I definitely felt a connection with the guy. The part where he talks about all the bad stuff in his life is really REALLY well written in my opinion, like it's absolutely great how the writer wrote how a person would think in that kind of situation. I also related to the part where he said "and how I hate myself for feeling like I want to cry because I have it so much easier than some other people" - Zaun guy 2017, pity is a horrible emotion, extremely relateable great writing!!
Personally unsure how I feel about new Janna being a spirit, and I'm not sure how I feel about Janna as a whole but am perfectly sure about how great the writing was.