Act 2 of the bilgewater event (twisted fates real name?)
i am in love with what you guys are doing with my favorite mid laner and my favorite adc
im just beyond awe in terms of how you guys wrote this and how you added so much more onto the whole "graves hates tf because he left him" you added depth for example graves doesnt know what really happened that night of their big heist
twisted fate wants to tell him but he realizes its way too late for that Malcolm is stuck at the line after the breaking point
what i noticed in the first act and even more so in act 2 is how they dont really want eachother dead like when graves doesnt want tf to die from anyone elses hand and to some extent even his own which he says is because he wants a confession but there may be a hint that he doesnt want to see his old friend die... someone he might of seen as a brother
the same goes with twisted fate he does feel bad for a moment when he leaves graves in a burning building HE KNOWS GRAVES WILL BE FINE but he worries regardless
i am more than blown away with this work and half way through it i even considered that they should make this into a cinematic and how great that would be cause just by reading this it feels so alive
i would love to get a rioter to give me feedback on how im doing with this and i shall end this post by saying
is his name tobias fate? >:O 

) but I also really like the Morgana and Kayle storyline. I'd love to see more on that front as well. A Demacia vs Noxus event would also be really cool. With so many of the Champions hailing from one of those two city-states, there's a huge opportunity to further explore a lot of those champions, the world they inhabit, and come up with some nice new ideas to base an event around. But that's just my opinion