Nymeriel, Zyri, and Ilyr, the Wild Ones

Nikushimi Zero·4/1/2015, 10:55:34 PM·2 votes·1,572 views

Health: 477 (+97) Health Regen: 5(+0.9) Beastial Rage: 100 Beastial Rage per Second: 1 Armor: 27.5 (+3.7) Magic Resist: 32.1 (+1.25) Attack Damage: 61 (+3) Attack Speed: 0.658 (+4%) Melee: 400/150 Movement Speed: 355 Primary Role: Fighter Secondary Role: Jungler/Assassin


Background: Nymeriel was abandoned at birth in the jungle. Despite the dangers of the deadly foliage and animals he prevailed. Growing intelligent, agile, fast, and strong. He grew up with a shared family of lions and tigers. The youngest cub from each became his companions in growing up and soon they formed a bond of love for each other like that of family and a best friend. He their brother, and them his sisters. It wasn't until his teen years that everything changed.

Poachers came to the jungle while they were out hunting food for the family. As they returned they found the humans and other creatures attacking their family. In anger they lashed out and killed many of them, but despite their strength and skill their numbers were overwhelming and they outlasted their energy. Instead of killing them though, the leader decided to keep them.

Caged and beaten they were separated and put on the road. The leader, frustrated with Nymeriel's lack of speaking from him being raised in the jungle forced him to learn the language. It wasn't until back in civilization that Nymeriel learned the purpose of them being spared. They were to put on shows. The beast boy and his sisters, the lioness Ilyr and tigress Zyri. They were forced to put on shows for people who laughed and enjoyed the pain and torment they went through, or so Nymeriel saw it.

The crack of the leaders whip as he made them dance to his tune was a constant for his years under the ring leader. Promised no harm would come to his family if they perfromed Nymeriel silently accepted for the safety of his family, and his sisters understood. It wasn't until the ring leader went too far. Ilyr and Zyri were being starved, and during a performance, collapsed. Enraged the ring leader used his whip to start beating them into action. Nymeriel snapped at the pain of his sisters.

Grabbing and stopping the whip with his wrist and forearm he stood crouched in front of his sisters as the onlookers held their hands to their mouths in horror. Some cheered to kill Zyri and Ilyr, and some were raging at the indignity of the ring leaders mistreatment. With the whip in hand he pulled it from the ring leaders hands and began to whip the ring leader severely. Finally, wrapping the ring leaders neck with the whip he whispered in his broken words "My family. You not harm. Die." And snapped his neck.

The onlookers who jeered for Zyri and Ilyr's deaths grew silent as he looked upon then and said "Not kill. My family. My blood. You die if try. Try. I challenge." His gaze made the entire tent silent. Taking the whip and wrapping it around his wrist he motioned to the ring leader and both Zyri and Ilyr pounced. Eating till nothing was left but bone, and even those they ate and gnawed at.

A stranger approached in a hood and spoke as Zyri and Ilyr ate. Spoke of a league of sorts where they would be protected as long as they fought. They would be looked after. On condition he spoke to the stranger and only asked for one condition. Protection of all animals in the jungles and forests in addition to what they promised for him and his sisters. The stranger agreed.


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Appearance: Lithe in appearance like that of an elf, but strong and agile. His eyes a savage gold like that of a wolves. His hair long and dirty blonde. Since his joining of society he wears this as his attire. The boots however only go up to his knees, not past them like in the picture, and he doesn't wear the gauntlets, but instead wears bandages around his hands and forearms like a fighter. He uses the whip he took from the ring leader as his weapon.

Age: 19 Height: 5' 7" Weight: 153lbs mostly muscle and very thin/lithe.

Movement: He moves with Zyri and Ilyr beside him. His whip wrapped around his arm while not attacking.


Passive: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/12/icons_11005_btn.jpg *Bond of Family - * Every attack Zyri and Ilyr switch off to attack with Nymeriel. On the third attack they both attack with his attack. Zyri and Ilyra deal 20% of Nymeriels AD and on the third attack they deal true damage. Their attacks come 0.2s behind Nymeriels as they leap. This leap can be dodged. Their attacks deal on hit effects.

