Cray: Hooligan to Society (Champion Concept)

Provokist··3 votes·1,383 views
Juuzou Suzuya

#Name Change: "Giligan: Prince of Thieves"

(He'd look something like the above picture, except with black hair, and more of a baggy eyed gray under his eyes) (Art belongs to the Anime Tokyo Ghoul)

Stats: HP: 537-1986 No Resource

Melee: 130 Attack Damage: 58.2-115 Attack Speed: 0.648 (+ 0 – 52%) Armor: 25.7-85.9 Magic Resist: 32.1 – 53.4 Move Speed: 345

Abilities

Passive: Running with Knives Due to constantly running amok with loose knives on your clothes and in your hands, you have a 15%(+ 5% for every +10 additional Bonus Movement Speed) chance to do splash damage (extends range of damage by 250) when you use an ability, for a total of 50% of the original abilities damage. Your basic attacks will drop knives on the floor after every third hit, retrieving a knife will grant you 10% bonus armor penetration, this effect can stack up to four times.

Q: Poke the Eye Out CD: 7 Seconds Range: 350 You rush forward onto the target, closing the gap between you and your opponent, and stab your opponent in the eye, dealing 55/85/115/145/175 (+ 60% bonus AD) in physical damage to the opponent. When you deal damage, you blind the opponent for .75 seconds, and reduce their attack speed by 10/12/14/16/18/20%.

W: Lets Play! CD: 12 Seconds Range: (Grabbing minion range is 200) Minion toss range: 600 (AoE range is 300) When used on a minion bellow 15/20/25/30/35% health, you pick it up, stab some daggers in it, and choose a location to throw it, dealing 70/90/110/130/150 (60% in bonus AD), killing the minion. If it hits an enemy champion, the champion is feared for 2 seconds, and loses 2/4/6/8/10% Movement speed.

E: Cant Catch Me! CD: 10 Seconds Range: Self Cast When this ability is used, you gain 20% Movement speed(+ 45% of Bonus Attack Speed) for 4 seconds. While using this ability, you drop daggers on the floor behind you, dropping a total of 3/4/5/6/7 daggers along your path, or where you're standing. Each dagger deals 50/75/100/125/150 (50% in bonus AD) in physical damage, and slows the opponent by 2% per dagger stepped on, the effect stacks per dagger.

R: Thieves Gamble CD: No Cool down Range: Global (for random selection) A random enemy champion is selected to hunt You down as a bounty. Both you and this enemy champion gain buffs against eachother when each of you are within 3000 units of each other. When either of the two champions kill each other, the bounty on Cray is automatically randomly changed to another champion. Buffs(Enemy):

  1. They gain 10% Attack Damage.
  2. They can ignore your Fear.
  3. When they kill you, increases gold payout by 50.

Buffs(Cray):

  1. Gains 15% movement speed.
  2. "Cant Catch Me!'s" daggers deal 10/20/30% True Damage.
  3. When Giligan successfully assists or kills the target hunting him, he gains an additional 100 gold from the kill, or 75 gold from the assist.

That's what i got so far, I'll create the lore for him later if people find him interesting enough!

12 Comments

Godotº1 votes

His ult is a mastery in the second page of the tree seems legit

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs] Also, which blind is it that he inflicts for his Q? Is it Teemo's blind (nonononoonononoono plsplspls no cancur) or like Quinn's blind? Seems a little strange for his W to toss a minion with like 50 knives inside of it taunting an enemy... Shouldn't it be like fear or smth pls specify

Provokist1 votes

His Q is more like Quinns, where it limits your field of vision (since he stabbed you in the eye) his W taunts because its kindof like "Hey, i just threw your allies corpse at your feet, watcha gonna do about it m8?" I mean i guess i could make it the first ability where it has like a 50/50 chance of Fearing or Taunting.

Provokist1 votes

Also, i completely forgot that was the name of a mastery, darn it sounded like such a good ulti name too for this champ lol

Godotº1 votes

dwdw 'tis all good btw u still havent answered my taunting question, lol. I really feel like it should be fear rather than taunting. Cx

Provokist1 votes

Ahh, hmm, alrighty ill go ahead and change that to a fear, i do suppose it would make more sense haha

Godotº1 votes

Another thing that I see unfit is the 10% movement speed buff that your enemy gets when the minion is thrown at them. Sure, it makes sense, but he already has an enemy buff (his ult), so why do you need more lol? It could be scaling in DECREASED movement speed (1%,1.5%,2.5%,3.5%,5% OR 5%,5.5%,7.5%,8%,10%), because that way it seems a little better IMO.

The "Hooligan To Society" seems a little cringey ngl and his name "Cray" as well. Maybe change (name optional but the "hooligan to society" definitely needs to change lol) these things? c:

His ult where the daggers behind him can deal scaling damage instead of 30% flat true damage as well. 10%, 20% and 30% seem more fair. Also you need to change your ult's description from the enemy being able to Taunt to Fear ("They can ignore your Taunt")

His ult's name can be changed from "Dangerous Game" to "Let's Play!" and his current W (Let's Play!) can be changed to "Corpse Toss"

Provokist1 votes

Alrighty, made some appropriate changes i think you'll like.

  • His name is now Giligan: Prince of Thieves

-I changed it to a slow, and each point you add into it adds 2% to the slow, for a max of 10%.

-The name of his ulti is now "Thieves Gamble".

-The "Taunt" is changed to "Fear" in the ultimate.

Anything else?

Godotº1 votes

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs] very good very good my pupil is learning lmao Also, put a "#" before the Name Change so it can appear better #Wew

Provokist1 votes

Gotcha that thanks for the help in the champion kit.

Godotº1 votes

NONONONONONONO U DID IT WRONG PUT A "#" before the ENTIRE sentence lol

like "#"Name Change: Giligan, Prince of Thieves aight?

Provokist1 votes

lol k i got it

Godotº1 votes

1 more thing; on his ult, you forgot to put Giligan as well

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