[Champion/Faction Concept Preview:] The Forsaken Abyss

Keagn·Mar 8, 2015·2 votes·956 views

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Forgotten by lands

Which had once shook beneath us.

Now we are nothing.

Absent from the world.

Forsaken by History.

Reduced to nothing.

Or so they thought.

6 Comments

FlintfallMar 8, 20151 votes

I like concept previews, as it generates hype, but is it possible you could add something else (at least in future teasers)? Right now I have roughly three sentences, of which could mean many things (though I'm guessing Freljord).

An image would really help here, keeping the brief tone of the teaser while also giving the reader a better sense of what's going on and what to expect in the following concept!

KeagnMar 8, 20151 votes

I was working on an image, but it fell through in what I wanted to present. And there was a bit more detail, but it got slimmed out by the haiku style. I will be following up here as I work out art forms for this concept. But undoubtedly, I could have done this better. I hate to direct you elsewhere, but if you're interested, I definitely recommend taking a look at some of my previous works!

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/2mIVVEyh-champion-concept-widget-and-bolt-sparks-of-ingenuity

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/qghAlJYe-champion-concept-helena-the-priestess-of-war-kit-dialogue-lore-and-art

I'll definitely follow through on this idea, I've been playing around with it for awhile now. I'm excited to see how people will react to it.

FlintfallMar 8, 20151 votes

As an outside party, the image really helps. Don't know how it fits yet with the concept, but it does give the post better visual appeal.

As for the concepts, I'm already familiar with Widget and Bolt! Will check out Helena though ;)

KeagnMar 8, 20151 votes

Definitely noted for my future concepts! And yes, I remember now, you had viewed it on mobile :P

I definitely appreciate the eyes on Helena, she's my newest concept, and just as much, if not more revolutionary than Widget and Bolt, just in a different way.

FlintfallMar 8, 20151 votes

Definitely radical, but I see (haha) a lot of cool stuff going on! I really like the Ultimate and passive, interested to see how they would pan out in-game :P

KeagnMar 8, 20151 votes

Thanks! Definitely what I was aiming for, but I'm still incredibly curious as to what she'd would look like in a live environment. I was also thinking of making some sort of resistance related to her passive.