Nymeriel gains Bestial Rage every second up to a max of 100. Each basic attack adds 5 Bestial Rage, and each ability that lands and hits an enemy gives him 10. At 100 Bestial Rage he gains the use of his Ultimate as well as Zyri and Ilyr gaining bonuses while at 100 Bestial Rage. These bonuses are lost once Bestial Rage is not at 100.

Zyri and Ilyr Bonuses at 100 Bestial Rage: Zyri and Ilyr will attack together each attack instead of every third attack and will follow champions for 300 units beyond Nymeriels range to attack them. Their leaps can still be dodged, but their claw swipes cannot. They will change Champion targets when their original target is out of range, or Nymeriel attacks another champion. Zyri and Ilyr will attack minions within a 600 unit range of Nymeriel if no champions on in the vicinity.

While at 100 Bestial Rage they gain Nymeriels AD and attack speed, but lose their true damage.

Note: Zyri and Ilyr can be affected by CC effects such as stuns and displacements, but take no damage. This can effectively shut them down. Zyri and Ilyr are the main point of danger with Nymeriel. With them CC'd it makes Nymeriel's effectiveness decline significantly.


Q http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/14/icons_13937_btn.jpg Ravage: Nymeriel wraps target champion up in his whip immobilizing and stunning them for 2s while Zyri and Ilyr attack them with ferocity. They each deal damage building up to 30/50/70/100/130 (+50% AD) at the end of the 2s for a total of 60/100/140/200/260 (+100% AD).

Cooldown: 15s Range: 400

Note: This attack, while targeted, is also part skill shot. When Nymeriel clicks on target champion he sends the whip out to snare them. This gives the champion time to respond by either getting out of range (As being outside the 400 unit range will make him miss) or having an ally champion stepping in front of them, usually and preferably a tank. This will snare them instead, but it is targeted and the champion must be clicked.


W http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/9/icons_8781_btn.jpg Unrelenting Rage: Nymeriel releases all of his rage and hatred into his next attack quickly striking the target enemy 5 times. The first strike deals 100% of his AD gaining 25% each consecutive strike for the final hit dealing 200% of his AD.

Much like Master Yi's Q, each attack takes 1s off of Unrelenting Rage.

Cooldown: 30s Range: 400


E http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/16/icons_15863_btn.jpg Assault: Powering his next attack Nymeriel deals his AD +50% of his AD upon contact. Also upon contact Zyri and Ilyr will charge the champion at the same time crisscrossing twice. Each time they strike the champion they deal 30/50/70/110/130 (+30% AD) for a total of 60/100/140/220/260 (+60% AD).

Cooldown: 10s Range: 400


R http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/16/icons_15995_btn.jpg Beast Mode: Disregarding the whip in favor of his own hands Nymeriel, Zyri, and Ilyr become a pack. For the next 10 seconds they attack together dealing their combined damage to target as well as gaining 30% increased movement and attack speed, 10% lifesteal, 20% armor penetration, and 30% increased to critical damage.

He is able to leap at targets within 400 units of him to attack them. Each basic attack reduces his Beast Mode cooldown by 1s.

Cooldown: 100s Cost: 100 Bestial Rage

Note: Wrapping his whip around his wrist he enters a sort of enraged state with a red steam like aura, his features change to be more "defined", and he lets out a growl and other sounds when moving and attacking. Zyri and Ilyr go to his side and attack with him in a criss cross pattern (Much like his E).


Quotes

Attacking: "My fury!" "Ravage!" "To me sisters!" "Pack, together, attack!"

Moving: "On way." "We move." "Together, go." "There."

Activating abilities: "Feast!" for his Q "DIE!" for his W "Together!" for his E "I...am...FREE!" for his R.

Jokes: "Call a man, breaks promise? Stupid. He die." referring to the ring leader. The joke in unbroken English "What do you call a man who breaks his promise? Stupid. He dies."

To champions: Growls kindly "Beauty. Natures form." To Nidalee. Growls affectionately "True is beauty." To Ahri. "A pack, together are." To anyone on his team near him. "Two legs? Armor man? What monkey you?" To Wukong. Unbroken English "You walk on two legs, wearing armor like a man? What sort of a monkey are you?" "Brother?" Growls with power "I pack leader. Work together though." To Rengar. To assert dominance. Nymeriel was raised in the jungle and so alpha males fight for dominance even if it is against "family".

