.

Jungle Lux God5/16/2015, 10:38:36 PM2 votes

Amazing Lore entry.

And it even fits with the current standard for lore.

Truly magnificent.

Psilocybinium11/7/2015, 2:08:07 AM1 votes

lmao

EverTokki5/17/2015, 8:27:59 AM1 votes

Amen. Riot please hire this guy.

SpaghettiTime5/17/2015, 10:47:49 AM1 votes

You forgot vague tragedy, so she has deep feels. Or were you saving this for the video?

Jayeto5/17/2015, 3:26:20 PM1 votes

most over the original champs still have their large lore so its understandable her lore is massive.