To enemy: "Die like man!" Referring to the ring leader he wants them to die like him. "I pack leader! Win," Upon killing he asserts his dominance and says he wins.


Friends: Nidalee Rengar MonkeyKing Ahri Volibear Udyr Anivia Enemies: Rengar Warwick


CONTEST BONUS Two truths, one lie. A story shall be used and you shall decide which is which.

Nymeriel at a young age killed an adult tiger than threatened his life with nothing but his ingenuity and use of terrain. Using a spot the tiger could not and then proceeding to stab it with a sharpened stick.

Nymeriel, Zyri, and Ilyr grew up together, and while they always understood one another some say they even have a telepathic bond much like in the story of Eragon (With Saphira).

Nymeriel, at the ripe age of 7 grew so agile and quick that he was but a blur. He soon became known to explorers as "The Spirit of the Jungle" or "The Jungle Ghost.".

You decide which of these is fake! This shouldn't be too hard! Once judging is over I may say who won! ^_^

There you have Nymeriel, Zyri, and Ilyr. Let me know what you think. Any feedback is accepted.

To explain what kind of a fighter he is it would be best to explain here.

He is a high dps and crit character. He relies heavily on the attack speed and crits instead of actual damage, but building damage is viable. He excells if he can crit easily though due to his ultimate being able to benefit from it.

He is well suited to the top lane and junlge for his high speed and gank potential. While weak at first his high burst damage and ultimate can easily turn the tide. With Zyri and Ilyr to back him up he is very formidable to any tank top lane.

Note: I will change things according to how the majority of people see this character and the feedback I get. If I don't get enough conclusive feedback I may scratch this idea. While it was fun to work on I don't want to waste time on something that no one likes. However, I love all my characters and will do my best with what I can do. Thank you.

4 Comments

Nikushimi Zero4/4/2015, 5:31:38 AM1 votes

Just curious what people think and so I'm bumping this. It's been a couple days and checking back on him.

I plan on making some quotes he would use and a few other side things possibly in the future.

So, don't be afraid of letting me know what you think. Even if it is just to say you like him, hate him (And if you do, at least explain why :P), or if you do but needs some tweaks.

Anyways, thank you for taking the time ^_^

Nikushimi Zero4/14/2015, 9:52:16 PM1 votes

Bumping for feedback! Please let me know what you think! ^_^ Thanks! Vote up if you like.

Auryiel4/18/2015, 12:30:55 AM1 votes

I have a few questions about the kit

Passive

  1. Is there a timer of sorts on his true damage steroid or is the build up permanent? Just to make sure I'm clear, because I feel like I'm not XD Does his passive build up stacks like Diana's passive where, if you don't attack every few seconds, you don't get the benefits of it? Or does it work like Annie's passive where every time you attack, the counter goes up and when it reaches 3, both killer cats attack at the same time?

  2. How fast do they leap? I guess the question is more how easy is it to dodge the cats? And if the target is out of range when they leap but another target is where the first one was, do they attack that new target?

  3. When they are at 100 rage and you say that they ''follow'' targets for 300 units do you mean that if Nymeriel attacks and his target moves before the cats leap, they will change the location of their leap, for up to 300 units?

  4. When they are at 100 bestial rage and you say that their ''claw swipes'' cannot be dodged, what exactly are you referring to? The E?

  5. So, if I understand the passive correctly, after 100 seconds and until level 6 (if and when you decide to ult), you ALWAYS deal 300% of your AD? Since the cats ''gain Nymariel's AD'' and they both attack each time you do, this means that at level 1 each basic attack (without factoring runes or masteries or armor) 192 damage?

Q

  1. While you someone is under the effects of this ability, the cats do not attack when you do for the next 2 seconds, correct?

W

  1. Do the cats attack 5 times too?
  2. If I am reading this correctly, this ability deals damage equal to 750% (100 + 125 + 150 + 175 + 200) of your AD, is that correct?
  3. Can these attacks critically strike?
  4. Do they apply on-hit effects?